翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

退院後、急いで荷物を出荷しました。
１９日に到着しているはずです。

大変申し訳ありません。
こちらのミスですのでお詫びとして
購入金額より２０％値引きします。
＄３６を入金していただけますか？

paypalからインボイスを送ります。
よろしくお願いします。

英語

I sent a baggage quickly after I was dismissed from the hospital.
It is supposed to be arrived in 19th.

I apologize to you and I will discount the price of purchased amount by 20%.
Could you please deposit $36?

I will send an invoice from paypal.

Thank you.

レビュー ( 2 )

jesse-okaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/03/26 20:23:39

元の翻訳
I sent a baggage quickly after I was dismissed from the hospital.
It is supposed to be arrived in 19th.

I apologize to you and I will discount the price of purchased amount by 20%.
Could you please deposit $36?

I will send an invoice from paypal.

Thank you.

修正後
I sent a baggage quickly right after I was discharged from the hospital.
It is supposed to be arrived in 19th.

I apologize to you and I will make a discount the price of purchased amount by 20%.
Could you please do payment of $36?

I will send an invoice from paypal.

Thank you.

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/03/26 22:27:58

元の翻訳
I sent a baggage quickly after I was dismissed from the hospital.
It is supposed to be arrived in 19th.

I apologize to you and I will discount the price of purchased amount by 20%.
Could you please deposit $36?

I will send an invoice from paypal.

Thank you.

修正後
I sent your order quickly after I was discharged from the hospital.
It is supposed to arrive on the 19th.

I apologize to you and I will give you a 20% discount off the purchase amount.
Could you please pay $36?

I will send an invoice via paypal.

Thank you.