翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

こんにちは。

回答ありがとうございます。

あなたは、商品が不足していることを
私にメールで連絡をしました。
あなたは私に対して誠実な対応をしてくれました。

しかし私はあなたからのメールの内容を忘れていました。

わたしの確認不足です。
申し訳ございません。

英語

Hello.

Thank you for answering.

You have informed me that there are not enough of the products by email,
in a very trustworthy manner.

However, I had forgotten about the email.

This was my fault for not checking properly.
I apologise.

レビュー ( 1 )

pswai_myはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/11/27 10:28:31

元の翻訳
Hello.

Thank you for answering.

You have informed me that there are not enough of the products by email,
in a very trustworthy manner.

However, I had forgotten about the email.

This was my fault for not checking properly.↵
I apologise.

修正後
Hello.

Thank you for answering.

You have informed me in email that there are not enough products,
in a very trustworthy manner.

However, I had forgotten about the email.

I am sorry for not checking properly.

Instead of having two separated sentences to express apology, a single statement would be more natural and straightforward in my opinion. After all, nice translation!

[ayaka_maruyama]

Thank you for the review and comment!