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Japanese (Native) French
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kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → French
18 Feb 2014 at 16:35
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → French
25 Jan 2014 at 20:48
kaolie rated this translation result as Japanese → French
16 Dec 2013 at 21:48
Comment
この訳では言いたいことが相手に伝わらないでしょう。形容詞の位置や前置詞 人称代名詞など基本的な文法の見直しを。
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → French
16 Dec 2013 at 22:33
Comment
apprendre l'adresse e-mail はおかしいです。 donner や communiquer のほうがいいでしょう。
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → French
16 Dec 2013 at 20:13
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いくつかの動詞が不適切です。 例えば confirmé des dommages , ここはconstater のほうが正しいでしょう。他にもinspecter , arranger など こういう場合には使いません。
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
16 Dec 2013 at 22:25
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相手方のほうにいく場合は aller chercher ではなく venir chercherです。
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
16 Dec 2013 at 22:56
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laissez-moi savoir とfaites-moi savoirが不自然。 シンプルにj'aimerais bien savoir.....などのほうが自然でしょう。
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
16 Dec 2013 at 22:10
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livraison directe ではなく remettre en mains propres のほうがいいでしょう。
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
12 Jan 2014 at 05:54
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → French
11 Feb 2014 at 23:18
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丁寧な訳、ただ少し不自然なところが。 En signe de ではなく en guise de ですね。
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
21 Jan 2014 at 18:10
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
21 Jan 2014 at 18:40
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
21 Jan 2014 at 19:18
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
11 Jan 2014 at 05:50
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → French
11 Jan 2014 at 18:47
Comment
正確で簡潔な訳だと思います。
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → French
11 Jan 2014 at 18:43
Comment
関税はfrais de douaneといいます。
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
11 Jan 2014 at 19:02
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
11 Jan 2014 at 06:03
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
11 Jan 2014 at 05:38
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → French
12 Jan 2014 at 05:39
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
21 Jan 2014 at 18:21
Comment
主語が統一されていないので JEなのかNOUSなのかどちらかにしましょう。 少し不自然な文です。例えば一行目 一例として Tout d'abord, nous tenons à vous présenter nos excuses pour votre commande ...
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
11 Jan 2014 at 05:07
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
11 Jan 2014 at 06:45
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → French
11 Jan 2014 at 06:41
kaolie rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → French
11 Jan 2014 at 06:50