Yae Kasama (viviking_1) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
3 items above are arrived though one lens cap is not combined out of three.
Please partly refund.

修正後
The above 3 items have arrived, but out of the three, one is missing the lens cap.
Please give a partial refund.

元の翻訳
20 shafts from True Temper had arrived here.
We didn't make any order for this, we would like to return them.
We are looking forward your reply.

修正後
We have received 20 shafts from True Temper.
We didn't order any of these, so we would like to return them.
We look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
20 shafts from True Temper had arrived here.
We didn't make any order for this, we would like to return them.
We are looking forward your reply.

修正後
20 shafts from True Temper have arrived here.
We didn't make any order for this, so we would like to return them.
We are looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
まだティファニーの格子組ネックレスの販売に興味をお持ちでしょうか。

期限が切れる前に買い忘れてしまったのでできるだけ早くご連絡いただけますと幸いです。

修正後
まだティファニーの格子組（インターロッキング）ネックレスの販売に興味をお持ちでしょうか。

期限が切れる前に買い忘れてしまったのでできるだけ早くご連絡いただけますと幸いです。

元の翻訳
We agreed regarding the fee.
Please separate the package.
We attached the label for returning shipment and screenshot of purchased screen.
Please give us your confirmation.

Please return only game machines.
Quantities of your purchase was 3 though you may return 2 machines as it was.
Please ask anything unclear.

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We agreed regarding the fee.
Please separate the package.
We attached the label for returning shipment and the purchase screenshot to this email.
Please confirm them.

Please return only game consoles.
Though the quantity of the consoles you have purchased was 3, you may return just 2 of them.
If you have any questions please feel free to contact us.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your quick reply.

- The expense will be paid when we meet next time by cahs.

- We are appreciated for trial manufacture. We are looking forward arriving of the trials.

- Thanks for testing regarding longevity of battery. We understand in the ultimate situation, the battery longevity would be only 100 minutes. Then in ordinary usage, how long would be the battery's longevity?
In case a doctor uses it for 10 minutes and 10 patients per a day.

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Thank you very much for your quick reply.

- We will pay expenses in cash the next time we meet.

- We appreciate your manufacturing samples. We are looking forward to receiving them.

- Thank you for the battery longevity test. We now know under extreme conditions, the battery would last only for 100 minutes. Then in normal usage, how long would the battery last?
What if a doctor uses it for 10 minutes and 10 patients per day?

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your quick reply.

- The expense will be paid when we meet next time by cahs.

- We are appreciated for trial manufacture. We are looking forward arriving of the trials.

- Thanks for testing regarding longevity of battery. We understand in the ultimate situation, the battery longevity would be only 100 minutes. Then in ordinary usage, how long would be the battery's longevity?
In case a doctor uses it for 10 minutes and 10 patients per a day.

修正後
Thank you very much for your quick reply.

- The expense will be paid when we meet next time by cash.

- We are appreciated for trial manufacture. We are looking forward arriving of the trials.

- Thanks for testing regarding longevity of battery. We understand in the ultimate situation, the battery longevity would be only 100 minutes. Then in ordinary usage, how long would be the battery's longevity?
In case a doctor uses it for 10 minutes and 10 patients per a day.

元の翻訳
2. There was mistake
Gateway is only for the zigbee.

3. It is to be considered that the electric equipments which are selling inside Japan shall be required to obtain approval of PSE.

As the O Module is supplied electric power directly, PSE approval is required, although it is still in the prototype state at this moment, PSE approval is not obtained yet.

4. We are adjusting the wifi type O Module to connect A cloud so far.
Please give us some more time.

修正後
2. There was a mistake
Gateway is only for the zigbee version.

3. It is to be considered that the electric equipments which are sold in Japan shall be required to obtain approval of PSE.

As the O Module is supplied electric power directly, PSE approval is required, although it is still in the prototype state at this moment, PSE approval is not obtained yet.

4. We are adjusting the wifi type O Module to connect A cloud at the moment.
We appreciate your patience.

元の翻訳
There are 2 types of Wireless modules which are the zigbee and the wifi.
As you said, Gateway is necessary in case you use only zigbee.

In case using the wifi version, Gateway is not required and connect to the access point directly.
At this moment, it is necessary to set the password and SSID of the access point previously in the Module software.
Therefore, we apply method that install the previously paired wireless router.
We are considering much easier method such as WPS in the future.

修正後
There are 2 versions of Wireless modules: zigbee and wifi.
As you said, Gateway is necessary only when you use the zigbee version.

When you use the wifi version, Gateway is not required and it can be connected to the access point directly.
At this moment, it is necessary to set the password and SSID of the access point beforehand in the Module software.
Therefore, we have applied the method of installing the paired wireless router beforehand.
We are considering about applying a much easier method such as WPS in the future.

元の翻訳
We are looking forward see you again after a long period of time.

The attached file is descriptions for 3-day meetings. The meeting will be started when all the members are gathered ( probably around 1:00PM) due to this reason, the starting time of this meeting has not been settled yet.
If it's possible, we would like to have a brief meeting with you, we would be much appreciated if you could let us know your availability.↵
I will arrive at the NY Airport in 10:30, then will be NY little later than 12:00.

As Mr. Tanaka informed you this meeting will be very important because there would be a lot of issues will be raising along with the A company will become a stockholder of the C company, therefore your support would be necessary for us.

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We are looking forward to seeing you again after a long period of time.

Attached is the outline for the meeting on the 3rd. The time is not set as the meeting starts when all the members are gathered (probably around 1:00PM).
If it's possible, we would like to see you briefly prior to the meeting. We would appreciate it if you could let us know your availability. I will arrive at the NY Airport at 10:30, and then in NY little later than 12:00.

As Mr. Tanaka informed you, this meeting is very important because we would be discussing on various issues resulting from A company becoming a stockholder of the C company. Therefore, we would count on your support.

元の翻訳
Characteristics

1)User registration and selection of the other parties are not necessary.
To use location information, user registration and selection of other parties are not necessary to send/receive photos.

2)Able to download the original data
Usually sharing pictures on SNS, the pictures are downsized automatically, [KISS] is possible to receive the data by the original size.

3)Easy operation for easy usage for anyone
In the screen, you see only [Lists] and [pictures] and just 2 buttons of [Upload] and [Catch], you can send/receive by only the single action.

修正後
Characteristics

1)User registration and selection of other parties are not necessary.
By using location information, user registration and selection of other parties are not necessary to send/receive photos.

2)Able to download original data
Pictures files are often automatically compressed when sharing pictures on SNS, however with [KISS] it is possible to receive data in its original size.

3)Easy operation for easy usage by anyone
In the screen, there is only [Lists] and [pictures] and just 2 buttons - [Upload] and [Catch]. You can send/receive with just a single click.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your inquiry.
It is clearly written as this item cost doesn't include takes, VAT shall be paid by the buyer.
Since we are not qualified to pay U.K. taxes, we are not able to pay.
For this reason, in case you are not able to pay the tax, please send back the item as it is.
When we receive the returned item, we will start refunding procedure.
Please read the descriptions carefully when you purchase the items.

修正後
Thank you very much for your inquiry.
The item has had a clear description that as this item's price doesn't include tax, VAT shall be paid by the buyer.
Since we are not qualified to pay U.K. taxes, we are not able to pay.
For this reason, in case you are not able to pay the tax, please send back the item as it is.
When we receive the returned item, we will process a refund .
Please read the descriptions carefully before you purchase the items.

元の翻訳
例として、弊社は売主に顧客の利益のために返品商品を可能な限り受け入れるよう提案しております。つまり個々の状況でもっとも適切な顧客サービスを選定することになっているということになり売主ごとに対応は違うことになります。

たとえば売主が製品を所有しているのにも係わらず所有していないと主張する場合には保障要求を提出する↵
ように助言することもできます。
いったん保障要求が提出されれば私どもは売主と顧客の両方からご意見をうかがうことができます。↵
そのため商品と発送についての詳細を返信していただきたく、その上で保障要求を提出するかしないかを決定いたします。

修正後
例として、弊社は売主に顧客の利益のために返品商品を可能な限り受け入れるよう提案しております。つまり個々の状況でもっとも適切な顧客サービスを選定することになっているということになり売主ごとに対応は違うことになります。

たとえば購入者が製品を入手していると思われるにも係わらず受け取っていないと主張する場合には販売者は購入者に対し保障要求を提出するように助言することもできます。
いったん保障要求が提出されれば弊社は売主と顧客の両方からご意見をうかがい、販売者には商品と発送についての具体的詳細を返信していただき、その上で保障要求を許可するか却下するかを決定いたします。

元の翻訳
卸しをお教え願えませんか？幅72インチ高さ60インチの窓です。カーテンは高さ70インチでもかまいませんが幅のほうは78インチから72インチであつらえられますでしょうか。できますと大変うれしいです。もし不可能ならば自分で調整いたします。
幅78インチ高さ70インチのカーテンが私の希望です。

修正後
卸し値をお教え願えませんか？幅72インチ高さ60インチの窓です。カーテンは高さ70インチでもかまいませんが幅のほうは78インチから72インチにしてあつらえられますでしょうか。それが可能であれば大変うれしいです。もし不可能なら自分で調整いたします。
とにかく幅78インチ高さ70インチのカーテンが私の希望です。

元の翻訳
信頼できる版権と知的所有権の法律と作品のアプリケーションについてリサーチすることをお勧めします。(下記リンク参照)
またはもし貴方のその作品に関してなぜ侵害の請求の勧告を受けたのか不明の場合は法的な専門家のご相談ください。

また、今一度私どものコンテンツ、版権と知的所有権方針をコンプライアンスに適しているかどうかご一覧ください。重ねて版権の法律と知的所有権関連に関してアドヴァイスができませんことをお詫び申し上げます。↵
あるいは貴方様個人のご意見をこの請求に関してお寄せいただいても結構です。

修正後
関連の版権とその他知的所有権の法律、及びそれらのあなたの作品への適用についてネットでリサーチすることをお勧めします。(下記リンク参照)
または、もし貴方のその作品に関してなぜ権利侵害の申し立てを受けたのか不明な場合は、法律専門家にご相談ください。

また、今一度私どもの利用規約の内、コンテンツ、版権と知的所有権規定をお読みになって、それらに適合しているかどうかお確かめください。版権と知的所有権に関して法律的アドヴァイスも個人的見解もご提供できませんことを、重ねてお詫び申し上げます。