NAOKO.N (tani1973) — 付けたレビュー

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You stop communication when things are inconvenient for you.
I heard that you are ignoring Mr.Ko's contact.
Mr.Ko went to Malaysia on 5th because you told him, no wonder he gets upset.
You might be enjoying like a joke, but you are not supposed to do that.

Ms.Sa, you told too much nonsense.
You haven't been able to send us correct information.
You should arrange things so we can contact your boss.

You should immediately meet Mr.Ko to apologize.
Otherwise we will not forgive you.

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You stop communication when things are inconvenient for you.
I heard that you are ignoring Mr.Ko's contact.
Mr.Ko went to Malaysia on 5th because you told him to, no wonder he gets upset.
You might be enjoying like a joke, but you are not supposed to do that.

Ms.Sa, you told too much nonsense.
You haven't been able to send us correct information.
You should arrange things so we can contact your boss.

You should immediately meet Mr.Ko to apologize.
Otherwise we will not forgive you.

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You don't contact me anything when you are in the bad situation.
I heard you have ignored Mr.Ko's contact.
It's no wonder that Mr.Ko gets angry that he entered into Malaysia on 5th because you told him so.
You may enjoy this situation as a joke, but it cannot be like that.

Ms. Sa, you said too much bullshit.
You can't tell us correct information.
You should tell your boss to contact us.

You should meet Mr.Ko right away, and apologize him.
I will not forgive you unless you do that.

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You don't contact me when you are in an unfavorable situation.
I heard you have ignored contact from Mr.Ko.
It's no wonder that Mr.Ko gets angry as he entered Malaysia on the 5th as you told him to.
You may enjoy this situation as if it were a joke, but it is not.

Ms. Sa, you said too many bullshits.
You have given us wrong information.
You should tell your boss to directly contact us.

You should meet Mr.Ko right away to apologize to him.
Otherwise, we will not forgive you.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your order.
Please be informed that I have shipped out the item. Please wait till you receive it.
If you have any questions, or if the item has not been delivered or has a defect, please feel free to contact me.
Once again, thank you very much for choosing me out of a lot of other shops.

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Thank you very much for your order.
Please be informed that I have shipped out the item. Please wait till you receive it.
If you have any questions, or if the item has not been delivered or has a defect, please feel free to contact me.
Once again, thank you very much for choosing my shop out of many others.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your purchase.
Please be informed we have sent out your item. We hope you like it.
If you have any question, inquiry about status of posting, any breach of the item, please feel free to contact us.
Once again, thank you for choosing our shop from many shops.

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Thank you for your purchase.
Please be informed we have sent out your order. We hope you will like it.
If you have any questions including the one about the shipping status or find any damage or defects in the item, please feel free to contact us.
Once again, thank you for choosing our shop among many others.

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Thank you for accepting our suggestion in sending replacemet product.

Those products are with a similar price. (The replaced one to be sent which is later released that the ordered one)

Instead of price discount, we will send the replacement product to following address

Please kindly wait and the replacement product will be sent within 24 hours.

Thanks again for accepting our suggestion.

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Thank you for accepting our suggestion to send a replacemet product.

Both products are almost the same price. (The replaced one to be sent was released later than your order)

Instead of giving you a discount, we will send the replacement product to the following address.

Please kindly wait a while since the replacement product will be sent within 24 hours.

Thank you again for accepting our suggestion.

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Thanks for your approval for sending replacement.
Price of both items are almost same (the item I'll send is released later than the one you ordered.
Then, instead of discount I will send it to below address by EMS.
Shipment will be made within 24 hours, so please kindly wait a little while.
Again, thank you for accepting my proposal this time.

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Thank you for your approval for our sending replacement.
The listed prices of both items are almost the same (the item I'll send was released later than the one you ordered.
Then, instead of giving you a discount I will send it to the below address by EMS.
Shipment will be made within 24 hours, so please kindly wait a little while.
Again, thank you for accepting my proposal this time.

元の翻訳
Thank you for accepting sent an alternate product.
Which product is also almost regular price. ( The product that we will send is newer launch day than a product that you've ordered already.)
So we will send it to following address by EMS instead of discount.
Please wait a little longer because shipment will be worked within 24 hours.
Allow me to again thank you for accepting our offer in this time.

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Thank you for accepting us sending an alternate product.
Both products are almost the same listed price. (The product that we will send was launched later than the one that you've ordered.)
So we will send it to the following address by EMS instead of giving you a discount.
Please wait a while because shipment will be done within 24 hours.
Allow me to thank you again for accepting our offer this time.

元の翻訳
Notification to our precious customers

Thank you so much for the deal.

We are honored to provide you Japanese items and services.

We are closed from December 29th to January 3rd.
We will open on the 4th of January.

it may be inconvenience for you but we appreciateylur understanding.
We hope the new year will bring lot of happiness to you.

Best regards,
Mikuriya camera

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Notification to our precious customers

Thank you so much for your support this year

We are honored to provide you Japanese items and service.

We are closed from December 29th to January 3rd.
We will open on the 4th of January.

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It may cause you inconvenience but we appreciate your understanding.
We hope the new year will bring lot of happiness to you.

Best regards,
Mikuriya camera

元の翻訳
Dear valued customers,

We appreciate your support throughout this year.

It is our pleasure to provide Japanese products and service to you.

We will be closed on 29th Dec to 3rd Jan for the Japanese Year-End/New Year holidays.

Products purchased within this period will be delivered in order from 4th Jan.

We will resume operation on 4th Jan 2016.

We apologize for the inconvenience caused.
We wish you a fruitful new year with great happines.

Yours sincerely
Mikuriya camera

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Dear valued customers,

We appreciate your support throughout this year.

It is our pleasure to provide Japanese products and service to you.

We will be closed from 29th Dec to 3rd Jan for the Japanese Year-End/New Year holidays.

Products purchased within this period will be delivered in order from 4th Jan.

We will resume operation on 4th Jan, 2016.

We apologize for the inconvenience caused.
We wish you a fruitful new year with great happiness.

Yours sincerely
Mikuriya camera

元の翻訳
To our valued customers

Thank you very much for your support this year.

We are honored to provide Japanese item and service to you.

Our shop will be closed from December 29th till January 3rd for year end and new year holidays in Japan.

We will send items you purchased during this period starting on January 4th accordingly.

Our shop will re-open in January 4th 2016.

We apologize for the inconvenience, thank you in advance for your kind understanding.
We hope that you will have happy and fruitful new year ahead.

Sincerely,
Mikuriya camera

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To our valued customers

Thank you very much for your support this year.

We are honored to provide Japanese items and service to you.

Our shop will be closed from December 29th till January 3rd for year end and new year holidays in Japan.

We will start sending items from January 4th you purchased during this period.

Our shop will re-open on January 4th 2016.

We apologize for the inconvenience and thank you in advance for your kind understanding.
We hope that you will have happy and fruitful new year ahead.

Sincerely,
Mikuriya camera

元の翻訳
Dear our precious clients,

Thank you for dealing with us this year very much.

We were glad to offer you Japanese service and product for you.

We will close between Dec 29th to Jan 3rd due to Japanese public holidays at the end and beginning of the year.

We will start shipping the orders from Jan 4th if you make orders during this term.

We will open the store from Jan 14, 2016.

I appreciate your understanding.
We hope all clients have a happy new year.

Best regards,
Mikuriya camera

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Dear our precious clients,

Thank you very much for dealing with us this year.

We have been glad to offer you our service and Japanese products.

We will be closed from Dec 29th, 2014 to Jan 3rd, 2015 due to Japanese public holidays at the end and beginning of the year.

We will start shipping the orders from Jan 4th if you make orders during this term.

We will be open from Jan 4, 2016.

I appreciate your understanding.
We hope all clients have a happy new year.

Best regards,
Mikuriya camera

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荷物の配達が行われたと称するメールを受け取りました。そこで、玄関をチェックしましたが、荷物は見当たりません。配達が行われたと称するお知らせは今どうなったのでしょうか。

配達が行われたと称するメールを受け取っていません。いつどのように配達されたのか分かりません・
終日在宅でしたが、玄関にお知らせはありませんでした。本件を調べてしてください。困惑しておりますので。

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荷物の配達が行われたと称するメールを受け取りました。そこで、玄関をチェックしましたが、荷物は見当たりません。配達が行われたと称するお知らせは今どうなったのでしょうか。

配達が行われたと称するメールを受け取っていません。いつどのように配達されたのか分かりません・
終日在宅でしたが、玄関にお知らせはありませんでした。本件を調査してください。困惑しておりますので。

元の翻訳
By the way, has the item arrived yet?
If no, please it on www.royalmail.com/track-your-item.

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By the way, has the item arrived yet?
If not, please check its delivery status at www.royalmail.com/track-your-item.

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Have you received the product, by the way?
If you haven't received it, please check the delivery status on the web site below.
, www.royalmail.com/track-your-item

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Have you received the item, by the way?
If you haven't received it, please check the delivery status on the website below.
www.royalmail.com/track-your-item

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By the way, have the package arrived?
If you have not received it yet, please check the shipping status on www.royalmail.com/track-your-item.

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By the way, have you received the package?
If you have not received it yet, please check the shipping status at www.royalmail.com/track-your-item.

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to whom it may concern

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Tell me about some testing required for admission.
○○ because the test will have not been carried out in my country there is an essential, whether I want to submit another test scores, such as XX, if possible, but it is possible?

What are the tests entrance examination of the Faculty of Music? If there is described elsewhere website I am glad if you could tell me the URL.
Also, Can you applying to more than one school in the Faculty of Music? (For example, such as composer and musical instruments)

Thank you for your answer.

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Ｔo whom it may concern

(abridgement)

Tell me about the testing required for admission.
The ○○ test which is required for us to submit has not been carried out in my country, so I want to submit another test's score such as XX if possible. Is it possible?

What kinds of entrance examinations are to be conducted for the Faculty of Music? If it is described elsewhere on your website, I am glad if you could tell me the URL.
Also, can I apply for more than one department in the faculty of Music? (For example, such as composer and musical instruments)

Thank you for your answer.

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To whom it may concern,

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I have several questions about tests required for entrance.
It says ○○ test is required, but as it is not offered in my country I'd like to submit scores of other tests such as XX, is that possible?

What are the tests for entering to college of music? If there is any description on website, I'd be happy if you let me know URL. Also, may I apply for multiple departments within college of music? (For example, composing and instruments etc.)

Thank you in advance for your kind reply.

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To whom it may concern,

(omitted)

I have several questions about tests required for entrance.
It says the score of ○○ test is required, but as it is not offered in my country I'd like to submit the score of another test such as XX, is that possible?

What kind of tests are we to take for entering the music deoartment? If there is any description on your website, I'd be happy if you let me know its URL. Also, may I apply for multiple departments within the music department? (For example, composing and instruments etc.)

Thank you in advance for your kind reply.

元の翻訳
To whom it may concern

（omission)

I would like to ask some questions regarding the entry exam please.

Is it possible to hand in a score of ×× test instead of ○○ test which is not carried out in my country?

What sort of test do you have for music entry? If you have already mentioned it in the website, please tell me URL.
Also, I would like to know if I can apply more than one category like composition and instruments.

I appreciate for your assistance.

Kind Regards,

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To whom it may concern

（omission)

I would like to ask some questions regarding the entry exam please.

Is it possible to hand in the score of ×× test instead of ○○ test which is not carried out in my country?

What sorts of tests do you have for music entry? If you have already mentioned it in the website, please tell me its URL.
Also, I would like to know if I can apply for more than one category like composition and instruments.

I appreciate your assistance.

Kind Regards,

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Today, I have received all the ordered items.
I appreciate your thorough packing as ever.

However, to my regret, one piece of AR-2434 I ordered was missing (only 4 pieces were received).
Please find the attached picture of the time when the package was opened for your confirmation.

I am going to place an order with the following model, so would please ship the above together??

(AR-2434×1)
AR-1410×10
AR-2448×10

If this is okay with you, please send me an invoice.

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Today, I have received all my orders.
I appreciate your thorough packing as ever.

However, to my regret, one piece of AR-2434 I ordered was missing (only 4 pieces were received).
Please find the attached picture when the package was opened for your confirmation.

I am going to place an order for the following models, so would you please ship them together with the missing item above ??

(AR-2434×1)
AR-1410×10
AR-2448×10

If this is okay with you, please send me an invoice.

元の翻訳
All the products I ordered were delivered today.
Thank you for packing it carefully as always.

But, unfortunately, the package was short on one unit of AR-2434 (there were only four.)
I am sending a picture of the package when I opened it; please verify.

As I am ordering the models below, can you ship the missing unit together, please?
Also, as I am out of funds at the moment, I would like to pay by PayPal; is that all right for you?

(AR-2434×1)
AR-1410×10
AR-2448×10

Please send me the invoice, if you agree.

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All the products I ordered were delivered today.
Thank you for packing it carefully as always.

But, unfortunately, the package had one unit of AR-2434 missing (there were only four.)
I am sending a picture of the package when I opened it; please verify.

As I will place an order for the models below, can you ship the missing unit together with them, please?
Also, as I am out of funds at the moment, I would like to pay by PayPal; is that all right for you?

(AR-2434×1)
AR-1410×10
AR-2448×10

Please send me the invoice, if you agree.

元の翻訳
I am sorry to ask several times, but will you ask the plant if it is possible to order additional eyes?
I am asking this because it is possible that I can buy extra eyes from another seller that I have a business relationship with.
I believe it is possible to buy them from your plant, so please ask them.
I want a doll exactly like the one in this picture.
The make-up on the doll that I received is subtly different from the one in the picture.
The too long upper eyelashes of the doll are a different type of the eyelashes used in the picture.
The lower eyelashes are roughly implanted at irregular intervals.
The pink lines painted on the inside of the eyes are too much.
I didn’t pay a lot of money for a half-baked product.
Please put exactly the same makeup as the picture on the doll.

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I am sorry to ask several times, but will you ask the plant if it is possible to order additional eyes?
I am asking this because it is possible that I can buy extra eyes from another seller that I have a business relationship with.
I believe it is possible to buy them from your plant, so please ask them.
I want a doll exactly like the one in this picture.
The make-up on the doll that I received is subtly different from the one in the picture.
The too long upper eyelashes of the doll are a different type of the eyelashes used in the picture.
The lower eyelashes are roughly implanted at irregular intervals.
The pink lines painted on the inside of the eyes are too much.
I didn’t pay a lot of money for a half-baked product.
Please put exactly the same makeup as that of the doll in the picture.

元の翻訳
Hi,
Im Eiji, the owner of AK-TRUST-JAPAN. Thank you for visiting us.

We are providing high quality products such as cameras and lends and shipping to the all over the world promptly with care.

Most products are second hand and all are checked carefully. We are proud of our work but if there is something wrong with your purchased products we will refund when you return the products.

I hope that more people are getting interested in Japan through our shop.

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Hi,
Im Eiji, the owner of AK-TRUST-JAPAN. Thank you for visiting us.

We are providing high quality products such as cameras and lends and shipping to all over the world promptly with care.

Most products are second-hand and all are checked carefully. We are proud of our work but if there is something wrong with your purchased products we will refund if you return the products.

I hope that more people are getting interested in Japan through our shop.