Bjorn Videkull (kumachan1985) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello. I was unable to use the coupon for OO just now.
could you please extend the validity of the coupon for me please?
I would like to place additional order for 2 pcs of OO and looking forward to you response.

Would like to know if the discount rate for purchasing the Samsonite is same as the RIMOWA?
if so I would like to continue our transactions from now on and base on the past record I would like to ask for a better price for other products except RIMOWA. Could you please discuss with your superior on this issue?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

So that is the case. Fully understand.

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Hello. I was unable to use the coupon for OO just now.
Could you please extend the validity of the coupon for me please?
I would like to place additional order for 2 pcs of OO. I'm looking forward to you response.

I would like to know if the discount rate for purchasing the Samsonite is same as the RIMOWA?
If so I would like to continue our transactions from now on and based on the past record I would like to ask for a better price for other products except RIMOWA. Could you please discuss with your superior on this issue?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

That's unfortunate but I understand.

元の翻訳
I am sorry that the goods haven't been delivered to you yet.
It was despatched on 6th December.
However, it might be possible that it won't reach you in the future considering the current situation.
I would like to refund as I cannot make you concerened anymore.
Will it be OK with you?

Your will be contaced by eBay later on about an agreement.
The transaction will be finalised properly after you reply to them.
Of course, it will not cause you any negative effect.
Thank you for your cooperation.

I am very sorry, but my shop doesn't deal with this product.
Please contact other shops.

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I am sorry that the goods haven't been delivered to you yet.
It was dispatched on 6th December.
However, it might be possible that it won't reach you in the future considering the current situation.
I would like to refund as I cannot make you concerned anymore.
Will it be OK with you?

Your will be contacted by eBay later on about an agreement.
The transaction will be finalized properly after you reply to them.
Of course, it will not cause you any negative effect.
Thank you for your cooperation.

I am very sorry, but my shop doesn't deal with this product.
Please contact other shops.

元の翻訳
Could you show me a stock flame of AAA whose size is 50cm？ I am considering to buy it. Please sent me your response. Thank you.

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Could you show me an AAA stock frame photo whose size is 50cm if you have one？ I am considering to buy it. Please send me your response. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello,

Please be advised the current status about our investigation for the fishing rod (Eveluzion F7-76ti White Python).
We found the item above has been out of stock at the shop, therefore we have not confirmed the delivery size of the item.

The shop made a enquiry to the manufacturer and we will have a response from the shop on Tuesday in Japan time.

The retailing shops which I found the out of stock have suspended their sales on Rakuten website.
We are sorry for your patience but please understand we need a little bit more time to make a total price quotation as well as the confirmation of the stock status at the nanufacturer.

Kind regards

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Hello,

Please be advised the current status about our investigation for the fishing rod (Eveluzion F7-76ti White Python).
We found the item above has been out of stock at the shop, therefore we have not confirmed the delivery size of the item.

The shop made a inquiry to the manufacturer and we will have a response from the shop on Tuesday in Japan time.

The retailing shops which I found the out of stock have suspended their sales on Rakuten website.
We are sorry for your patience but please understand we need a little bit more time to make a total price quotation as well as the confirmation of the stock status at the manufacturer.

Kind regards

元の翻訳
Thank you so much for the purchae of the product. It's a holiday in Japan today so that the product is supposed to be shipped tomorrow. As I'm going to ship it via e-packet, you can expect it will arrive within the one to two weeks. I will contack you again after completion of the shipment.

Thank you.

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Thank you so much for the purchase of the product. It's a holiday in Japan today so that the product is supposed to be shipped tomorrow. As I'm going to ship it via e-packet, you can expect it will arrive within the one to two weeks. I will contact you again after completion of the shipment.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
On December 9th, Mr. Nobuyuki Maeno who talked as a special speaker of IME2014 (President of Hot Scape/ Director of MPI Japan Chapter/Committee Chairman of Event) made a speech whose title is "Know-how of planning and management of the events in the company that we do not fail~What will you do if you become a person in charge of the events in the company~" for 1 hour.

What he insisted as top priority is that "the companies produce the maximum result." In the meeting before making a speech, he explained that he was going to start by sharing the definition of the success, "What is a success for you?".

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On December 9th, Mr. Nobuyuki Maeno who talked as a special speaker of IME2014 (President of Hot Scape/ Director of MPI Japan Chapter/Committee Chairman of Event) made a one hour speech whose title was "Know-how of planning and management of the events in the company that we do not fail~What will you do if you become a person in charge of the events in the company~".

What he insisted as top priority was that "the companies produce the maximum result." In the meeting before making a speech, he explained that he was going to start by sharing the definition of success, "What is a success for you?".