翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/02/01 23:11:48

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日本語

Aタオルを長持ちさせるための手入れ方法。どうしても柔軟剤を使う時は油分の入っていない物を使用して。Aはよく水分を吸収しますが、製造時に出てしまった細かいほこりがある場合もあるので、まずは単独で洗濯して。すぐ使用しないタオルも、退色を引き起こす可能性がありますので一度洗ってからしまって。強く絞ってしまったりきちんと絞らないままの状態で干してしまうと繊維がギュッと固まってしまう事がある。干す前に、脱水後にタオルを広げる/柔らかくさせるために空中でバサバサ振る/軽く引っ張って伸ばす

英語

How to keep the towel A longer. If you really have to use softner, use the one that does not contain oil. A absorbs moisture very well, but please wash it by itself first since it may contain tiny dusts that was produced while manufacturing it. Even for the towels that you may not use immediately, please wash it before you put it away since it may cause decolorization. The fiber may get stucked if you dry it under the sun without squeezing it well or squeezing too much. Before you dry it under the sun, please do the following: spread the towel after spin‐drying, swing it in the air to make it softer, and pull it soltly.

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rasinblancsはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2014/02/02 06:02:13

元の翻訳
How to keep the towel A longer. If you really have to use softner, use the one that does not contain oil. A absorbs moisture very well, but please wash it by itself first since it may contain tiny dusts that was produced while manufacturing it. Even for the towels that you may not use immediately, please wash it before you put it away since it may cause decolorization. The fiber may get stucked if you dry it under the sun without squeezing it well or squeezing too much. Before you dry it under the sun, please do the following: spread the towel after spin‐drying, swing it in the air to make it softer, and pull it soltly.

修正後
How to keep the towel A longer. If you really have to use softener, use the one that does not contain oil. A absorbs moisture very well, but please wash it by itself first since it may contain tiny dusts that was produced while manufacturing it. Even for the towels that you may not use immediately, please wash it before you put it away since it may cause decolorization. The fiber may get stucked if you dry it under the sun without squeezing it well or squeezing too much. Before you dry it under the sun, please do the following: spread the towel after spin‐drying, swing it in the air to make it softer, and pull it (soltly).

こんにちは。get stuckedも使用可能なのかもしれませんが、shrinkやbe not sanforizedも良いかなと思いました。soltlyは訳として対応していないので適切な単語を探すと良いと思いました。日本語から一語一語訳されている感じがして少し分かりにくい印象があるので、忠実な訳にしつつシンプルに仕上げると良いと思います。

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emiinamerica emiinamerica 2014/02/02 10:54:21

ありがとうございます!

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