翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: アーティスト名は「Cheeky Parade」に統一下さい。
全角文字は半角文字に置き換えてください。

日本語

Cheeky Parade NY TOUR「チキパ流　修学旅行～ニューヨークってどうなの？～（10/9〜10/13） <大好評につき追加募集を開始！>

2014年10月9日(木)から出発の【チキパ流 修学旅行～ニューヨークってどうなの？～】ツアーを多数のご応募を頂き、大好評につき追加募集が決定しました！

【追加募集期間】
2014年7月7日(月)19:00～7月31日(木)23:59

英語

Cheeky Parade NY TOUR "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - (Oct. 9th - Oct. 13th) < Starting additional subscription due to huge popularity!>

The additional subscription for the tour "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - " leaving on Oct. 9th 2014, Thursday, was decided due to a lot of application!

<Period of additional subscription>
Jul. 7th 2014, Monday, at 19:00 - Jul 31st, Thursday, at 23:59

レビュー ( 1 )

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/24 12:13:04

元の翻訳
Cheeky Parade NY TOUR "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - (Oct. 9th - Oct. 13th) < Starting additional subscription due to huge popularity!>

The additional subscription for the tour "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - " leaving on Oct. 9th 2014, Thursday, was decided due to a lot of application!

<Period of additional subscription>
Jul. 7th 2014, Monday, at 19:00 - Jul 31st, Thursday, at 23:59

修正後
Cheeky Parade NY TOUR "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - (Oct. 9th - Oct. 13th) < Starting additional subscription due to huge popularity!>

The additional subscription for the tour "School Trip a la Cheeky Parade - How about New York? - " departing on Thursday, Oct. 9th 2014, was decided due to a lot of application!

<Period of additional application>
Monday, Jul. 7th 2014, at 19:00 - Thursday, Jul 31st, at 23:59

"School Trip a la Cheeky Parade"というおしゃれなネーミングが御依頼主の目にとまるといいですね。

[jade]

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