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元の翻訳
For 12 hours both A and B slowed down, and it is impossible to send video now.
This phenomenon also happened last October, does it mean the server checking? When is it completed?

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For 12 hours both A and B slowed down, and it is impossible to broadcast videos now.
This happened also in October last year. Does it mean the server is under maintenance? When will it recover?

元の翻訳
Hello, Janice.
On ID inquiy, we are sorry to register repeatedly.
Please delete duplicated one.
Let us know which ID and address are remained.
I want to buy A's book. How can I purchase it?

修正後
Hello, Janice.
I am sorry that I registered multiple ID's.
Thank you for deleting the duplicate ones.
Please let me know which ID and address is the remaining registered one.↵

I want to buy A's book. How can I purchase it?

元の翻訳
Dear, sir.

I appreciate your purchasing the reserved item.
Today we completed to prepare delivery label and packing box.
In addition, delivery registration number has been entered in My eBay.
It has been delivered on January 22, the date of sales.

When you cannot find any information regarding delivery more than 3 weeks from the date of receiving this e-mail, please contact to us (we will check the detailed situation and let you know).

And we will give a call on the date of delivery,

so we will ask for your patience.

Is there another products you want to purchase?
If so, it will be delivered together. In case of this, delivery fee will not be charged.

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Dear, sir.

I appreciate your purchasing the reserved item.
Today we completed to prepare delivery labels and packing boxes.
In addition, delivery registration number has been entered in My eBay.
It has been delivered on January 22, the date of sales.

When you cannot find any information regarding delivery more than 3 weeks from the date of receiving this e-mail, please contact to us (we will check the detailed situation and let you know).

And we will give a call on the date of delivery,

so we will ask for your patience.

Is there another products you want to purchase?
If so, it will be delivered together. In case of this, delivery fee will not be charged.

元の翻訳
I was informed that you are new manager of this branch. Nice to meet you.

In general, we send invoice every Tuesday and Friday.
However, in case of holidays, it can be varied.

Upon receiving invoice, please let us know the expected devliery date.
It would be great to send ASAP.
When you deliver, then inform A and B of it.

At the end of every month, let us know the inventory of products.
Could you send product images and information delivered to C which are to be for sale?
From now on, for more information on products, please contact with C.

修正後
I was informed that you are the new manager of this branch. Nice to meet you.

We usually send invoices every Tuesday and Friday.
However, in case of holidays, it can be varied.

Upon receiving invoice, please let us know the expected devliery date.
It would be great to send ASAP.
When you deliver, then inform A and B of it.

At the beginning of every month, let us know the inventory of products.
Could you send product images and information delivered to C which are to be for sale?
From now on, for more information on products, please contact with C.

元の翻訳
レンズはきちんと包装されていましたし、早めに届いて大満足です。
まことにありがとうございます。
レンズが届いてすぐに、私のPentax K5につけてみましたが、問題ありません。
既存のレンズと比べ、予測駆動 AFを18-135にするのに、時間がすごじかかりそうですが、慣れています。
レンズは無事に届いたし、最高の顧客サービスをいただき、まことにありがとうございます。

修正後
レンズはきちんと包装されていましたし、早めに届いて大満足です。
まことにありがとうございます。
レンズが届いてすぐに、私のPentax K5につけてみましたが、問題ないようです。
手元にある他のレンズと比べ、18-135を付けたときのオートフォーカスがあまりに静かで、少し馴れが必要ですね。
レンズは無事に届いたし、最高の顧客サービスをいただき、まことにありがとうございます。

元の翻訳
Ebayで買ったレンズ( Pentax 18 - 135 )が届きました。
１２月３０日火曜日の午後に無事に届きました。
１２月２６日の朝にEbayでレンズの注文をしたばかりでした。
このメッセージを送る前にポジティブ意見を書こうとしていました。
ところが、Ebayでは加入して５日がたたない会員は意見を書くことが出来ません。
また明日あなたについてポジティブ意見を書くようにします。
**できるだけ早くポジティブ意見を書きます。**

修正後
Ebayで買ったレンズ( Pentax 18 - 135 )が届きました。
１２月３０日火曜日の午後に無事に届きました。
このレンズを購入するために１２月２６日の朝Ebayに加入たばかりでした。
このメッセージを送る前に良い評価をしようとしました。
ところが、Ebayでは加入して５日がたたない会員は評価をすることが出来ません。
また明日あなたについて良い評価をするようにします。
**できるだけ早く良い評価をするようにします。**

元の翻訳
Set luminance to maximum, adjust exposure level, then you can make it lighter.
Face light that emphasizes your feminine beauty with 4 colours can brighten you far more even in the night.

3) Kind MAX
You can zoom up the screen, in accompany with this function you can check make-up condition of your head’s each side where you cannot view easily by pausing its screen. In addition, it allows you to see your hair, etc. slowly without spoiling your style.
Furthermore, with horizontal reversal function you can experience what others see you, and with vertical reversal function you can view your chin and neck where your eyes could not see.

修正後
Set luminescence to maximum, adjust exposure level, then you can make it brighter.
Face light that emphasizes your feminine beauty with 4 colours can brighten you far more even in the night.

3) Kind MAX
You can zoom up the screen, in accompany with this function you can check make-up condition of your head’s each side where you cannot view easily by pausing its screen. In addition, it allows you to see your hair, etc. slowly without spoiling your style.
Furthermore, with horizontal reversal function you can experience what others see you, and with vertical reversal function you can view your chin and neck where your eyes could not see.

元の翻訳
This protect jacket for iPhone6 is made with plastic and can cover the backside of device.

I can protect your phone from damage, light vibration and impact.

It is possible to link to lightning connector with equipping it.
It has a hole for attaching strap.

修正後
This protective jacket for iPhone6 is made with plastic and can cover the backside of your device.

It can provide the protection for your phone from damage, light vibration and impact.

You can connect the lightning connector without taking this cover off.
↵
Also, there is a hole provided for you to attach a strap.

元の翻訳
The order that I requested you to purchase by proxy has been canceled.
So I purchased this product on Amazon in person.
It means that the product received yet is not the one you bought instead of me.
Please receive it from the deliverer thoroughly.
Thanks.

修正後
The order that I requested you to purchase by proxy has been canceled.
So I purchased this product on Amazon in person [usage].
It means that the product received is not the one you bought instead of me [私がamazonから購入した商品].
Please receive it from the deliverer thoroughly [awkward].
Thanks [informal].

元の翻訳
配送用語であるDDPの意味が下記の中で何か教えてください。

ア） グローバル•バイヤー会社が記録上輸入業者として行う行為であり、輸入品の付加税及び関税をイギリス、ドイツに支払うという意味。この場合、輸入品の付加税は回収不可能。
イ） グローバル•バイヤー会社は関税の清算に関与せず、貴社か輸入品の付加税及び関税にたいする支払責任があるという意味。この場合、輸入関税は回収不可能

修正後
引き渡し条件の「DDP」に関して、下記のどちらか教えてください：

a） グローバル•バイヤー株式会社が登録上の輸入業者として行動し、輸入付加価値税及び関税をイギリス、ドイツ当局に支払うということでしょうか？この場合、輸入付加価値税は返還要求が可能である。
b） グローバル•バイヤー株式会社は通関手続きに関与しない。しかし、貴社か輸入付加価値税及び関税を支払う義務があるということでしょうか？この場合、輸入付加価値税は返還要求が不可能である。

元の翻訳
I have enough volume of razor blade collected for 5 years.
But the further times goes, the more difficult to purchase old blades, meanwhile the scarcity value can arise.

All wares that I am coping with are genuine. And there are various types of Iwasaki’s blazes.
If you have some concerns on it, I recommend you to cancel your order.
Other products will be released soon, which can be the best time to purchase.

You can find some rust on blaze, however it doesn’t mean unavailable.
Please refer to the attached images.

修正後
I have enough volume of German razor blades collected for 5 years.
But the further times goes, the more difficult to purchase old blades, meanwhile the scarcity value can arise.

All wares that I am coping with are genuine. And there are various types of Iwasaki’s blazes.
If you have some concerns on it, I recommend you to cancel your order.
Other products will be released soon, which can be the best time to purchase.

You can find some rust on blade, however it doesn’t mean unavailable.
Please refer to the attached images.

元の翻訳
Your request has been checked. But I cannot provide any reply on it.
Because it is a general concept to use products purchased in Japan in the territory of Japan. We have sold and delivered cameras manufactured in Japan to Europe so far, but haven’t received this claim ever. In this reason we decided not to apologize and refund.

Thanks.

修正後
Your request has been checked [why passive?]. But I cannot provide any reply on it [mistranslation].
Because it is a general concept to use products purchased in Japan in the territory of Japan [mistranslation]. We have sold and delivered cameras manufactured in Japan to Europe so far, but haven’t received this claim [word choice] ever. For this reason we decided not to apologize or refund.

Thanks.