London Gardens (ayaka_maruyama) — もらったレビュー

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As I have been stating many times, the product is exactly as it is stated in the product information.
Please send it back if you're not happy with it, and don't worry about my circumstances.
You say that you don't have the time, but you keep sending me long emails day after day. I think there is plenty of time for you to send the products.
It is against the policy to demand refunds by threatening to give me bad feedbacks.
I have said that I will give you a refund, but you still want to give me a bad feedback when things don't go your way.
That is just childish.
You just want to steal $75 from me.

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As I have been stating many times, the product is exactly as it is stated in the product information.
Please send it back if you're not happy with it, and don't worry about my situation.
You said that you don't have time, but you kept sending me long emails everyday. I think there was plenty of time for you to send the products.
It is against the policy to demand a refund by threatening to leave bad feedbacks.
I have said that I will give you a refund, but you still want to give me a bad feedback when things don't go your way.
That is just childish.
You just want to get $75 from me.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
In either way, this order has to be cancelled and the product has to be listed again.
I will request for cancellation on eBay, so please make sure that you reply to the message from eBay and agree to the cancellation of this order.
Before I list the product again, let me confirm one thing.
It would be easier for me to list them as a set, but are you fine with the payment?
If you are worried, I will list the comic separately, so please let me know your decision.
Kind regards.

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Thank you for contacting us.
In either way, I need to cancel this order and list the product again.
I will request for cancellation on eBay, so please make sure that you reply to a message from eBay and agree to the cancellation of this order.
Before I list the product again, let me confirm one thing.
It would be easier for me to list them as a set, but are you fine with the payment?
If you are worried, I will list the comic separately, so please let me know your decision.
Kind regards.

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We would like to create a society using cloud sourcing where diversity in the way we work are widely accepted.
We want to introduce intelligence and services from all over the world that exists on the cloud sourcing platform, so that we can help improve your life and your business.

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"Make use of crowdsourcing!"
We would like to create a society using crowdsourcing where different ways of working are widely accepted.
We want to introduce intelligence and services from all over the world that exists on the crowdsourcing platform, so that we can help improve your life and your business.

元の翻訳
Hello.

Thank you for answering.

You have informed me that there are not enough of the products by email,
in a very trustworthy manner.

However, I had forgotten about the email.

This was my fault for not checking properly.↵
I apologise.

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Hello.

Thank you for answering.

You have informed me in email that there are not enough products,
in a very trustworthy manner.

However, I had forgotten about the email.

I am sorry for not checking properly.

元の翻訳
Why don't you think about it again after the product has been released from ()?

When you say the list of parts, do you mean the one for my machine? I'm sorry if I misunderstood you.
I will list the parts I've used below, just in case.
I 'll have a ★ next to the parts I really recommend.
(They are all commercial products.)

I have seen the video! I envy that you have so many friends to enjoy your hobby with !!!
If you have the time, please check my videos too, I've uploaded them using the same ID.

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Why don't you think about it again after the product has been released from ()?

When you mentioned the list of parts, did you mean the one for my machine? I'm sorry if I misunderstood you.
I will list the parts I've used below, just in case.
I 'll mark a ★ on the parts I really recommend.
(They are all commercial products.)

I have seen the video! It is great that you have so many friends to enjoy your hobby with !!!
If you have time, please check my videos too, I've uploaded them under the same ID.

元の翻訳
郵便局がこの配送費をどう返金しようとしているのか分かりませんが、再度配送する際の費用は、必要であれば私が支払します。私まで返品をご希望でない場合は、返金処理をお願い致します。ご都合の良い方で結構です。今回この様な事が起こり申し訳ございませんでしたが、私にはどうすることもできませんでした。どちらにせよ、貴社には良いフィードバックをするつもりです。貴社の責任では無いのにご不便をお掛けし、申し訳ございません。

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郵便局がこの配送費をどう返金しようとしているのか分かりませんが、再度配送する際の費用は、必要であれば私が支払します。私まで再発送していただけない場合は、返金処理をお願い致します。ご都合の良い方で結構です。今回この様な事が起こり申し訳ございませんでしたが、私にはどうすることもできませんでした。どちらにせよ、貴社には良いフィードバックをするつもりです。貴社の責任では無いのにご迷惑をお掛けし、申し訳ございません。

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I would like to purchase all of them.
However, I'm worried about the products getting stopped at the customs when importing them into Japan.
Do you think they will be stopped?
Do you have any experience exporting these products directly to other Japanese clients?
I would like to build a wonderful business relationship with you.

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I would like to purchase all of them.
However, I'm worried about the products getting stopped at the customs when importing them into Japan.
Do you think they will be stopped?
Do you have any experience exporting these products directly to other Japanese clients?
I would like to build a good business relationship with you.

元の翻訳
Are the manuals and emails I have sent you too full of mistakes for you to understand?
If you cannot understand my English, then there is no way for us to communicate.
The product you have posted does not have any information on the product, delivery and payment.
What are the things you look for when you are purchasing a product on internet stores like eBay ?
Would you decide to purchase with just a title and a photograph?
If you purchased something and the product came with a different size or function to what you had imagined?
That kind of product would definitely be returned on eBay, consequently causing a fee to return the product.

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Are the manuals and emails I have sent you too full of mistakes for you to understand? [good]
If you cannot understand my English, then there is no way for us to communicate [excellent].
The product you have posted does not have any information on the product, delivery, and payment.
What are the things you look for when you are purchasing a product from online stores such as eBay ?
Would you decide to purchase with just a title and a photograph?
If you purchased something and the product came with a different size or function to what you had imagined [incomplete sentence]?
That kind of product would definitely be returned on eBay, consequently causing a fee to return the product [revise after "consequently"].

元の翻訳
us

Your company has requested me to contact the delivery company ** to find out the current state.
The following is the e-mail to prove that the delivery has already been completed.
I have delivered my product, and the product has already reached the buyer, but the payment still hasn't been made.
This is something that should not happen.
Please confirm the situation and arrange the payments for what you have purchased.
I am hoping that your company would be able to make decisions accordingly.

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us

Your company has requested me to contact the delivery company ** to find out the current status.
The following is the e-mail to prove that the delivery has already been completed.
I have shipped the product, and it has already reached the buyer, but the payment still hasn't been made.
This is something that should not happen.
Please confirm the situation and arrange the payments for what I sold.
I am hoping that your company would make a correct decision.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending me the estimates.

I have checked all my local banks, but they only offered money transfer in dollars. I couldn't find any banks that offered direct money transfer to you account in bahts. I'm afraid I couldn't transfer my money today.

Western Union (WU) offers money transfer in bahts, will you be able to receive money that way? I've heard that WU is often used in Thai too.
It would be helpful if we could use WU, as we have to transfer money in the same way from now on.

Also, after you have received the money, could you tell us a rough estimate for the time it takes to finish the rings I have ordered first?

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Thank you for sending me the estimates.

I have checked all my local banks, but they only offered money transfer in dollars. I couldn't find any banks that offered directly money transfer to your account in bahts. I'm afraid I couldn't transfer my money today.

Western Union (WU) offers money transfer in bahts, will you be able to receive money that way? I've heard that WU is often used in Thai too.
It would be helpful if we could use WU, as we have to transfer money in the same way from now on.

Also, after you have received the money, could you tell us a rough estimate for the time it takes to finish the rings I have ordered first?

元の翻訳
おはようございます。
弊社の商品にご興味をお持ち頂きありがとうございます。
是非日本にて、御社に商品を再販して頂ければと思います。
我々は、カメラ機器を生産致しております。
５００米ドル以上の商品を５部、または５００米ドル以下の商品を１０部お買い上げ頂ければ、再販価格にてご提供可能です。
お支払、配送期間、保障、商品品質、卸価格と日本への配送費に関する詳細をメールにてお送り致しました。受信ボックスを是非ご確認ください。
商品品質とサービスを見て頂く為にも、一回目のご購入を宜しくお願い致します。
ご回答お待ちしております。

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おはようございます。
弊社の商品に興味を示して頂きありがとうございます。
是非日本にて、御社に商品を再販して頂ければと思います。
我々は、カメラ機器を生産致しております。
５００米ドル以上の商品を５点、または５００米ドル以下の商品を１０点お買い上げ頂ければ、再販価格にてご提供可能です。
お支払、配送期間、保障、商品品質、卸価格と日本への配送費に関する詳細をメールにてお送り致しました。受信ボックスを是非ご確認ください。
弊社の商品品質とサービスを確認して頂く為にも、初回注文をして頂けるようお願い致します。
ご回答お待ちしております。

元の翻訳
Please let me confirm a few things again.

1. What will we be purchasing with the total amount of money?
Are there anything in particular that we must purchase?
We would like to pick up products that are popular in the Japanese market.
Are we allowed to choose them?

2. Could you tell me the price ranges of current Japanese sellers?

3. Do the products come with warranty?
If so, please give us the conditions for returning products.

4. How will the products be delivered?
Also, please inform us with the shipping costs if you know them.
We would like to know the shipping costs within the US as well as to Japan.

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Please let me confirm a few things again.

1. What will we be purchasing with the total amount of money?
Are there anything in particular that we must purchase?
We would like to pick up products that are popular in the Japanese market.
Are we allowed to choose them?

2. Could you tell me the price ranges that current Japanese sellers offer?

3. Do the products come with warranty?
If so, please give us the conditions for returning products.

4. How will the products be delivered?
Also, please inform us with the shipping costs if you know them.
We would like to know the shipping costs within the US as well as to Japan.

元の翻訳
Thank you, I have received the products safely.
I am grateful for your consideration, and will prioritize when contacting you for when the products come in stock.
I would definitely like to purchase it. Also, I would like to purchase the Danish version of it if possible. Kind regards.

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Thank you, I have received the products safely.
I am grateful for your consideration, please contact me as a priority when the products are in stock again
I would definitely like to purchase it. Also, I would like to purchase the Danish version of it if possible. Kind regards.

元の翻訳
As this product is being sold in retail stores alongside online stores, there is a possibility that it may be sold out.
Please kindly cancel the order if this happens.
Please bare in mind that as this is a second hand product, it may look slightly used.
There are damages caused by time on the box and on the product.
There are no prominent scratches, discolouration or the paint peeling off.
We are happy to make refunds if there were faults in quality if you could email us with a photograph of the product when it arrived.
Please refrain from bidding if you are a claimer or too uptight.

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Since this/these product(s) are being sold concurrently on-line and in retail there may be cases were the product shown is not in stock.
Please kindly cancel the order if this is the case.
Please bare in mind that as this is a second hand product, it may look slightly used.
There may be signs of wear on the packaging or product.
There are no prominent scratches, discoloration, or paint peeling on the product.
In cases where there is some kind of deficiency with the product, we will be happy to refund provided that you e-mail a picture of the product's condition when it arrived.
It is best that those who like to make false claims about product defects, and those who are just plain high strung, avoid bidding on these products.