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Camera & Imaging Products Association (CIPA) is holding "CP+ 2014" at Pacifico Yokohama from Feburary 13th to 16th.

CP+ is an exhibition that is related to Japanese biggest camera, field of photography image's technology, culture, and industry.

This year, 115 companies and groups are displaying along with the theme of "More Fun, More Beautiful. Evolving Photo Image Technology". There will be 956 small rooms and aimed to have 70,000 people who is registered to attend. Also, this expo is a place to introduce new prodcts, and it is expected to have world premiere that has more than last year's 35 types of machines.

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Camera & Imaging Products Association (CIPA) is holding "CP+ 2014" at Pacifico Yokohama over 4 days from February 13th to 16th.

CP+ is Japan's biggest exhibition in relation to technology, culture, and industry in the field of cameras and photography.

This year, 115 companies and groups are putting up exhibitions with the theme of "More Fun, More Beautiful. Evolving Photo Image Technology". There will be 956 booths with the goal to have 70,000 people registered to attend. Also, this expo provides a place to introduce new products, and is expected to have world premieres exceeding last year's 35 types of machines.

元の翻訳
Camera & Imaging Products Association (CIPA) is holding "CP+ 2014" at Pacifico Yokohama from Feburary 13th to 16th.

CP+ is an exhibition that is related to Japanese biggest camera, field of photography image's technology, culture, and industry.

This year, 115 companies and groups are displaying along with the theme of "More Fun, More Beautiful. Evolving Photo Image Technology". There will be 956 small rooms and aimed to have 70,000 people who is registered to attend. Also, this expo is a place to introduce new prodcts, and it is expected to have world premiere that has more than last year's 35 types of machines.

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Camera & Imaging Products Association (CIPA) is holding "CP+ 2014" at Pacifico Yokohama from February 13th to 16th.

CP+ is an exhibition that is related to Japanese biggest camera, field of photography image's technology, culture, and industry.

This year, 115 companies and groups are displaying along with the theme of "More Fun, More Beautiful. Evolving Photo Image Technology". There will be 956 small rooms and aimed to have 70,000 people who is registered to attend. Also, this expo is a place to introduce new products, and it is expected to have world premiere that has more than last year's 35 types of machines.

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Japanese Amusement Machine Association (JAMMA) and All Nippon Amusement Machine Operator's Union (AOU) are holding "Japan Amusement Expo2014 (JAEPO)" on Feburary 14th and 15th.↵
14th is only for the people who are involved with the industry, and 15th is open for public.

This time, 43 Japanese companies and 3 overseas companies are displaying about 1,000 games that are going to be released and items that are related. Also, the industry's new effort such as free plays, new business models, and electrical money are getting paid attention.

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Japan Amusement Machinery Manufacturers Association (JAMMA) and All Nippon Amusement Machine Operators’ Union (AOU) will hold "Japan Amusement Expo2014 (JAEPO)" for two days from February 14 to 15 at Makuhari Messe exhibition halls No. 1 to 6. Feb. 14 will be exclusively open for those involved parties, and Feb. 15 will be open for public.

There will be 43 Japanese companies and 3 overseas companies exhibiting about 1000 items this time including pre-release gaming machines and related items. In addition to them, the industry’s new initiative of the new business models such as free playing and the introduction of e-money will be attracting the attention.↵
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al62603

Setting hair in places such as Shibuya and Shinjuku.

Hair Make Studio Dears is hair set, cut and makeup studio in Kabukicho Shinjuku.

The number of girls who want to be cute even if it is not the special day is increasing dramatically.
Girls want to be outstanding and cute on the day of music live.
Fashionable girls do not cut corners on their hair styles.

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al62603

Setting hair in places such as Shibuya and Shinjuku.
[Get your hair set in Shibuya and Shinjuku.]↵

[Fam (ファム) | Hair and makeup salon in Kabukicho, Shinjuku]↵
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Hair Make Studio Dears is [a] hair and makeup studio [with outlets in Ikebukuro and Shibuya].

The number of girls who want to be cute even if it [it's not a special occasion] is increasing dramatically.
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Girls want to be outstanding and cute on the day of music live.
[When it's time to go live, every girl wants their cuteness to stand out --]↵
Fashionable girls do not cut corners on their hair styles.↵
[when it comes to fashion, you can't afford to neglect your hairstyle!]

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al62506

Choose EMODA to be cool and mode style Gyaru!

The official website of EMODA which belongs to touchMe Collection.
Ena Matsumoto produce.

The official website of SHIBUYA109.
It will offer you the shops' latest news, recommended items, good-value information, and event information♪
You can also view the shop list, floor guide, and informations.

SHIBUYA109 is Gyaru's holy ground! It is no exaggeration to say that Japanese Gyaru trends start from here.

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al62506

Choose EMODA to be cool and mode style Gyaru!

The official website of EMODA which had made its appearance on touchMe Collection.
Produced by Ena Matsumoto.

This is an official website of SHIBUYA109.
It offers the information of good-values and events, and the latest shop news and item recommendations up-to-date♪
You can also view the shop list, floor guide, and information.

SHIBUYA109 is Gyaru's holy ground! It is no exaggeration to say that Japanese Gyaru trends originate in here.

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al62005

The Punk style of plaid × leopard print !

I like light sneaker type, and always buy it right away when I find pretty platform shoes.

Choose platform sneakers when the style is easy-going.

She wear personalized shocking pink overalls and yellow socks stylishly!

Kary Pamyu Pamyu's existance itself is the Cawaii.

She doesn't cut corners in her fahion even though when it is easy-going style. She is the fashion icon that represent Japan.

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al62005

The Punk style in check × leopard print !

I like a light sneaker type, so I always buy one when I find pretty thick-soled shoes of the type.

Choose thick-soled sneakers with an easy style!

She wear well in a unique color combination of shocking pink overalls and yellow socks!

Kary Pamyu Pamyu's existance itself is the Kawaii.

She, who never cut corners even in an easy style, is the fashion icon representing Japan.

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al61804

Innocent World is the brand that designer Yumi Hujiwara who was inspired by European Classical Style created. The brand is based on elgance and cuteness, and it offers princess style for the new age.

The confectionery pattern is fun to even just looking at it.
Just wearing it makes you happy to go out.
You must check confectionery patterns that many brands offer!

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al61804

Innocent World is the brand created by designer Yumi Hujiwara who was inspired by European classical style. The brand is based on elgance and cuteness, and it offers princess style for the new age.

The confectionery pattern is fun to just look at.
Just wearing it makes you happy to go out.
You must check confectionery patterns that many brands offer!

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This price is a special price which is only for you, so not charging the shipping fee is difficult.
I am receiving other offer from people who want it too.
However, I can send it for free if it is via air mail.

If you are going to be so happy, I would like to do anything!
The ◇ has arrived today, and I measured the total amount of your items.
The weight was ☆ so the shipping fee is free. (If you would like to save the shipping fee, shipping fee of e-Packet is ◯, but I am worried because the limit for the insurance is ◯)

I looked around many stores and managed to find one. If you want to, I can resend ◇.

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This price is a special one only for you, so not charging the shipping fee is difficult.
I am receiving other offers from people who want it too.
However, I can send it for ◯ via air mail.

If you are going to be so happy, I would like to do anything!
The ◇ has arrived today, and I measured the total amount of your items.
The weight was ☆ so the shipping fee is ◯. (If you would like to save the shipping fee, shipping fee of e-Packet is ◯, but I am worried because the insurance limit is ◯)

I looked around many stores and managed to find one. If you want, I can resend ◇.

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f0704
あなたのアドバイスに従って、これらの商品を1月14日に返品しました。
返品は、どの過程でしょうか？
返品理由：説明書が日本語です。英語かフランス語がないならば返金をお願いします。

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f0704
あなたのアドバイスに従って、これらの商品を1月14日に返品しました。
返品は受取りましたか？
返品理由：説明書が日本語です。英語かフランス語がないならば返金をお願いします。

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How to keep the towel A longer. If you really have to use softner, use the one that does not contain oil. A absorbs moisture very well, but please wash it by itself first since it may contain tiny dusts that was produced while manufacturing it. Even for the towels that you may not use immediately, please wash it before you put it away since it may cause decolorization. The fiber may get stucked if you dry it under the sun without squeezing it well or squeezing too much. Before you dry it under the sun, please do the following: spread the towel after spin‐drying, swing it in the air to make it softer, and pull it soltly.

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How to keep the towel A longer. If you really have to use softener, use the one that does not contain oil. A absorbs moisture very well, but please wash it by itself first since it may contain tiny dusts that was produced while manufacturing it. Even for the towels that you may not use immediately, please wash it before you put it away since it may cause decolorization. The fiber may get stucked if you dry it under the sun without squeezing it well or squeezing too much. Before you dry it under the sun, please do the following: spread the towel after spin‐drying, swing it in the air to make it softer, and pull it (soltly).

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ベトナムの病院やクリニックに行く事は、ほとんど行列や不必要な待ち時間につながる。Yton.vnはこのプロセスの効率を上げている。

このモデルの問題は、Yton.vnのスタッフがクリニックを渡り歩き、この形式に参加するように医者を説得しなければならない事だ。Yton.vnがマーケットにオンラインのアポシステムを教えている第一人者であるため、これも一つの機会ではある。

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ベトナムの病院やクリニックに行く事は、ほとんど行列や不必要な待ち時間につながる。Yton.vnはこのプロセスの効率を上げている。

このモデルの問題は、Yton.vnのスタッフがクリニックを渡り歩き、この形式に参加するように医者を説得しなければならない事だ。Yton.vnがマーケットにオンラインの予約システムを取り入れる事を教えている第一人者であるため、これも一つの機会ではある。

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Yton.vnで、ベトナムの医者の予約をする。

フランスの医療システムは素晴らしいです。フランス市民は、チップの付いているカードをもらい、それは彼らの全ての病歴を追跡出来るだけではなく、クレジットカード・保険・好きな医者や病院の情報も入っています。
東南アジアの人々にとって、これはとても凄い事です。ベトナムにこのシステムが出来るのはまだまだ年月がかかるだろう。だからこそ、ベトナムでの医療のスタートアップを見つけるのは面白い。去年、医療のソーシャルネットワークを築きあげようとしているスタートアップのWish.vnについて、私達は記事を書いた。残念ながら、そのスタートアップは成功しなかった。しかしながら、Yton.vn は今でも頑張っている。

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Yton.vnで、ベトナムの医者の予約をする。

フランスの医療システムは素晴らしい。フランス国民は、チップの付いているカードをもらい、それは彼らの全ての病歴を追跡出来るだけではなく、クレジットカード・保険・好きな医者や病院の情報も入っている。
東南アジアの人々にとって、これはとても凄い事です。ベトナムにこのシステムが出来るのはまだまだ年月がかかるだろう。だからこそ、ベトナムでの医療のスタートアップを見つけるのは面白い。去年、医療のソーシャルネットワークを築きあげようとしているスタートアップのWish.vnについて、私達は記事を書いた。残念ながら、そのスタートアップは成功しなかった。しかしながら、Yton.vn は今でも頑張っている。

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Yton.vnは、ソーシャルメディアへ進化しようとしていて、それはWish.vnに似た視点に示唆するかもしれない。違いは、Wish.vnが医者のアポに基盤をおいて始めなかった事だ。そのため、Yton.vnは現在のデータとユーザベースを利用し、ユーザがクリニックを評価・彼らの体験を共有・他の健康に興味のある人々と話をすることを可能にすることによってソーシャル化しようとしている。Yton.vnチームは、このソーシャルメディアの要素は、予約システムの基礎を補助するだろうと話している。
Yton.vn周囲の情報によると、スタートアップへの名前のない金融サポートは医療会社であり、将来は彼らが医療スタートアップを促進していくかもしれない。

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Yton.vnは、ソーシャルメディアへ進化を目指しており、それはWish.vnに似た視点に示唆するかもしれない。違いは、Wish.vnが医者のアポに基盤をおいて始めなかった事だ。そのため、Yton.vnは現在のデータとユーザベースを利用し、ユーザがクリニックを評価・彼らの体験を共有・他の健康に興味のある人々と話をすることを可能にすることによってソーシャル化しようとしている。Yton.vnチームは、このソーシャルメディアの要素は、予約システムの基礎を補助するだろうと話している。
Yton.vn周囲の情報によると、スタートアップへの匿名の資金援助者は医療会社であり、将来は彼らが医療スタートアップの促進団体を開始するかもしれないということだ。

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-以下全ての情報をファックスで送付すること：
--あなたの運転免許証の裏表が読める状態のコピー、もしくは政府から支給されている他の身分証明書。
--最新のクレジットカード明細、銀行明細、もしくは公益事業の明細。あなたの名前と送付先の住所が見えるもので、さらにあなたのeBayのアカウントと同じ情報であるもの。
--eBayに掲載されている商品をを購入した書類（製造者の請求書もしくはレシート）
--あなたの提出するそれぞれの書類に、あなたの名前とIDが明記されているのを確認すること。また、あなたの提出する書類が現在のもので、有効かつ読みやすいものであるのを確認すること。

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-以下全ての情報をファックスで送付すること：
--あなたの運転免許証の裏表が読める状態のコピー、もしくは政府から支給されている他の身分証明書。
--最新のクレジットカード明細、銀行明細、もしくは公益事業の明細。あなたの名前と送付先の住所が見えるもので、さらにあなたのeBayのアカウントと同じ情報であるもの。
--eBayに掲載されている商品を購入した書類（製造者の請求書もしくはレシート）
--あなたの提出するそれぞれの書類に、あなたの名前とIDが明記されているのを確認すること。また、あなたの提出する書類が現在のもので、有効かつ読みやすいものであるのを確認すること。

元の翻訳
返事を待っている間に出来る事：

あなたの済ませた全ての事柄を確認し、後々確認できる情報を提供しなさい。
目録を更新しなさい。
顧客の連絡先を監視し、どんな顧客問題も解決しなさい。
あなたの顧客からのフィードバックをもらいなさい。

あなたの販売実績をどうやって上げるか学びなさい。

あなたはこう書きました：

販売実績の良くない人を停職させなさい。

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返事を待っている間に出来る事：

既に発送された商品を確認し、追跡情報をお知らせください。
在庫状況を更新してください。
顧客の連絡先を監視し、どんな顧客問題も解決しなさい。
あなたの顧客からのフィードバックをもらいなさい。

あなたの販売実績をどうやって上げるか学びなさい。

あなたはこう書きました：

販売実績の良くない人を停職させなさい。

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Hello everyone!
My name is F.
I am a Japanese who lives in Tokyo.
In Japan, there are many detailed, artistic, and amazing items.
On the other hand, there are some unique and funny items.
I would like to introduce Japanese items to the world by YouTube.
I can read English, but cannot speak.
I am not used to English, but I will do my best.
I am sorry if my pronounciation is difficult to understand.
I am going to upload many items, so please add my channel if you like it.
Thank you for always watching my channel.

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Hello everyone!
My name is F.
I am a Japanese who lives in Tokyo.
In Japan, there are many delicate, artistic, and amazing items.
On the other hand, there are also some unique and funny items.
I would like to introduce Japanese items to the world by YouTube.
I can read English, but cannot speak.
I will do my best to practice a lot of English conversations from now on.
I am sorry if my pronunciation is difficult to understand.
I am going to upload many items, so please subscribe my channel if you like it.
Thank you for watching my channel all the time.

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We would like to order a lot of your product.

The budget is about $5000.

Would you sell your product with discounted price?
If you can sell your product with discounted price, we will continuously buy from you.

I will pay wither by Paypal or credit card.
The delivery place is Portland.

We are looking for your reply.

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We would like to order a lot of your product.

The budget is about $5000.

Would you sell your product with discounted price?
If you can sell your product with discounted price, we will continuously buy from you.

I will pay either by Paypal or credit card.
The shipping address is Portland.

We are looking for your reply.

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This is a notification of postponing the delivery date.
A stain was found on the item that was going to be shipped today.
After the shipment, I will give you the tracking number.
I apologize for the inconvenience.

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This is a notification of postponing the delivery date.
A stain was found on the item that was going to be shipped today.
[missing text]↵
After the shipment, I will give you the tracking number.
I apologize for the inconvenience.

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To Whom It May Concern.

I am playing your company's game "A" and "B".
I was using my Facebook account to play both of the games. However, game "A" and "B"'s data got synchronized, and the data of game "A" disappeared one day.
Are there any ways that you can fix it?↵
I played so much of game "A" .
Please reply me back.

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To Whom It May Concern.

I am playing your company's game "A" and "B".
I was playing both of the games through the same Facebook account. However, game "A" and "B"'s data got synchronized, and the data of game "A" disappeared one day.
Could you restore the disappeared data, since I played the game "A" so much .
Please reply me back.