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元の翻訳
As below, I would like to let a person participate in the conference in addition.
Could you respond to it?

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As mentioned below, I would like to let a member participate in the conference additionally.
Could you deal with it?

元の翻訳
I would like to ask you some questions before the meeting.

1. Would you send me an e-mail about your schedule for the launch of this project?
2. We display new items on Amazon with the flow of time. Do you need to upload our stock data additionally? Please tell me the best way and timing to add them, in order to take the hassle out of adding the information of products many times.
3. Would you change ways of the registration for new items or of log-in to the admin page of eBay or Amazon after having completed shifting to your system?

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I would like to ask you some questions before the meeting.

1. Would you send me an e-mail about the project launch schedule?
2. We display new items on Amazon with the flow of time. Do you need to upload our stock data additionally? Please tell me the best way and timing to add them, in order to avoid hassles of adding the information of products many times.
3. Would you change ways of the registration for new items or of log-in to the admin page of eBay or Amazon after having completed shifting to your system?

元の翻訳
4. We ship our products on eBay now automatically with the service of AutoMCF. I wonder if your service will be able to do the same, but do you mind if we continue to use the service of AutoMCF for now?
5. About the products on eBay. Are some products shipped from Japan shipped by the admin page of eBay similarly to before or dispatched from your system?

About these matters, I would like you to reply me not by a tel-meeting but an e-mail.

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4. We currently ship our products on eBay automatically with the service of AutoMCF. I suppose your system will be able to do the same after it;s functional, but do you mind if we continue to use the service of AutoMCF for now?
5. Regarding items we sell on eBay, will some of them that are shipped from Japan be listed from the admin page of eBay which is the same as before or from your system?

As for these matters, I would like you to reply me not by a tel-meeting but an e-mail.

元の翻訳
password again for confirmation
Check if you get new information of Kickstarter Projects
Click "Sign me UP!" when you complete and go to the next page
- Click "Me" on the right-top
- Click "Edit settings" in the menu
- Click "Save settings" after choose your Time zone between Osaka, Sapporo, Tokyo
You can see the time when the project finishes in Japanese time. It's easier for you to understand.

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enter the same password here again
Check here if you would like to get new project information of Kickstarter
Click "Sign me UP!" when you complete and move to the next page
- Click "Me" on the right-top
- Click "Edit settings" in the menu
- Click "Save settings" after choose your Time zone from Osaka, Sapporo, Tokyo
You can see the time when the project finishes in Japanese time. It's easier for you to understand.

元の翻訳
[ Support for the beginners of Kickstarter in English ]

* How to create an account of Kickstarter

At first you sign up for Kickster.
For those who have already completed registration, scroll until the subject " *How to get a support ".
- Access the website of Kickstarter
- Click "Sign up" on the right-top
- Input for "New to Kickstarter?" in the middle;
your name in alphabet
e-mail address
e-mail address again for confirmation
password

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[ Support for the beginners of Kickstarter] English ver.

* How to create a Kickstarter account

At first you sign up for Kickster.
For those who have already completed registration, scroll down to find 'How to get a support .'
- Access Kickstarter website
- Click "Sign up" on the right-top
- Input for "New to Kickstarter?" in the middle;
Input your name in alphabet
Input e-mail address
Input e-mail address again for confirmation
Input password

元の翻訳
You may fail many times when you input the words on "Image". Don't give up!
- Input your credit card information
Choose the type of your credit card
Input the number of your credit card
Input the name who has the credit card in alphabet
Input expiration date of your credit card ( It's written as **/**, Month/Year )
- Input the detail of the owner of the credit card
You can use this website to simplify!
It's enough you do copy and paste the information of the site.
- Compete with a click "Confirm" on the right-bottom

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You may fail many times when you try to type words that show up as an image, But don't give up!
- Input your credit card information
Choose the type of your credit card
Input the number of your credit card
Input the owner of the credit card in alphabet
Input expiration date of your credit card ( It's written as **/**, Month/Year )
- Input the detail of the owner of the credit card
Simplify the process by using the website!
Just copy and paste information on the website above!
- Click "Confirm" on the bottom-right conner and finish it!

元の翻訳
- Choose your favorite plan and click "Continue to next step"

You cannot choose "All Gone!" because it's the plan which restricts the number of people and already full.

The plan of $14: 3 wires and wire stripping gauge
of $23: 9 wires and wire stripping gauge
of $39: wire stripping gauge and wire stripper
of $59: 9 wires, wire stripping gauge, and wire stripper

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- Choose your favorite plan and click "Continue to next step"

You cannot choose "All Gone!" because it's the plan which restricts the number of people and is already full.

Contents for each plan are...↵
$14 Plan: 3 wires and wire stripping gauge
$23 Plan: 9 wires and wire stripping gauge
$39 Plan: wire stripping gauge and wire stripper
$59 Plan: 9 wires, wire stripping gauge, and wire stripper

元の翻訳
ヤマ・グラスの世界的な生産者であるエスプレッソ・パーツは、卸売り業者のニーズを満たします。エスプレッソ・パーツはヤマ・グラス以外にも５０００以上の製品を生みだし、産業界をリードしています。

このたびは、ヤマ製品をさらに安価でお買い求め頂けるようご準備いたしました。

・１５０ドル以上のお買い上げで、５０％オフ
・１０００ドル以上のお買い上げで、５５％オフ
・２製品以下のお買い上げでリセラーの証明書が必要なお客様のご注文は２５％オフ

卸売り業者のご注文では、送料はご負担ください。

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ヤマ・グラスの世界的な卸業者であるエスプレッソ・パーツは、あなた様のような大規模販売者のニーズを満たします。エスプレッソ・パーツはヤマ・グラス以外にも５０００点以上の商品を提供し、当業界をリードしています。

このたびは、ヤマ製品をさらに安価でお買い求め頂けるようご準備いたしました。

・１５０ドル以上のお買い上げで、最低広告価格より５０％オフ
・１０００ドル以上のお買い上げで、最低広告価格より５５％オフ
・２つ以下の製品をお買い上げのお客様で、再販売業者の証明書をお持ちであればご注文は最低広告価格より２５％オフ

卸売り業者様からのご注文では、送料はご負担願います。