NAOKO.N (tani1973) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello.

Thank you for contacting me.
I understand that the inspection will take some time.

I will be waiting for you to contact me with the results.
Thank you very much.

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Hello.

Thank you for contacting me.
I understand that the inspection will take some time.

I am waiting for you to contact me about the result.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Good day!
Thank you for contacting us.
We understand that it takes time to conduct the research.
We are looking forward to hearing from the result of the research.
We appreciate your cooperation.

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Good day!
Thank you for contacting us.
We understand that it takes time to conduct the research.
We are looking forward to hearing about the result of the research.
We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending me the pictures.

I see the picture of a dented cardboard box but I double wrapped it this time.
Is this box the one in inside or outside and which part is this?
Can you take another picture that I can see the whole thing please?

The item I sent you is the same as I posted a picture of.
There were no outstanding damages.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Thank you for sending me the pictures.

I see the picture of a dented cardboard box but I double wrapped it this time.
Is this box the one in inside or in outside? Which part is this?
Can you please take another picture so that I can see the whole thing?

The item I sent you is the same as the one in a picture I posted.
There were no outstanding damages.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
I sent a baggage quickly after I was dismissed from the hospital.
It is supposed to be arrived in 19th.

I apologize to you and I will discount the price of purchased amount by 20%.
Could you please deposit $36?

I will send an invoice from paypal.

Thank you.

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I sent your order quickly after I was discharged from the hospital.
It is supposed to arrive on the 19th.

I apologize to you and I will give you a 20% discount off the purchase amount.
Could you please pay $36?

I will send an invoice via paypal.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
After discharge from a hospital, I shipped the item immediately.
It must have arrived on 19.

I'm very sorry.
Since this is my mistake, I will discount by 20% to express my regret.
Could you please pay 36$?

I will send the invoice via Paypal.
Thank you very much for your cooperation.

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After discharge from a hospital, I shipped the item immediately.
It is supposed to arrive on the 19th.

I'm very sorry.
Since this is my mistake, I will give you a 20% discount to express my apology.
Could you please pay $36?

I will send the invoice to you via Paypal.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
It is not appropriate that you describe "in excellent conditions" of this.
That is exaggerated expression to make buyer think that the condition of item is good.
I bought this cause I believe your explanation of "excellent conditions".
The cause of this problem is your inappropriate explanation and I was force to buy a junk of quite low quality.
This is not proper transaction.
That's why you should accept my returning item and my asking to give me back money.

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It is not appropriate that you describe this as being "in excellent conditions".
It is an exaggerated expression that makes buyers misunderstand that the condition of the item is good.
I bought this because I believe your explanation of it being in "excellent conditions".
The cause of this problem is your inappropriate explanation that made me end up buying a junk in quite low quality.
This is not a fair deal.
That's why you should accept my return item and my request to give me back money.

元の翻訳
I'm glad that you could understand my explanation about the price.

When we add A and B, the total price is ＄ 489.54 . From this total price we deduct ＄ 35.54 (8%) therefore we sell it ＄450.
Furthermore sending by EMS is also free of charge.

As you can see the attached image, first parcel was arrived in NY on 18th March however its been hold for some reason.
It is certain that slightly late action of delivery therefore would it be possible for you to call USPS call center again to ask the situation about your parcel?

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I'm glad that you understand my explanation about the price.

When we add A and B, the total price will be $489.54 . From this total price we will deduct $35.54 (8%) therefore we will sell it for$450.
Furthermore the shipping cost by EMS will be free of charge.

As you can see from the attached image, the first parcel arrived in NY on 18th March however it's been on hold for some reason.
It seems that delivery is slightly late, so could you kindly call the USPS call center below to ask about your parcel?

元の翻訳
Regarding the account suspension we have received earlier, we have never listed or sold the item (A) in the past.
In addition, our account has been set as "Inactive" for the past 5 days.
I believe this must be some kind of mistake. Would you please kindly confirm?
Please also let me know if any.

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Regarding our account that got suspended earlier, we have never listed or sold the item (A) in the past.
In addition, our account has been "Inactive" for the past 5 days.
We are afraid that there might be some misunderstanding. Would you please kindly confirm?
Please also let us know if any.

元の翻訳
Our account has just been deactivated. We have not listed (A)'s items before and we don't sell it.
Furthermore, our account has been "inactive" for these 5 days.
Are you mistaken for something else? Will you check it?
Will you let us know if there are any other problem?

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Our account has just been deactivated. We have never listed and sold the item (A) before.
Furthermore, our account has been "inactive" for these 5 days.
We are afraid you might be misunderstanding something. Will you check it?
Will you let us know if there are any other problems?

元の翻訳
We're suspend our account earlier, the (A) item is not display or selling item untill now.
Furthermore, it's already in [Inactive] condition for 5 hours from now.
Does anything wrong with it? Could you please confirm it?
Would you tell me, if there's another problem?

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Our account got suspended, but we have never listed or sold the item (A) untill now.
Furthermore, our account has been inactive for these 5 days.
We are afraid you might be misunderstanding something. Could you please confirm it?
Would you tell me if there's any other problem?

元の翻訳
- I have settled the payment for the fourth order. Please kindly confirm.
- Is it possible to order a custom-made racing suit in the attached file? Please realize strictly the same. Also please advise the price and lead-time.
- How are those three orders I have placed so far?
- Is it possible for you to ship DUCATI jacket in the attached file within 2 weeks from the date of order?
Please kindly advise should there be additional fees that may arise.
- We appreciate your accepting our small amount of order, and I would like you to deliver the orders within 3 weeks from the date of order.

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- I have completed the payment for the fourth order. Please kindly confirm.
- Is it possible to order a custom-made racing suit in the attached file? Please reproduce strictly the same. Also please advise the price and lead-time.
- How are those three orders going I have placed so far?
- Is it possible for you to ship a DUCATI jacket in the attached file within 2 weeks from the date of order?
Please kindly advise should there be additional fees that may arise.
- I'm sorry for always making small quantity orders, but I would like you to deliver the orders within 3 weeks from the date of order.

元の翻訳
-I've already completed the payment for 4th order. Please confirm.
-Is it possible for you to make a custom-made racing suite of the attached file? I would like you to recreate it faithfully. Also, please let me know the price and when you can send it to me.
-Are the orders up to 3rd making progress without any problems?
-Is it possible for you to send me the DUCATI jacket of the attached file within 2 weeks from when I order?
If there's going to be additional fee please let me know the price.
-I'm sorry to make small orders all the time but I would like them to be delivered within 3 weeks from when I ordered.

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-I've already completed the payment for the 4th order. Please confirm.
-Is it possible for you to make a custom-made racing suite as in the attached file? I would like you to reproduce it faithfully. Also, please let me know the price and when you can send it to me.
-Are productions for up to the 3rd orders going well?
-Is it possible for you to send me a DUCATI jacket as in the attached file within 2 weeks from when I order?
If additional fee is going to be incurred please let me know the price.
-I'm sorry to always make small orders but I would like them to be delivered within 3 weeks from when I ordered.

元の翻訳
Based on the action plan we submitted previously, we mainly list FBA and avoid dispatches from our company in order to avoid delivery trouble. However, due to reduced number of registered items, we have not been able to receive orders as much as we did before.

Additional action is to increase the number of registered items on FBA.
In detail, we are planning to deliver 15 to 20 items, 80 to 100 pieces of stock to FBA.

We sincerely are hoping for our account to be reactivated.
Thank you.

修正後
Based on the action plan we submitted previously, we mainly list through FBA and avoid shipping from our company in order to avoid delivery troubles. However, due to a reduced number of registered items, we have not been able to receive orders as much as we did before.

As an additional measure, we will increase the number of registered items on FBA.
In detail, we are planning to deliver 15 to 20 items, 80 to 100 pieces of stock to FBA.

We sincerely are hoping for our account to be recovered.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
We conduct the exhibition focusing at the FBA along the previously submitted plan of action,
and avoid the sending of in-house as much as possible in order to avoid the delivery trouble.
However, from the reduction of product registration number, the number of orders has not been obtained as before.

As additional measures for the future, increasing the number of product registrations in the FBA will be needed.
Specifically, there is a plan to deliver 15 to 20 items, 80 to 100 pieces of the stock to FBA.

We want to recovery the number of accounts sincerely.
Thank you for your cooperation.

修正後
We list our items mainly through FBA along with the previously submitted plan of action,
and avoid shipping from our company as much as possible in order to avoid delivery troubles.
However, due to a reduction in the number of registered products , we have not received as many orders as we did before.

As additional measures for the future, we will register more products with FBA.
Specifically, we will deliver15 to 20 items, 80 to 100 pieces as stock to FBA.

We sincerely request you to recover our account.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your cooperation.

Today, I had received the goods.
From the inspection result, it had defect as customer claimed before.
I am truly apologize for this matter.

Today, for your information I had sent the replacement.
Tracking number as stated below.

Please check.
I sent it by EMS and estimated to arrive within 45 days.
Please wait until the replacement arrive.

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Thank you for your cooperation.

Today, I have received the goods.
From the inspection result, it turned out that it had defect as you claimed before.
I truly apologize for this matter.

Today, for your information I have sent its replacement.
The tracking number is as stated below.

Please check.
I sent it by EMS and it is estimated to arrive in 4 to 5 days.
Please wait until the replacement arrives.

元の翻訳
The other day, I received a message from Amazon about the refund process.
Thank you for your help.

I still have the mistaken item on hand. Where should I send the item? I was never contacted about where to return the goods.
On that matter, could Amazon please also pay for the postage fees?

If it is not necessary to return the item, I will dispose of it myself so please give me a response.

I await your reply.

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The other day, I received a message from Amazon that the refund process was completed.
Thank you for your help.

I still have the mistaken item on hand. Where should I send the item? I have not been informed about where to return the goods.
On that matter, could you kindly cover the shipping cost?

If it is not necessary to return the item, I will dispose of it myself so please give me a response.

I await your reply.

元の翻訳
I've just sent off the item you ordered earlier.
I will refund you after the shipment is completed for the discounted amount.
I have completed the refund on my side and the refunded amount, 10 dollars will appear on your account as soon as it's been processed by Amazon so please wait for a while.

I understand about TW1-6. I will look for it and contact you as soon as I find it.
Thank you for purchasing from me this time.
I'm looking forward to serving you again.

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I've just shipped the item you ordered earlier.
I will refund you after the shipment is completed for the discounted amount.
I have completed the refund on my side and the refunded amount, 10 dollars will appear on your account as soon as it's been processed by Amazon so please wait for a while.

I understand about TW1-6. I will look for it and contact you as soon as I find it.
Thank you for purchasing from me this time.
I'm looking forward to serving you again.

元の翻訳
1. Hello.
I shipped your goods out earlier. Please kindly wait patiently until arrival.
I can support you most of the things that are sold on ebay by Japanese for examples consumers electronics, home appliances and general goods. Please kindly contact us directly if you also interested in used camera or other things that you want. We are looking forward to hearing from your future inquiries and business dealings.
Please, take a lot of nice photos!

2. The shutter will turn off, but the shutter speed is delayed. The Prism finder is broken and doesn't work. The outer skin is peeled off on some parts. The battery box's lid is a bit stuck and difficult to open. The mold is somehow deteriorated.

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1. Hello.
I shipped your goods out earlier. Please kindly wait patiently until arrival.
I can support you most of the things that are sold on ebay by Japanese for examples consumers electronics, home appliances and general goods. Please kindly contact us directly if you are also interested in used camera or other things that you want. We are looking forward to hearing from your future inquiries and business dealings.
Please, take a lot of nice photos!

2. The shutter releases, but the shutter speed is delayed. The Prism finder is broken and doesn't work. The outer skin is peeled off on some parts. The battery box's lid is a bit stuck and difficult to open. The mold is somehow deteriorated.

元の翻訳
1. Hello.
I just sent the item. Please wait till it reaches you.
I can arrange almost everything Japanese are selling on eBay, for example home appliances or general merchandise etc. Of course if there is any used camera you are looking for please directly ask me. I look forward doing business with you in the future as well. Please take lots of wonderful photos!

2. You can press shutter but shutter speed is delayed. Prism finder is broken and does not work. Some parts have peeled skin. Battery box lid is tight and hard to open. Malt is deteriorated.

修正後
1. Hello.
I just sent the item. Please wait till it reaches you.
I can arrange almost everything Japanese are selling on eBay, for example home appliances or general merchandise etc. Of course if there is any used camera you are looking for please directly ask me. I look forward to doing business with you in the future as well. Please take lots of wonderful photos!

2. You can press shutter but shutter speed is delayed. Prism finder is broken and does not work. Some parts have peeled skin. Battery box lid is tight and hard to open. Malt is deteriorated.

元の翻訳
1.Hello.
The items has been shipped , please wait for a while due to the package be arrived.
I can handle almost all of the items which sold by Japanese , like home-appliance & groceries and etc.
Of course you can take contact with me if you are interested in re-used camera also.
I am looking forward to the next deal between us.

2.The shutter is worked good , but shutter speed was slowly . Prism finder can't works due it was broken.
The leather cover was turned up on some place.Battery Cover was hard to open it. Molt was denigrated also.

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1.Hello.
The items have been shipped , please wait for a while until the packages arrive.
I can handle almost all of the items which are sold by Japanese , like home-appliance & groceries and etc.
Of course you can contact me if you are interested in used cameras also.
I am looking forward to doing business with you again.

2.The shutter works well, but the shutter speed is slow. The prism finder can't work due to the fact it is broken.
The leather cover comes off in places. The battery cover is hard to open. The molt is degraded also.

元の翻訳
I will be changing to Korean air flight at the Incheon Airport in South Korea. After I change my flight I'll go to Kansai Airport in Japan.
Will this luggage go to Kansai Airport in Japan as well?

Or do I have to go through passport control and enter Korea in the Incheon Airport in order to pick up this luggage there myself?
And do I have to go through passport control once again to leave Korea after I have picked up my luggage at arrivals there?

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I will be changing to Korean air flight at the Incheon Airport in South Korea. After I change my flight I'll go to the Kansai Airport in Japan.
Will this luggage be checked through to the Kansai Airport in Japan?

Or do I have to go through passport control to enter South Korea at the Incheon Airport in order to pick up this luggage there?
And do I have to go through passport control once again to leave South Korea after I pick up my luggage?

元の翻訳
こんにちは、私は受け取ったものとそれがうまくいっていることを嬉しく思います。私はときどき輪が思いつくんです。実際の映画でもそれがでてきたのです。どうしてだと思いますか。とりー

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こんにちは、私は受け取った商品にも、それがかなりスムーズに作動することにも非常に満足しています。撮影時にときどき輪っかが表示されます。実際に現像したものでもそれがでてきたのです。どうしてだと思いますか。とりー

元の翻訳
こんにちは。わたしは、受け取ったものと、それがちゃんと機能することについてとても嬉しく思っています。
しかし、映像を撮っている時に丸いものが常時出現します。実際の映像は現像されますが、どうしてそうなるか教えていただけますか？
よろしくお願いします。
トーリー

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こんにちは。わたしは、受け取ったものと、それがちゃんと機能することについてとても嬉しく思っています。
しかし、映像を撮っている時に丸いものが時々出現します。実際の映像は現像されますが、どうしてそうなるか教えていただけますか？
よろしくお願いします。
トーリー

元の翻訳
Recently, we are reducing the frequency with the the exhibition because these items have high prime costs, and they are auctioned off at low prices even lower than prime costs,

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Recently, we list these items less often because the highest bid prices for these items are lower than their cost prices ,