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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/02/20 17:18:45

yuko_kubodera
日本語

no77901

旅窓から楽しめる日本のお山１０撰

日本のお山には旅窓から楽しめる山が数多くあります。どこへ行くとどこから見えるか、どこまで見えるかが楽しみなお山達・・・代表的と思われる山を１０撰しました。

羊蹄山（北海道）

北海道を代表するお山は、羊蹄山が第一でしょう。
その秀麗な姿は蝦夷富士と呼ばれています。

岩木山（東北地方・青森県）

青森から弘前に向かうと必ずと行って出会えるお山です。
その姿は津軽平野のどこからでも眺められます。

鳥海山（東北地方・山形県）

英語

no77901
10 Selected Mountains you can view from the window on the road

There are many mountains in Japan you can see and enjoy the view from some points to other points.
Here are 10 selected popular mountains.

Youtei-mountain (Hokkaidou)
It represents Hokkaidou very well and the beautiful figure is called "Ezo-Maount.Fuji"

Iwaki-mountain (Aomori-prefecture, Tohoku area)
It always appears in your view when you are heading to Hirosaki from Aomori.
The posture can be seen from anywhere in Tsugaru plain.

Choukai-mountain (Yamagata-prefecture, Tohoku area)

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kazue_ishikawa 51 イギリスでの留学経験を生かしてメーカーや国際協力機関で通訳や翻訳を5年間担...
kazue_ishikawaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/20 18:13:24

元の翻訳
no77901
10 Selected Mountains you can view from the window on the road

There are many mountains in Japan you can see and enjoy the view from some points to other points.
Here are 10 selected popular mountains.

Youtei-mountain (Hokkaidou)
It represents Hokkaidou very well and the beautiful figure is called "Ezo-Maount.Fuji"

Iwaki-mountain (Aomori-prefecture, Tohoku area)
It always appears in your view when you are heading to Hirosaki from Aomori.
The posture can be seen from anywhere in Tsugaru plain.

Choukai-mountain (Yamagata-prefecture, Tohoku area)

修正後
no77901
10 Selected Mountains you can view from the window on the road

There are many mountains in Japan you can see and enjoy the view from some points to other points.
Here are 10 selected popular mountains.

Youtei-mountain (Hokkaidou)
It represents Hokkaidou very well and the beautiful figure is called "Ezo-Mount. Fuji"

Iwaki-mountain (Aomori-prefecture, Tohoku area)
It always appears in your view when you are heading to Hirosaki from Aomori.
The posture can be seen from anywhere in Tsugaru plain.

Choukai-mountain (Yamagata-prefecture, Tohoku area)

原文にある「旅窓」もやはり訳した方が良いと思います。from a window of your accomodationくらいでしょうか？

このレビューを100％の人が「適切であった」と回答しています。

yuko_kubodera yuko_kubodera 2014/02/20 18:19:57

ありがとうございました。やはり原文に忠実に丁寧な翻訳が鉄則なのですね。
以下に修正します。
10 Selected Mountains you can view from a window of your accomodation

There are many mountains in Japan you can see ｆrom a window of your accomodation and enjoy the view from some points to other points.

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