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日本語

○○のカラーが黒、ピンクの組み合わせの商品はメーカーホームページで販売されています。

ただ、卸売リストの中には○○のカラーが黒、灰色の組み合わせしかございません。

黒、ピンクの組み合わせはどこから購入すればよろしいでしょうか？
お客様が欲しがっています。


また、■■のセット商品ですが、何か特別なケース等に
入っているのでしょうか？


こちらもまた、卸売リストにありません。

お客様が欲しがっているのですが、どこから購入すればよろしいでしょうか？

英語

Product with the combination of color of OO are black and pink are selling on the maker's homepage.

But, the list of wholesale only shows the combination of black and gray.

Where I can buy the combination of black and pink?
My customer wants it.

This is also not on the list of wholesale.

My customer wants it, so where can I buy it?

レビュー ( 1 )

chisai_28はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/01 01:18:49

元の翻訳
Product with the combination of color of OO are black and pink are selling on the maker's homepage.

But, the list of wholesale only shows the combination of black and gray.

Where I can buy the combination of black and pink?
My customer wants it.

This is also not on the list of wholesale.

My customer wants it, so where can I buy it?

修正後
The product with the combination of color of OO are black and pink and is being sold on the maker's homepage.

But, the wholesale list only shows the combination of black and gray.

Where I can buy the product with the combination of black and pink?
My customer wants it.

This is also not on the wholesale list.

My customer wants it, so where can I buy it?

The grammar is strange. Although a reader can understand it, the whole structure needs a bit more improvement so I rate it as average. =)

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Thank you for the help!