翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

お世話になっております。

本日商品を注文しましたので、請求書をお送り下さい。

また別件でお返事が遅くなってしまいましたが、Mr.○○という方から料金未払の請求がきましたが、当社はお支払いしていると思います。
お手数ですが、ご確認お願い致します。

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英語

Greetings.

I have ordered the product today so please send me the invoice.

In addition, there would be a delay in the response on another matter. We have received a request from Mr. oo regarding the non payment of the handling charges and we are currently making the payment.
We kindly request for your confirmation.

Regards,

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chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/06 18:29:39

元の翻訳
Greetings.

I have ordered the product today so please send me the invoice.

In addition, there would be a delay in the response on another matter. We have received a request from Mr. oo regarding the non payment of the handling charges and we are currently making the payment.
We kindly request for your confirmation.

Regards,

修正後
Greetings.

I have ordered the product today so please send me the invoice.

In addition,[ there would be a delay in the response] (This is a bit apart from the original sentence. Perhaps, you might want to say something like " In addition, please let me give you a belated response on another matter. ") on another matter. We have received a request from Mr. oo regarding the payment of the handling charges, but we believe we already have paid the charges.
We kindly request for your confirmation.

Regards,