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元の翻訳
それは彼らが次の会話を指すように持っているわけがない、私たちに教えても自分自身を言い訳かする必要はありません。 それでAとBは、あなたはこれが起こる作るためのポイントです。急いでください！

修正後
それは彼らが次の会話を指すように持っているわけがない、私たちに教えても自分自身を言い訳けする必要はありません。 それでAとBは、あなたはこれが起こる作るためのポイントです。急いでください！

元の翻訳
上海はXNodeネットワークのちょうど始まりです。XNodeは北京、蘇州、広州、深セン、成都などの国内の都市に着陸され、海外都市とのパートナーシップはすぐに発表されます。

修正後
上海はXNodeネットワークのちょうど始まりです。XNodeは北京、蘇州、広州、深圳、成都などの国内の都市に着陸され、海外都市とのパートナーシップはまもなく発表されます。

元の翻訳
If its OK, I would be pleased if I could proceed by using the dimensions as a reference.
As per schedule, it seems that the installation is also required to regulate at other job.

Floor drilling
The most important thing is that, stage floor has a hole.
It is found that, within 30 cm pitch there is around 4 to 5 cm of hole opened.
I think that, due to veneer surface of the floor there is a hole in it.
It a point to think whether the hole on floor is OK or inconvenient but, as the holes in grid are arranged along the line there is no problem.

修正後
If it's OK, I would be pleased if I [wrong subject] could proceed by using the dimensions as a reference.
As per schedule, it seems that the installation is also required to regulate at other job [?].

Floor drilling
The most important thing is that stage floor has a hole.
It is found that within 30 cm pitch there is around 4 to 5 cm of hole opened [this is not what the original say].
I think that due to veneer surface of the floor there is a hole in it [the translator clearly doesn't understand the original].
It a point to think whether the hole on floor is OK or inconvenient but, as the holes in grid are arranged along the line there is no problem.

元の翻訳
Cool corridor that you had challenged
carry the return note with two of us side by side
And that shoulder to shoulder mere touch for a moment
It was me with my ear dyed red and head down

After school sigh
"Arsenic tomete Sot Toy Kiwo arsenic tomete"
more detailed lyrics
breeze leans on your hair and seems to be flying upto the breast

Hey, teacher
please teach me the things that I don't
I wanna know more than anyone, so I want to realize the things
Hey, teacher
please teach me the things that even my mom and dad don't know
even if I scream near you it won't reach you
Partition Love

修正後
Cool corridor that you had challenged
carry the return note with two of us side by side
And that shoulder to shoulder mere touch for a moment
It was me with my ear dyed red and head down

{On a cool hallway, your call stopped my walking↵
We walked side by side bringing reviewed note book.↵
(On a cool hallway,) I looked down as my ears turned red↵
when my shoulder touched yours in a moment)}↵
↵
↵
After school sigh
"Arsenic tomete Sot Toy Kiwo arsenic tomete"
more detailed lyrics
breeze leans on your hair and seems to be flying upto the breast

{I fetched a quiet sigh after school↵
“Just a quiet, just a quiet sigh as bate my breath”↵
I wanna run into your arms as my hair waving in the wind.}↵
↵
Hey, teacher
please teach me the things that I don't
I wanna know more than anyone, so I want to realize the things
Hey, teacher
please teach me the things that even my mom and dad don't know
even if I scream near you it won't reach you
Partition Love↵
↵
{You know what? Sir↵
Kindly teach me what I don’t know↵
I wanna be shining only in front of you↵
So, please notice my feeling to you, and think much of that↵
You know what? Sir↵
Please teach me what dad and mom never told me↵
My mind never reaches to you↵
even screaming in my soul↵
Partition Love}↵

元の翻訳
e3905
メールを理解しません。
£25.95を入金することを思いますが

d9511

注文を頂ませんので、キャンサルします。
ようろしくおねがいします
ソレン　アンでルソン

理解しません。記事では、電車あるいは列車をスライドさせてトラックに行くが含まれていますか？唯一の列車、または1以上のはありますか？

修正後
e3905
メールが理解できません。
£25.95を入金することを期待していますが。

d9511

注文が届きませんので、キャンセルします。
よろしくおねがいします
ソレン　アンデルソン

理解できません。商品は、電車だけ、あるいは列車がスライドする線路が含まれていますか？電車はひとつだけですか、またはそれ以上あるのですか？

元の翻訳
Thank you always for your kind support, this is Yamada from Japan.
We express our gratitude towards your quick reply, it was of real help to us.
We will consider for quick purchase.

Well, its regarding the A-000 case, what should we do now, because the product received from your company does not work atall.We have tested the product in different conditions, but it just does not work.
So we would like to either exchange the product, or return and get refund.
We are still interested in further purchase, but first we would like to have reply from your side in this case.
We are looking forward to have business with you for long duration.

修正後
Thank you always for your kind support, this is Yamada from Japan.
We express our gratitude towards your quick reply, it was of real help to us.
We will consider for quick purchase.

Well, with regard to the A-000 case, what should we do now, because the product received from your company does not work at all. We have tested the product in different conditions, but it just does not work.
So we would like to either exchange the product or return it and get refund.
We are still interested in another purchase, but first we would like to have reply from you for this matter.
We are looking forward to having business with you for longer duration.

元の翻訳
It is even famous in the world of tea ceremony, arts and music.

. Comb hair using wooden comb
Wooden comb means

From ancient times Japanese womens have maintain their hair, and the beauty of black hair have also been admired in the famous Manshyouu poems.And the so called "wooden comb" is a tool used to maintain the beauty of black hair.
Even now also it is extensively used by the young genration who wish to maintain the beauty of hair.
The most superior brushing product

A traditional Japanese good, which is smooth for scalp and no fear of damage to hair due to static electricity.

This woode comb in yellwish brown colour is an extremely fine luxury goods.

修正後
It is even famous in the world of tea ceremony, arts and music.

. Comb hair using wooden comb
Wooden comb means

From ancient times Japanese women have maintained their hair, and the beauty of black hair have also been admired in the famous Manshyouu poems.And the so called "wooden comb" is a tool used to maintain the beauty of black hair.
Even now also it is extensively used by the young generations who wish to maintain the beauty of hair.
The most superior brushing product

A traditional Japanese good, which is smooth for scalp and no fear of damage to hair due to static electricity.

This wooden comb in yellowish brown color is an extremely fine luxury goods.

元の翻訳
Thanks for the reply.

I have purchased the goods through my credit card, but the delivery of goods is not possible at my German friend's residence right?

Well, is it possible to send the goods to his residence if he purchases the goods through his credit card?

In that case, is there any validity for the period of purchased goods?

Awating your reply.

修正後
Thanks for the reply.

You cannot send to my friends in Germany if I would purchase the item with my credit card. Right?

Well, is it possible to send the items to him if he purchases the items with his credit card?

In that case, is there any validity for the period of purchased goods?

Awating your reply.

元の翻訳
All of my friends, have grown up little bit so, they don't really realize the self growth.But, after meeting him I was amazed at the change in my apperance.And as we were not meeting after long time, so I was able to realize the period I had undergone change in myself. And the feeling that he was not atall changed gave me a relief of mind.My appearance have only changed, and it was long time ago the situation that does not change anything if you close your eyes it converse with Hiroki.

修正後
All of my friends, have grown up little by little so, they don't really realize the growth of themselves. But, after meeting him I was amazed at the change in my appearance. And as we were not meeting after long time, so I was able to realize the period I had undergone change in myself. And the feeling that he was not changed at all gave me a relief of mind. My appearance have only been changed, and it was long time ago the situation that does not change anything was there if you close your eyes and converse with Hiroki.