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元の翻訳
The idea for the return and refund of this store are as follows.
- It is possible to return a sent product within 30 days per policy.
- Returned products with unopened packaging will be refunded with the product price. The shipping fee will not be refunded if it is due to the customer's circumstances. In addition, the return shipping fee will also be shouldered by the customer.
- If the product was used or accidentally damaged by the customer, then the refund may be less than the product price. The shipping fee will be handled similarly with unopened products.

修正後
Our approaches in the return and the refund of our store are as follows.
- Under the normal circumstances, we accept the return of a product already shipped to the buyers within 30 days (of purchase).
- Returned products with unopened packaging will be subject for a full refund. The shipping fee will not be refunded if it is due to the customer's circumstances. In addition, the return shipping fee will also be shouldered by the customer.
- If the product was used or accidentally damaged by the customer, then the refund may be less than the product price. The shipping fee will be handled similarly with unopened products.

元の翻訳
Greetings.

I have ordered the product today so please send me the invoice.

In addition, there would be a delay in the response on another matter. We have received a request from Mr. oo regarding the non payment of the handling charges and we are currently making the payment.
We kindly request for your confirmation.

Regards,

修正後
Greetings.

I have ordered the product today so please send me the invoice.

In addition,[ there would be a delay in the response] (This is a bit apart from the original sentence. Perhaps, you might want to say something like " In addition, please let me give you a belated response on another matter. ") on another matter. We have received a request from Mr. oo regarding the payment of the handling charges, but we believe we already have paid the charges.
We kindly request for your confirmation.

Regards,

元の翻訳
Will this document also require a certification? If yes, then should you create using the name of company A or company B? I am looking forward for your response.

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Does this document also need to be certified? If so, then should I prepare it in the name of company A or company B? I am looking forward to your response.

元の翻訳
Is it possible to continue purchasing 40-50 pcs from you each month moving forward??

Please tell me if you have any items in the Japanese products that you want!! I will be happy to look for it.

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Is it possible to continue purchasing 40-50 pcs from you each month??

Please tell me if you want any Japanese products !! I will be happy to look for it.

元の翻訳
Is it possible to continue purchasing 40-50 pcs from you each month moving forward??

Please tell me if you have any items in the Japanese products that you want!! I will be happy to look for it.

修正後
Is it possible to continue purchasing 40-50 pcs from you each month?

Please tell me if you want something from Japan! I will be happy to look for it.

元の翻訳
ly79503

It looks like this once cut. (Everyone, dig in without cutting...)

▼Egg salad
When speaking of sandwiches in Japan, then it is the standard egg salad in a lunch pack. There is no question that it is delicious.
There are also unusual ones..

▼Matcha Milk and black honey jelly (?!!)
Mmm? It contains various stuff. Let try to organize it in our head.
Matcha and...

Milk and...

Black honey!

What is black honey?

Brown sugar dissolved in water and boiled and thickened

Brown sugar

It is a brown sugar made from sugar cane and often used in Okinawa and kyushu.

修正後
ly79503

It looks like this was cut. (Everyone, dig in without cutting...)

▼Egg salad
When speaking of sandwiches in Japan, then it is the standard egg salad in a lunch pack. There is no question that it is delicious.
There are also unusual ones..

▼Matcha Milk and black honey jelly (?!!)
Mmm? It contains various stuff. Let try to organize it in our head.
Matcha and...

Milk and...

Black honey!

What is black honey?

Brown sugar dissolved in water and boiled and thickened

Brown sugar

It is a brown sugar made from sugar cane and often used in Okinawa and Kyushu.