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Regarding AA you ordered the other day, we proposed another product because the ordered product was lost on the way from the warehouse, but today the warehouse has just informed me that they have stocks of AA.
We will prepare the shipment as soon as we receive the product and confirm that there are no problem.
If you would like to cancel the order, please take the procedure according to the way showed below.
Please feel free to contact us for any doubts.

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Regarding AA you ordered the other day, we proposed another product because the ordered product was lost on the way from the warehouse, but today the wholeseller has just informed me that they have stocks of AA.
We will prepare the shipment as soon as we receive the product and confirm that there are no problem.
If you would like to cancel the order, please take the procedure as per stated below.
Please feel free to contact us if any.

元の翻訳
I was informed by your company that the lacking shoe was delivered.
You had definitely received the product because you don't admit the shipment if one of the shoes is lacking, hadn't you?
We have asked to the Japanese Customs and the forwarder until today.
The Japanese Customs say they have not opened the package at all.

What we would like to confirm is if you had actualy shipped this lacking part.
We have understood that the personals are trained for the verifications.↵
But a person can take mistakes.
We would like to ask again.↵
Please, could you check your storage area?

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I was informed by your company that the lacking shoe was delivered.
We are suspecting that you had definitely received the product because your company doesn't allow the shipment if one of the shoes is lacking, right?
We have asked the Japanese Customs and the forwarder so far.
They say that they didn't open the package at all.

What we would like to confirm is if you had actually shipped this lacking part.
We understand that the personnel are trained for the verifications, but a person can make mistakes.
We would like to ask you is: could you check your storage area again, please?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
I will inform you when the article will be shipped.
Thank you.

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry but I canceled the article.

I give a full refund.

Thank you for your message.
I certainly noted.
It's very possible that the high value articles were retained in Customs.
I think that they could be staying there for a considerable period.

Thank you for your message.
I certainly noted.
I will enter into the procedure for the refund after clearance.

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Thank you for your message.
I will inform you when the article will be shipped.
Thank you.

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry but I canceled your order.

I will give you a full refund.

Thank you for your message.
I certainly noted.
It's very possible that the high value articles were retained in Customs.
I think that they could be staying there for a considerable period.

Thank you for your message.
I certainly noted.
I will enter into the procedure for the refund after clearance.

元の翻訳
Cheeky Parade NY TOUR "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - (Oct. 9th - Oct. 13th) < Starting additional subscription due to huge popularity!>

The additional subscription for the tour "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - " leaving on Oct. 9th 2014, Thursday, was decided due to a lot of application!

<Period of additional subscription>
Jul. 7th 2014, Monday, at 19:00 - Jul 31st, Thursday, at 23:59

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Cheeky Parade NY TOUR "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - (Oct. 9th - Oct. 13th) < Starting additional subscription due to huge popularity!>

The additional subscription for the tour "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - " departing on Thursday, Oct. 9th 2014, was decided due to a lot of application!

<Period of additional application>
Monday, Jul. 7th 2014, at 19:00 - Thursday, Jul 31st, at 23:59

元の翻訳
We are the only production company in Japan makes presentation videos for exhibitions. We propose to make sales promotions with a three minutes video of presentation (product explanation) for your articles at an exhibition. You can find below our web site and watch products' explanations of each company. We serve these type of videos by e-mail to possible japanese clients. The possible clients are the visitors who have exchanged the name cards. exhibitors, your client list, and the company which can have relation by our study.

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We are the only production company in Japan making presentation videos for exhibitions. We propose to make sales promotions with a three minutes video of presentation (product explanation) for your articles at an exhibition. You can find below our web site and watch products' explanations of each company. We serve these type of videos by e-mail to possible japanese clients. The possible clients are the visitors who have exchanged the name cards. exhibitors, your client list, and the company which can have relation by our study.