Jaypee (jaypee) — もらったレビュー

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① Bilangan peminat telah melepasi 100,000 orang.
Terima kasih kepada peminat yang telah mendaftar.
Pada masa akan datang, JAPAN PORT akan menyampaikan maklumat mengenai tempat terkenal di Jepun, mata air panas, dan maklumat mengenai permata.

② Terima kasih kerana bilangan peminat telah melepasi 100,000 orang.

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① Jumlah penggemar telah mencapai 100,000 orang.
Terima kasih kepada penggemar yang telah mendaftar.
Di masa yang akan datang, JAPAN PORT akan terus menyampaikan informasi tentang tempat terkenal di Jepang, mata air panas dan informasi berharga lainnya.

② Terima kasih atas jumlah penggemar yang telah mencapai 100,000 orang.

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Claim regarding 2 same order has been found out
Please delete one of the claim.
Please also do not count double in the ODR.

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There are 2 claims filed for the same order.
Please delete one of the claims.
Please also ensure that it is not double counted in the ODR.

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AとUKの問題を教えていただけますでしょうか？私たちはあなたからのメールを受け取っていなくて、私たちの製品を販売するために持っている問題が知らないからです。

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AとUKの問題を教えていただけますでしょうか？なぜなら私たちはあなたからのメールを受け取っておらず、私たちの製品を販売する上でそちらが抱えている問題を知らないからです。

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Please tell me the production year of the base.

Is the illustration on the WEB site is a sample?

Could you please send me some photos of the actual pysical of the item.
I would like to check the color of the rosewood fingerboard.

I am not possible to go to your shop and see the actual item,
so I would like to ask for your help.
Thank you.

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Please tell me the production year of the base.

Is the illustration on the WEB is a sample?

Could you please send me some photos of the actual item？
I would like to check the color of the rosewood fingerboard.

I am unable to go to your shop and see the actual item,
so I would like to ask for your help.
Thank you.

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Please tell me the production year of the base.

Is the illustration on the WEB site is a sample?

Could you please send me some photos of the actual pysical of the item.
I would like to check the color of the rosewood fingerboard.

I am not possible to go to your shop and see the actual item,↵
so I would like to ask for your help.
Thank you.

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Please tell me the production year of the base.

Is the illustration on the website is a sample?

Could you please send me some photos of the actual product?
I would like to see the color of the rosewood fingerboard.

I am unable to visit your store and see the actual item, so I am asking for your help.
Thank you.

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Thank you for bidding this item.

It is sufficient to use P67 45mm lens and 120 film that you already have plus the battery ( 4LR44 or 4SR44 ) to take pictures with this camera.

Do not worry because the camera works perfectly.

The difference between other published mirror up model is the external appearance which is slightly different and its accessories.

Do not worry because the camera works perfectly.

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Thank you for bidding for this item.

The P67 45mm lens and 120 film that you already have, as well as a battery ( 4LR44 or 4SR44 ) are all you need to take pictures with this camera.

Do not worry because the camera works perfectly.

The difference between this and the other listed mirror up model is its external appearance which is slightly different and its accessories.

Do not worry because the camera works perfectly.

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Subject: Amount declared correction due to mis-entry review.

For this time, we filled 60000JPY for the luggage price that we have shipped, but the actual amount is 6000JPY due to our mistake during fill in the price amount.

Please check the sample that we attached.↵
Please inform us if there is any problem.↵
I will mail it if there is no problem.

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Subject: Correction of declared amount due to entry error

The price of the package shipped was mistakenly entered as 60,000 yen, but the actual amount is 6,000 yen.

Please check the sample that we attached and tell us if there are any issues. If there are no problems I will make shipment.

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あなたはgarchomp、altariaとgulorkのために何を取りますか？

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あなたはgarchomp、altariaとgulorkをなにで交換してくれますか？

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I change this car tire since it worn out.↵
It is not a new tire but still have 80% remaining, so it still good enough to use.↵
Therefore, the price can up to 300 dollar. If it is good enough for you, I will raise the invoice.

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We changed the tires on this car because the previous ones were worn down. Although the tires that we've installed are not new, they still have 80% of the tread remaining. Because of this tire replacement, the price will increase by $300. If that is OK with you, we will issue the invoice.

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I change this car tire since it worn out.
It is not a new tire but still have 80% remaining, so it still good enough to use.
Therefore, the price can up to 300 dollar. If it is good enough for you, I will raise the invoice.

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I changed this car`s tires since they wore out.
It is not a new tire but they still have 80% remaining, so it is still good enough to use.
Therefore, the price can go up by 300 dollar. If it is good enough for you, I will send the invoice.

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Regarding the packaging of the product, it is alright to packing it with your company stardard procedure as you mention to me.
Placed the product in a transparent bag, and please seal our code on top of the bag.
Thank you.↵
I understand regarding the fumigation process.

Plus, regarding of the back, since the sample and design has been changed, can you please send me the new design product one by one earlier?
Please use our UPS number same as before.

We already made 30% of advance payment. Thank you.

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Regarding the packaging of the product, you can pack it with your company standard procedure as you mentioned to us.
Please make sure placing the product in a transparent bag, and sealing our code on top of the bag.
I understood regarding the fumigation process as well.

Also, regarding the back, since the sample and design has been changed, can you please send us the new design products one by one in advance?
Please use our UPS number same as before.

We already have made 30% of advance payment. Thank you.

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I have tried several time pairing 3 or 4 set with A only but it was unable even once.
Therefore, I will sell this product as a 3 or 4 set that cannot be paired product.

Plus, I unable to listen to FM radio as well.

Other company's product can paired with 3 or 4 set, and also have 2 or 3 radio station that can be listened.

With these 2 points stated above, I hope there is improvement in the future.

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I have tried several times to pair 3 or 4 sets with only A, but I was unable to do it even once.
Therefore, I will sell this product as an unpairable 3 or 4 set.

Also, I was unable to listen to FM radio.

Other company's products can be paired in 3 or 4 sets, and also have 2 or 3 radio stations that can be listened to.

I hope there is improvement in the future on the 2 points stated above..

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Check 2
Delivery lot contents

I have a question regarding your request to packed 4~5 products in each lot.
Regarding product weight, 1 product is about 4 oz.
The weight will exceed 1 pound if 4~5 products were packed in the delivery box plus the weight of the delivery box itself.
Based on this reason, it is difficult to fit the products just like above description below than 1 pound.
If you still want the product to fit below than 1 pound, we need to reduce the number of products in the lot.
We will try to consider again if there is other method to solve above problem.

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Check 2
Delivery lot contents

I have a question regarding your request to pack 4~5 products in each lot.
Regarding product weight, 1 product is about 4 oz.
The weight will exceed 1 pound if 4~5 products are packed in the delivery box plus the weight of the delivery box itself.
Based on this reason, it is difficult to fit the products just like above and keep it under 1 pound.
If you still want the product to be under 1 pound then we need to reduce the number of products in the lot.
We will try to consider again if there is another method to solve above problem.

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Thank you so much for your concern with my family and Japan.

I remember the sense of intimacy of you, your family, Saudi Arabis and Islamic culture.

Recently, I have many oppurtunity to know employees and former employess of Sony, and have received many information regarding Sony's condition. They seems to be fed up with US management style recent years even though they really love Sony. Many great products were produced in the past is might be due to engineers who really love Sony.

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Thank you so much for your concern about my family and Japan.

I have an affinity for you, your family, Saudi Arabia and the Islamic culture.

Lately, I have many opportunities to get to know employees and former employees of Sony, and am often consulted on Sony's condition. They seem to be fed up with the current US management style even though they really love Sony. The reason why many great products were produced in the past might be due to the engineers who really loved Sony.

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Focusing Food of this camera is a very hard metal. Even a person hold it on the hand and dropped it to the ground with that height, there is no possibility it will become badlly dent or distorted. Moreover, lets assuming it dropped, it is strange that the Food which is made from hard metal dented greatly, but the most vulnerable part (Focusing Screen made from glass that have 2 lenses) not damaged at all.

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The focusing hood of this camera is made of very hard metal. Even a person held it and dropped it to the ground from that height, there is no possibility it would be badly dent or distorted. Moreover, even if it was dropped, it would be strange if the hard metal hood was badly dented but the most fragile parts (glass focusing screen and two lenses) were not damaged at all.

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現在アジアで、WeChatとLineはソーシャルマーケティングのために最も急速に成長しているプラットフォームです。

Facebookは、もちろん、消費者とブランドを従事する唯一の宛先ではない。Facebookは月間アジア全域3.39億アクティブユーザーがいる一方で、企業 - 特に高級ブランドは - 高所得の買い物客がほとんど使用している何でもアプリを追求する必要があります。アジアでは、それはWeChatとLineを意味しています。↵

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WeChatとLineは、現在のアジアでソーシャルマーケティングのプラットフォームとして最も急速に成長しています。

Facebookは、もちろん、消費者とブランドを従事する唯一の宛先ではありません。Facebookはアジア全域で月間3.39億人ものアクティブユーザーを抱えていますが、それでも企業 - 特に高級ブランド- は、高所得層の購入者が使用しているアプリケーションが何であるかを把握する必要があります。アジアでは、それはWeChatとLineを意味しています。

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Thank you for your sincere cooperation.

I will send you these products to you from Japan.
Please inform me the return address.

I will pay the postage from Japan, but if there is any tariff or consumption tax occurs in America, please pay for it.

I am paying the postage from Japan, so I hope there will be any discount for the next order.

I would like to order immediately, do you have any stocks right now?

Thank you.

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Thank you for your sincere cooperation.

I will send you these products to you from Japan.
Please tell me the return address.

I will pay the postage from Japan, but if there is any tariff or consumption tax that occurs in America, please pay for that.

I am paying the postage from Japan, so I hope there will be a discount on the next order.

I would like to order immediately, do you have any in stock right now?

Thank you.

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yamahaya88102012さん、

日本オクションサイトでこれを見たが、なぜ同じアイテムが多くのサイトで販売されていますか？あなたは詐欺師ですか？


yamahaya88102012さん、

こんにちは;)

あなたのことがまだ認めてない、商品を取得してから評価します! ;))

私の英語が悪くて申し訳ありません　;))

- denz.el

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yamahaya88102012さん、

日本のオークションサイトでこれを見たが、なぜ同じアイテムが多くのサイトで販売されていますか？あなたは詐欺師ですか？


yamahaya88102012さん、

こんにちは;)

あなたのことはまだ感謝していません、商品を取得してから評価します! ;))

私の英語が悪くて申し訳ありません　;))

- denz.el

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予想外に,サプライヤーがにスミスアンドウェッソンのイヤーマフのライン全体を中止ことを表示されます。彼らは非常に人気があるので、彼らがいなくなると我々はがっかりしました。私は他のタイプのイヤーマフを持っているが、スミスアンドウェッソンの名前がないです。

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予想外に,サプライヤーがスミスアンドウェッソンのイヤーマフのライン全体を中止したようです。それは非常に人気があるので、なくなると我々はがっかりしました。私は他のタイプのイヤーマフを持っていますが、スミスアンドウェッソンの名前がないです。

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DE
I am very sorry for the inconvenience this time.
I deeply apologize.

I will not bothered you more than this so I would like to give either following correspondence and please confirm it with me.
Thank you very much.

①Return the product and I will refund you with full amount
②We will refund 36 Euros as damage fees

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DE
I am very sorry for the inconvenience this time.
I deeply apologize.

I will not bother you more than this so I would like to give either the following, so please confirm which one you would prefer.
Thank you very much.

①You return the product and I will refund you with the full amount
②We will refund 36 Euros as damage fees

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This product will be shipped to Japan.
Please pack it with firm.
Thank you.

Do you know the postage price?
I would like to order if the EMS cost range is about 70-100 dollars.
Thank you.

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This product will be shipped to Japan.
Please firmly pack it.
Thank you.

Do you know the postage?
I would like to place an order if the EMS cost is about 70-100 dollars.
Thank you.

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こんにちは、これらはまだ派遣されていませんか？
同じものがPALであるのでしょうか？私はすぐに興味がもっているので、２つの作品を作っても構いません。
ジョーより

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こんにちは、これらはまだ発送されていませんか？
同じものがPALであるのでしょうか？私はすぐに興味をもっているので、２つの作品を作っても構いません。
ジョーより

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Everyone, long time no see! Its me, Hanako!
July will be over in no time, it will be August already!
It is hot summer in Japan, but I with other member also are working hard with ice on one hand!

In August, there is a very big event for the Otaku industry in Japan!
That's right, Comiket!

This event start from 10th until 12th August, and it is Japan's largest Doujinshi society sale!
Festival that has been going on for 38 years ago, will be held again this year.

★ Comiket is a place like this! ★

From the latest anime to the old anime, various sales of doujinshi title and goods.

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Everyone, it's been a while! Its me, Hanako!
July will be over soon, August is coming!
It is hot summer in Japan, but I and other member also are working hard with ice cream in our hands!

In August, there is a very big event for the Otaku industry in Japan!
That's right, Comiket!

This event start from 10th to 12th August, and it is Japan's largest Doujinshi society sale!
Festival that has been held for 38 years,and will be held again this year.

★ Comiket is a place like this! ★

From the latest anime to the old anime, various sales of doujinshi title and goods.