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元の翻訳
Hello. I received the goods today successfully.
Thank you very much for the great item.

If possible, could you kindly send me a poster with an autograph please?
Sorry for the trouble, but I hope you could help me.

I will bear the all shipping cost.

修正後
Hello. I received the goods today successfully.
Thank you very much for the great item.

If possible, could you kindly send me a poster with an autograph please?
Sorry for the trouble, but it will be much appreciated.

I will bear the full shipping cost.

元の翻訳
Both the comic and the magazine had a supplementary postcard.
Do you want to only the postcard? I do not read this magazine, so I would like you to purchase a whole of magazine. The comic is $11, and the magazine is $8. Commission fee is not required.

From my research, I found that the clear file is not ○'s supplement, but a special amenity that we can get only from the shop ◇. Unfortunately the shop is not around here and it is difficult to get it.

◇which you ordered the other day has just arrived today,
I will add the fee of the goods and the shipping cost, in total of $11, to the invoice.

修正後
Both the comic and the magazine had a supplementary postcard.
Do you only want the postcard? I do not read this magazine, so I would like you to purchase the entire magazine. The comic is $11, and the magazine is $8. There is no handling charge required.

From my research, I found that the clear file is not ○'s supplement, but a special amenity that we can get only from the shop ◇. Unfortunately the shop is not around here and it is difficult to get it.

The ◇, which you ordered the other day, has just arrived today.
I will add the fee of the goods and the shipping cost, in total $11, to the invoice.

元の翻訳
We are afraid but we have got a problem.

Since the arrival of a camera case is very late, I have checked with the distributor. They say that there was a system trouble and they couldn't inform us the out of inventory situation.

We immediately checked with another distributor and their earliest shipping date will be next Monday since we have weekend. So our earliest shipping date will be next Tuesday(9/3).

We are ready to ship out a camera and a SD card, so if you are in urgent need, we will ship them out first.

After we receive the camera case, we will send it by EMS. (Surely additional cost will not occur.)

修正後
We are afraid that there is a problem.

Since the arrival of the camera case is very late, I have checked with the distributor. They say that there was a system trouble and they couldn't inform us of its out-of-inventory situation.

We immediately checked with another distributor and their earliest shipping date will be next Monday because of the weekend. So our earliest shipping date will be next Tuesday (9/3).

We are ready to ship out a camera and a SD card so, if you are in urgent need of them, we will ship them out first.

After we receive the camera case, we will send it by EMS. (There will be no additional cost for you.)