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Camera & Imaging Products Association will hold “CP+ 2014” for four days from Feb. 13 to 16 at the Pacifico Yokohama.

CP+ is one of largest exhibitions in Japan for camera, and technology in picture imaging field, culture, and industry.

Under the theme of “more joyful, more beautiful, and progressive photo technology” of this year, booths from 115 companies and organizations will be participating. The organizer is targeting to gather visitors of 70,000. Moreover, the exhibition offers an opportunity to announce new products, so they are expected to have world premiere of more than 35 models in last year.

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Camera & Imaging Products Association will hold “CP+ 2014” for four days from Feb. 13 to 16 at the Pacifico Yokohama.

CP+ is the largest exhibitions in Japan for camera, and technology in picture imaging field, culture, and industry.

Under the theme of “more joyful, more beautiful, and progressive photo technology” of this year, booths from 115 companies and organizations will be participating. The organizer is targeting to gather visitors of 70,000. Moreover, the exhibition offers an opportunity to announce new products, so they are expected to have world premiere of more than 35 models in last year.

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This price is a special price only for you so it will be difficult for a free shipping.
I also received some other offers.
However, it will be possible to ship via airmail with a o shipping fee.

If you can make me happy then I will do anything for you!
The ◇ has arrived today so I weighed the total package to be sent to you.
The weight is ☆ so the EMS shipping fee is ◯. (It is okay to use e-Packet for a cheaper shipping fee of ◯ but the max warranty is ◯ so I am a bit worried.)

I was somehow able to obtain one from searching in various stores so I can ship ◇ once again if you wish.

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This price is a special price only for you so it will be difficult for a free shipping.
I also received some other offers.
However, it will be possible to ship via airmail with a o shipping fee.

If you can be so happy then I will do anything for you!
The ◇ has arrived today so I weighed the total package to be sent to you.
The weight is ☆ so the EMS shipping fee is ◯. (It is okay to use e-Packet for a cheaper shipping fee of ◯ but the max warranty is ◯ so I am a bit worried.)

I was somehow able to obtain one from searching in various stores so I can ship ◇ once again if you wish.

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1
I intend to put the ZINE inside sandwiched in the CD's jacket, so
If the number of pages rose, it wouldn't be a problem.

It's OK to have it reformatted for CD use, without minding the page number.

2
I think it will be alright even without giving any directions on how to print it.
Concerning the tunes, I accept your proposals.

3
In case you do an acoustic show, there are no drums in the cafe, ↵
how does your drummer, Mr C play?

In case of an acoustic show, can you tell me what instruments do all the band members use?

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1
I intend to put the ZINE inside sandwiched in the CD's jacket.
Therefore, even if the number of pages increases, it wouldn't be a problem.

It's OK to have it reformatted for CD use, without worrying about the page number.

2
I think it will be alright even without giving any directions on how to print it.
Concerning the tunes, I accept your proposals.

3
In case you do an acoustic show, there are no drums in the cafe, so how will your drummer, Mr C play?

In case of an acoustic show, can you tell me what instruments do all the band members use?

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How to keep "A towel" in a good condition for a long time. When you have to add fabric softener, choose the one without oil. "A" absorbs water well, but some dust may be stuck on it when it made, so wash it separately from other laundry at first. If you do not use it soon, wash once before put it away to avoid fading. If you wring it hard or dry without an enough wring, its fiber may get stiff. After dehydration, before hanging out the towel to dry, spread/ flutter in the air to make it soften / stretch slightly and smooth out the towel.

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How to keep "A towel" in a good condition for a long time. When you have to add fabric softener, choose the one without oil. "A" absorbs water well, but some dust may be stuck on it when it was made, so wash it separately from other laundry at first. If you do not use it soon, wash once before put it away to avoid fading. If you wring it hard or dry without an enough wring, its fiber may get stiff. After dehydration, before hanging out the towel to dry, spread/ flutter in the air to make it soften / stretch slightly and smooth out the towel.

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私たちの応答を待っている間にできること：

発送した項目すべてを確認すること。追跡情報を渡すこと。目録を更新すること。顧客との接触をよく見て、顧客の問題を解決すること。自分の顧客の反応を懇請すること。

販売パフォーマンスの向上の方法を学ぶこと。


あなたの記入：
販売パフォーマンスのレベルが低かったため、停止している。

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私たちの応答を待っている間にできること：

発送した項目すべてを確認すること。追跡情報を渡すこと。目録を更新すること。顧客とのやりとりをよく見て、顧客の問題を解決すること。自分の顧客の反応を懇請すること。

販売パフォーマンスの向上の方法を学ぶこと。


あなたの記入：
販売パフォーマンスのレベルが低かったため、停止している。

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私は注文をキャンセルしたくありません。すでに支払い済みのカメラが欲しいです。分かりづらくてすみません。

１月２６日に三つのレンズをオーダーしました。私の注文した品物は１月２７日に届くはずでしたが、１月３０日の現在まだ届いておらず、配達状況は出荷準備中となっています。
お急ぎ便で頼みました。今週末までには商品を受け取りたいです。

あなたは私たちの取り決めたことが不満なようですね。

”こんにちは。すみませんができません。”

私は脅すつもりではなかったのですが、、、。私の国では、業者とこのようなやり取りをすることはなかったのですが、アマゾンに連絡してこの件についてどのように解決したらいいか、またあなたへの不満について連絡したいと思います。

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私は注文をキャンセルしたくありません。すでに支払い済みのカメラが欲しいです。すみません。

１月２６日に三つのレンズをオーダーしました。私の注文した品物は１月２７日に届くはずでしたが、１月３０日の現在まだ届いておらず、配達状況は出荷準備中となっています。
お急ぎ便で頼みました。今週末までには商品を受け取りたいです。

あなたは私たちの契約を守らない（受け取らない）と言いました：

”こんにちは。すみません。できません。”

なんて残念なんでしょう。私は脅すつもりではなかったのですが、、、。私の国では、契約を守らない業者とこのようなやり取りをすることはなかったのですが、アマゾンに連絡してこの件についてどのように解決したらいいか、またあなたへの不満について連絡したいと思います。

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Joshi-Raku [ Subject: Rakugo comic storytelling ]

▼Story
Cartoon about Girl’s rakugoka comic storyteller. In the scenario, there is a statement “this comic is to enjoy everyday talk whose degree does not prevent you from enjoying the cuteness of the girls.” So mainly, in each episode, the girls develop the story comically from ordinary tiny things.

▼What is Rakugo?
Rakugo is a kind of traditional story-telling art, which was established in Japan in Edo period and has been handed down to the present. It is also known as “Otoshi Banashi (Storytelling with punch-line )” or “Hanashi (Storytelling)” for short.

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Joshi-Raku [ Subject: Rakugo comic storytelling ]

▼Story
Cartoon about Girl’s rakugoka comic storyteller. As in the scenario, there is a statement “this comic is to enjoy everyday talk whose degree does not prevent you from enjoying the cuteness of the girls.” So mainly, in each episode, the girls develop the story comically from ordinary tiny things.

▼What is Rakugo?
Rakugo is a kind of traditional story-telling art, which was established in Japan in Edo period and has been handed down to the present. It is also known as “Otoshi Banashi (Storytelling with punch-line )” or “Hanashi (Storytelling)” for short.