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評価: 44 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2015/02/08 14:20:56

kenny_yeppoon
kenny_yeppoon 44 2007年からオーストラリアに6年駐在し、リゾートホテルの総務及び経理業務...
日本語

2月3日AM8:35分からSPEEDI SHUTTLE を予約していた山田です。
私は当日AM10:00までバスの到着を待ちました。
しかし到着しなかった。
飛行機の搭乗時間が迫っていたのでタクシーで空港へ向かいました。
御社の責任でバスに乗れなかったので
クレジットカードで支払い済みの$27.86を返金して下さい。

ゲームソフトは到着時ビーニール梱包がなく開封された状態でした。
貴方はProduct codeを持っていませんか?
ゲームをインストールできない場合は代金を返金して欲しいです。





英語

My name is Yamada and I had a booking for SPEEDI SHUTTLE at 8:35am on 3rd February.

I had been waiting for the above bus until 10am on the day but the bus did not arrive.
I took a taxi to the airport because no further waiting allowed to catch the airplane.
I would like you to refund my bus fare $27.86 which I already paid by my credit card because I could not have your bus service by your fault.

When the game software arrived, I found it had not been binyl covered.
Do you have the Product code?
I would like you to refund my payment if the game cannot be installed.

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[削除済みユーザ] 44
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/09 14:34:02

元の翻訳
My name is Yamada and I had a booking for SPEEDI SHUTTLE at 8:35am on 3rd February.

I had been waiting for the above bus until 10am on the day but the bus did not arrive.
I took a taxi to the airport because no further waiting allowed to catch the airplane.
I would like you to refund my bus fare $27.86 which I already paid by my credit card because I could not have your bus service by your fault.

When the game software arrived, I found it had not been binyl covered.
Do you have the Product code?
I would like you to refund my payment if the game cannot be installed.

修正後
My name is Yamada and I booked the SPEEDI SHUTTLE at 8:35 am on February 3.
I waited for the bus until 10 am that day but it did not arrive.
I took a taxi to the airport because no further waiting [unnatural] allowed to catch the airplane.
Please refund my bus fare $27.86 which I already paid by my credit card because I could not ride your bus because of your fault.

The game software arrived opened, without a plastic cover.
Do you have the product code?
I would like you to refund my payment if the game cannot be installed.

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