f復権
私はBで再び販売をさせて頂きたいです。
再び販売計画を提出させて頂きます。
どうか検討をお願いできないでしょうか？
どうぞよろしくお願い致します。
今後は私は死ぬ気で業務に取組み、最高の売り手を目指します。
改善点
（パフォーマンスの低下の改善）
●オーダー不良率
①在庫管理を徹底します。
在庫管理担当者を一人から三人へ増やして在庫切れが原因で発送できな状況を防ぎます。
在庫更新を毎日実施していきます。
評価
61
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:17:43に投稿されました
f Reinstatement
I would please like to start selling again on B.
I re-submit my sales plan for your kind consideration.
I swear that I would do my very best from now on to be the best seller.
Areas of improvement
(Improving poor performance)
● Order defect rate
① Thorough stock management
I will increase the number of stock management staff from one person to three people to ensure that no orders will remain unshipped for lack of stock.
We will perform a daily inventory update.
I would please like to start selling again on B.
I re-submit my sales plan for your kind consideration.
I swear that I would do my very best from now on to be the best seller.
Areas of improvement
(Improving poor performance)
● Order defect rate
① Thorough stock management
I will increase the number of stock management staff from one person to three people to ensure that no orders will remain unshipped for lack of stock.
We will perform a daily inventory update.
★★★★★ 5.0/1
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評価
52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:32:44に投稿されました
Appeal for reinstating the selling privilege.
I would like to request you to reinstate my selling privilege at B.
I would like to submit our sales plan again.
Would you please review our sales plan?
Thank you for your consideration.
We will put our best efforts for improving our business and aim to be a best seller.
Improvement Plan
(Improvement of our sales performance)
● Order Defect Rate
① We will take thorough measure for our inventory management
We will increase our inventory management staff from present two persons to three persons and prevent the order defect due to out of stock.
We will update the inventory everyday basis.
I would like to request you to reinstate my selling privilege at B.
I would like to submit our sales plan again.
Would you please review our sales plan?
Thank you for your consideration.
We will put our best efforts for improving our business and aim to be a best seller.
Improvement Plan
(Improvement of our sales performance)
● Order Defect Rate
① We will take thorough measure for our inventory management
We will increase our inventory management staff from present two persons to three persons and prevent the order defect due to out of stock.
We will update the inventory everyday basis.
評価
57
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:29:44に投稿されました
Restoration of rights
I'd like to make sales at B once again.
I'd resubmit my sales plan.
Would you please consider my offer?
I won't let you down ever so please give me one more chance.
I'll take care of any matters to death to be the best sales person from now on.
points of improvement
(improvement of performance decline)
*Rate of ineffective Orders
1) inventory control thoroughly
We will increase the number of people for inventory control from one to three to prevent from the situations that we can not ship out due to stock out.
We will perform inventory adjustment every day.
I'd like to make sales at B once again.
I'd resubmit my sales plan.
Would you please consider my offer?
I won't let you down ever so please give me one more chance.
I'll take care of any matters to death to be the best sales person from now on.
points of improvement
(improvement of performance decline)
*Rate of ineffective Orders
1) inventory control thoroughly
We will increase the number of people for inventory control from one to three to prevent from the situations that we can not ship out due to stock out.
We will perform inventory adjustment every day.
★★★★☆ 4.0/1
②配達時にバイヤーが不在で配送業者保管され、保管期限満了で返品されるケースがあります。
これを改善すべく専門の配送状況チェックの担当者を一人配置し、配送状況を確認します。
配送業者で保管されていることを確認した場合はバイヤーへ連絡します。
こうしては保管期限満了で返品されることを撲滅していきます。
●遅れての出荷率
・lleadtime-to-shipを1日から5日へ変更して対応
また出荷担当者を3人から6人へ増やして、1日でも早い出荷を目指し1日でも早くお届けできるように努力致します。
評価
61
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:39:01に投稿されました
② There are incidents where the buyer is not present upon delivery and the package is returned after the safekeeping period at the post office expires.
To improve this condition, I will designate staff specifically assigned to check delivery statuses to monitor delivery status.
I will contact the buyer if we have confirmed our package being held at the post office or delivery company, and consequently eradicate the return of items after expiry of the safekeeping period.
●Rate of delayed shipping
・Changing lead time to ship from 1 day to 5 days.
Furthermore, increasing number of staff in charge of delivery from 3 to 6 people in order to aim for shipment as soon as possible and therefore achieving faster delivery.
To improve this condition, I will designate staff specifically assigned to check delivery statuses to monitor delivery status.
I will contact the buyer if we have confirmed our package being held at the post office or delivery company, and consequently eradicate the return of items after expiry of the safekeeping period.
●Rate of delayed shipping
・Changing lead time to ship from 1 day to 5 days.
Furthermore, increasing number of staff in charge of delivery from 3 to 6 people in order to aim for shipment as soon as possible and therefore achieving faster delivery.
★★★★★ 5.0/1
評価
60
ネイティブ
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:14:54に投稿されました
2) There are cases where the buyer is not present to accept the delivery from the delivery company, then product is kept in storage and passes the allowed period for holding..
I will appoint a specific staff member to check on the delivery condition of all items and confirm information.
When goods have been confirmed as being held by the delivery company, direct contact to the buyer will be made.
By this measure I will remove any returns caused by extended periods in holding by the delivery company.
[] Leadtime to Shipping Rate
I will alter the leadtime-to-ship ratio from 1 day to 5 days for countermeasures.
Also, increase the staff in charge of the shipping from 3 members to 6 members. I will endevour to ship faster even if only by one day.
I will appoint a specific staff member to check on the delivery condition of all items and confirm information.
When goods have been confirmed as being held by the delivery company, direct contact to the buyer will be made.
By this measure I will remove any returns caused by extended periods in holding by the delivery company.
[] Leadtime to Shipping Rate
I will alter the leadtime-to-ship ratio from 1 day to 5 days for countermeasures.
Also, increase the staff in charge of the shipping from 3 members to 6 members. I will endevour to ship faster even if only by one day.
・ Negative Feedback Rate とFiled A-to-z Claim Rate について
①バイヤーからのコメントをすべて確認致しました。
バイヤーが満足していない多くの原因は商品が届かない、商品が届くのが遅いということです。
私は以下の対応および改善をします。
・今まで通りすべての商品に対して追跡番号を設置して出荷します。
これでリアルタイムにバイヤーからの商品の所在の問い合わせがあった時に対応できます。
評価
61
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:24:31に投稿されました
・Regarding Negative Feedback Rate and Filed A-to-Z Claim Rate
①I have confirmed all comments received from buyers.
The common reasons buyers were unsatisfied were because of undelivered items and slow delivery times.
I will improve my performance by enforcing the following:
・I will continue to send all items with a tracking number as before.
This will allow real-time updates and notifications on delivery status when inquired by buyers.
①I have confirmed all comments received from buyers.
The common reasons buyers were unsatisfied were because of undelivered items and slow delivery times.
I will improve my performance by enforcing the following:
・I will continue to send all items with a tracking number as before.
This will allow real-time updates and notifications on delivery status when inquired by buyers.
★★★★★ 5.0/1
評価
60
ネイティブ
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:06:23に投稿されました
Regarding Negative Feedback Rate and Filed A-to-z Claim Rates.
1) I have checked all the buyer comments.
Most of the concerns are caused by non or late deliver of product.
I will implement the following to countermeasure this.
[] As I have done now I will always establish a tracking number prior to shipping product this will give me real time location information to provide to the buyers when asked.
1) I have checked all the buyer comments.
Most of the concerns are caused by non or late deliver of product.
I will implement the following to countermeasure this.
[] As I have done now I will always establish a tracking number prior to shipping product this will give me real time location information to provide to the buyers when asked.
評価
53
ネイティブ
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:20:42に投稿されました
About Negative Feedback and Filed A-to-Z Claim Rate
1. I have checked all comments from buyers. The reason why many buyers are unhappy is because the goods arrive late or do not arrive at all. I will deal with and improve the following:
In the same way as before, all goods will be sent with a tracking number. With this, I will be able to answer buyer's inquiries about the location of their package in realtime.
1. I have checked all comments from buyers. The reason why many buyers are unhappy is because the goods arrive late or do not arrive at all. I will deal with and improve the following:
In the same way as before, all goods will be sent with a tracking number. With this, I will be able to answer buyer's inquiries about the location of their package in realtime.
★★★★☆ 4.5/2
・今までは商品によって船便を利用することもありましたが、これを撤廃します。
今後はすべて航空便で出荷して一日でも早くバイヤーへ商品を届けます。
私は上記のことを実施して以下の目標を継続してバイヤーへ好まれるセラーをめざし、売り上げ増を目指します。
・Order Defect Rateは1％以下
・Pre-fulfillment Cancel Rate は2.5％以下
・Late Shipment Rateは4％以下
評価
60
ネイティブ
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:01:21に投稿されました
Until now depending on the product the use of sea mail will be abolished.
From now on all packages will be send Air/Sea mail, in order to reach the buyers faster if even only a day.
While continuing to carry out the above mentioned actions to be a seller liked by the buyers, I intend to also increase sales as listed below.
· Order Defect Rate to less than 1%
· Pre-fulfillment Cancel Rate 2.5% or less
· Late Shipment Rate 4% or less
From now on all packages will be send Air/Sea mail, in order to reach the buyers faster if even only a day.
While continuing to carry out the above mentioned actions to be a seller liked by the buyers, I intend to also increase sales as listed below.
· Order Defect Rate to less than 1%
· Pre-fulfillment Cancel Rate 2.5% or less
· Late Shipment Rate 4% or less
評価
50
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:05:59に投稿されました
I've been using sea mail depending on the product, but I abolish this.
I will deliver all stuffs to our buyer as soon as possible in one day by air mail for shipping out.
I will work out above things and keep up the aim below for preferred seller from the buyer, then I will set out for increase in sale.
・Less than 1% for order defect rate
・Less than 2.5% for pre-fulfillment cancel rate
・Less than 4% for late shipment
I will deliver all stuffs to our buyer as soon as possible in one day by air mail for shipping out.
I will work out above things and keep up the aim below for preferred seller from the buyer, then I will set out for increase in sale.
・Less than 1% for order defect rate
・Less than 2.5% for pre-fulfillment cancel rate
・Less than 4% for late shipment
★★★★☆ 4.0/1
私は販売ポリシーおよび契約、および制限のある商品を再度確認致しました。
今後は顧客満足度を最大にするために上記の内容をすべて実施して
最高の売り手を目指します。
・ビジネス経験⇒3年
・在庫は500000€
・月に1000個～2000個の配送対応可能
・仕入先情報⇒日本国内の問屋、生産者等からの仕入れ
・予想月間売上⇒1000万～2000万
どうぞよろしくお願い致します。販売の復権を
こころから願っています。
評価
60
ネイティブ
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 15:56:24に投稿されました
I will re check my sellers policy or contract, and limitations on products.
IN order to give customers the best satisfaction I will implement the above content.
I aim for the highest of sales.
[] Business Experience --> 3 Years
[] Stock worth 5000000 Euro
[] Able to ship/deliver 1000-2000 items per month
[] Purchase Information --> Sourced from Japanese domestic manufacturers and wholesalers.
[] Predicted Monthly Sales Volume --> 10,000,000 to 20,000,000 JPY
Thank you very much. I will do my best to reinstate sales.
IN order to give customers the best satisfaction I will implement the above content.
I aim for the highest of sales.
[] Business Experience --> 3 Years
[] Stock worth 5000000 Euro
[] Able to ship/deliver 1000-2000 items per month
[] Purchase Information --> Sourced from Japanese domestic manufacturers and wholesalers.
[] Predicted Monthly Sales Volume --> 10,000,000 to 20,000,000 JPY
Thank you very much. I will do my best to reinstate sales.
評価
57
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:55:23に投稿されました
I checked your sales policy, contract and restricted merchandise.
I'll perform all the contents above to get the most customer's satisfaction and be a best sale person.
*business experience 3 years.
* stock 500000€
*from 1000 to 2000 shipping available per month.
* supplier infomation Japanese domestic wholesalers / directly from manufacturers.
*expected monthly sales 10,000,000 - 20,000,000
Please take it to the consideration.
We sincerely hope for restoration of rights for the sales.
I'll perform all the contents above to get the most customer's satisfaction and be a best sale person.
*business experience 3 years.
* stock 500000€
*from 1000 to 2000 shipping available per month.
* supplier infomation Japanese domestic wholesalers / directly from manufacturers.
*expected monthly sales 10,000,000 - 20,000,000
Please take it to the consideration.
We sincerely hope for restoration of rights for the sales.
評価
50
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:46:55に投稿されました
I confirmed again sales policy and products that has restriction.
From now on I aim at best seller practicing all of above to raise up consumer satisfaction to maximam.
・bissiness experience→3 years
・stock is 500000€
・I can delivery aveilable 1000~2000 per month
・supplier information→ purchases from saler and procducers in Japan
・expected monthly sales→ten~twenty million
Thank you very much. I hope sincerely sales rehabilitation.
From now on I aim at best seller practicing all of above to raise up consumer satisfaction to maximam.
・bissiness experience→3 years
・stock is 500000€
・I can delivery aveilable 1000~2000 per month
・supplier information→ purchases from saler and procducers in Japan
・expected monthly sales→ten~twenty million
Thank you very much. I hope sincerely sales rehabilitation.
★★★★☆ 4.0/1
評価
51
翻訳 / 英語
- 2014/05/21 16:52:33に投稿されました
I have rechecked the sales policy and all products which has any special limitation or clauses.
I will maximise cutomer satisfaction by performing all of above and strive to be the best seller
- Business experience ⇒ 3 years
- I have 500000 € worth of stock
- I can make 1000 to 2000 units of delivery per month
- Information of wholesaler or supplier ⇒ Japanese wholesaler and producers
- Expected monthly sales ⇒ 10 million to 20 million
Thank you very much for your time.
I sincerely hope you can reinstate my distribution rights.
I will maximise cutomer satisfaction by performing all of above and strive to be the best seller
- Business experience ⇒ 3 years
- I have 500000 € worth of stock
- I can make 1000 to 2000 units of delivery per month
- Information of wholesaler or supplier ⇒ Japanese wholesaler and producers
- Expected monthly sales ⇒ 10 million to 20 million
Thank you very much for your time.
I sincerely hope you can reinstate my distribution rights.
