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rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 08 Nov 2013 at 10:15
Comment "face pace"は"fast paced"なのかなとナントナク思いました。もしそうであれば、「優柔不断なバカにはペースが速いのと、急かしてるのとでは違いがあるの！」になるのですかね…

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 07 Nov 2013 at 09:24
original Okay, I will only believe what you say. You told me and promised me to deliver it to me. You said that you will deliver it to me, and contacted me saying that you will promise it, so please have it delivered to me no matter what. As I had been saying over and over, with regards to the process required for the customs clearing, I have already obtained a certificate through a drug and medication import certification procedure called "Yakkan Shoumei". All the procedures for custom clearing have already been complete, so there are not problems at all. I believe you do understand what you have done to me, correct? Do you understand what kind of raw deal you are performing? If you plan to breach the contract, then I would have to consider taking whatever action necessary. I demand you to have it delivered with all the responsibilities. To avoid misunderstanding, I would like to clarify myself that I am willing to have good business relationship you. Please send me the payment details. I appreciate your understanding. * 間違っていたら申し訳ありませんが、どうやら「Yakkan Shoumei」は固有名詞になってるみたいですね。一応、「"Yakkan Shoumei"という薬品輸入証明手続きを通して、証明書を取得しております」と訳しておきました。	corrected Okay, I will only believe what you say. You told me and promised me to deliver it to me. You said that you will deliver it to me, and contacted me saying that you will promise it, so please have it delivered to me no matter what. As I was saying over and over, with regard to the process required for the customs clearing, I have already obtained a certificate through a drug and medication import certification procedure called "Yakkan Shoumei". All the procedures for customs clearing have already been complete, so there are not problems at all. I believe you do understand what you have done to me, correct? Do you understand what kind of raw deal you are performing? If you plan to breach the contract, then I would have to consider taking whatever action necessary. I demand you to have it delivered with all the responsibilities. To avoid misunderstanding, I would like to clarify myself that I am willing to have good business relationship with you. Please send me the payment details. I appreciate your understanding. * 間違っていたら申し訳ありませんが、どうやら「Yakkan Shoumei」は固有名詞になってるみたいですね。一応、「"Yakkan Shoumei"という薬品輸入証明手続きを通して、証明書を取得しております」と訳しておきました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

07 Nov 2013 at 09:24

original
Okay, I will only believe what you say. You told me and promised me to deliver it to me. You said that you will deliver it to me, and contacted me saying that you will promise it, so please have it delivered to me no matter what. As I had been saying over and over, with regards to the process required for the customs clearing, I have already obtained a certificate through a drug and medication import certification procedure called "Yakkan Shoumei". All the procedures for custom clearing have already been complete, so there are not problems at all. I believe you do understand what you have done to me, correct? Do you understand what kind of raw deal you are performing? If you plan to breach the contract, then I would have to consider taking whatever action necessary. I demand you to have it delivered with all the responsibilities. To avoid misunderstanding, I would like to clarify myself that I am willing to have good business relationship you. Please send me the payment details. I appreciate your understanding.

* 間違っていたら申し訳ありませんが、どうやら「Yakkan Shoumei」は固有名詞になってるみたいですね。一応、「"Yakkan Shoumei"という薬品輸入証明手続きを通して、証明書を取得しております」と訳しておきました。

corrected
Okay, I will only believe what you say. You told me and promised me to deliver it to me. You said that you will deliver it to me, and contacted me saying that you will promise it, so please have it delivered to me no matter what. As I was saying over and over, with regard to the process required for the customs clearing, I have already obtained a certificate through a drug and medication import certification procedure called "Yakkan Shoumei". All the procedures for customs clearing have already been complete, so there are not problems at all. I believe you do understand what you have done to me, correct? Do you understand what kind of raw deal you are performing? If you plan to breach the contract, then I would have to consider taking whatever action necessary. I demand you to have it delivered with all the responsibilities. To avoid misunderstanding, I would like to clarify myself that I am willing to have good business relationship with you. Please send me the payment details. I appreciate your understanding.

* 間違っていたら申し訳ありませんが、どうやら「Yakkan Shoumei」は固有名詞になってるみたいですね。一応、「"Yakkan Shoumei"という薬品輸入証明手続きを通して、証明書を取得しております」と訳しておきました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 31 Oct 2013 at 09:19
original Because the wood shrunk from desiccation, this part turned white. I think this trouble had been resolved. The listing price of this product has not been decided yet. How much do you think it can be sold for in America? I would like to take your picture. I might post it up on my homepage.	corrected Because the wood shrunk from desiccation, this part turned white. I think this trouble will have been resolved next time. The listing price of this product has not been decided yet. How much do you think it can be sold for in America? I would like to take your picture. I might post it up on my homepage.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 30 Sep 2013 at 10:55
original This animation reveal after stories of the warriors not shown in the TV series!	corrected This animation reveals after stories of the warriors not shown in the TV series!

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 10 Oct 2014 at 01:18
original アキ、どこいくの？ロボコンにいくところよ。	corrected アキ、どこにいくの？ロボコンにいくところよ。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 27 Nov 2014 at 13:49
Comment Good job

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 28 Nov 2014 at 12:24
original 「隣のヒットマンズ全弾発射」ですよね。直訳で「まるまる９ヤード」か、少しもじって「９ヤードの射程」とか。	corrected 「隣のヒットマンズ全弾発射」ですよね。直訳で「まるまる10ヤード」か、少しもじって「10ヤードの射程」とか。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 27 Nov 2014 at 13:53
Comment Follow the requestor's instruction "please translate with humor".

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 28 Nov 2014 at 12:28
Comment Very imaginative

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 27 Nov 2014 at 14:02
Comment 情感が伝わってきます。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 05 Nov 2014 at 12:38
Comment これは夏目漱石「坊ちゃん」の一説で主人公は男性です。あまり沢山の選択肢を書いてしまうとわかりづらいのでなるべくシンプルに書きましょう。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Nov 2014 at 10:18
original The cost should be reduced by outsourcing some daily back-end works, and assign the internal resources of the company to the front-end works.	corrected While the cost is compressed by outsourcing some daily back-end works, and the internal resources of the company should be assigned to the front-end works.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Nov 2014 at 10:14
original Gotta check [it/this] out!↵ ↵ 直訳だとこうなりますが、これだとまだまだチェックはしておらず、これからチェック（実際に見てすら）おらず、これから１からチェックを始めるというニュアンスになるので、若干異なるかと。↵ ↵ Gotta watch out (for it)!↵ ↵ これだと「目が離せない」という意味なので、少しニュアンスが近付くかもしれませんが、普通に使うと「気をつけなくては」になってしまうのでシチュエーションによっては使えないかも知れません。↵ ↵ 「チェック」という外来語をあえて強調するなら、僕は前者を使いますね。	corrected Check this out!

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

17 Nov 2014 at 10:14

original
Gotta check [it/this] out!↵
↵
直訳だとこうなりますが、これだとまだまだチェックはしておらず、これからチェック（実際に見てすら）おらず、これから１からチェックを始めるというニュアンスになるので、若干異なるかと。↵
↵
Gotta watch out (for it)!↵
↵
これだと「目が離せない」という意味なので、少しニュアンスが近付くかもしれませんが、普通に使うと「気をつけなくては」になってしまうのでシチュエーションによっては使えないかも知れません。↵
↵
「チェック」という外来語をあえて強調するなら、僕は前者を使いますね。

corrected
Check this out!

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 12 Nov 2014 at 14:34
original ダーウィンの見解によれば、人間による犬や馬の品種改良、ダーウィンが言うところの人為的選抜には、常に相対する野生の種が存在するということだ。	corrected ダーウィンの見解からわかったことは、人間による犬や馬の品種改良、ダーウィンが言うところの人為的選抜にも天然の型が存在するということだ。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 05 Nov 2014 at 02:12
original Thank you for your [response/reply] to [my/the] booking (arrangement) request. I will be looking forward to stay at your accommodation. ↵ "response"はそのまま「対応」ですが、"reply"だと（メールへの）「返信」になります。↵ 蛇足ですが、前に"prompt"や"fast"をつけると「迅速な対応」となり、良く使われる表現です。↵ "my"を使うか"the"を使うかはオプショナルで、相手がどのブッキングの事を言っているのかすぐに分かる状況なら"the"の方がニュアンス的には的確かもしれませんが、どちらも使えます。↵ 「アレンジ」は省いてしまっても構いません。	corrected Thank you for addressing my booking (arrangement) request. I look forward to staying at your place.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

05 Nov 2014 at 02:12

original
Thank you for your [response/reply] to [my/the] booking (arrangement) request.
I will be looking forward to stay at your accommodation.
↵
"response"はそのまま「対応」ですが、"reply"だと（メールへの）「返信」になります。↵
蛇足ですが、前に"prompt"や"fast"をつけると「迅速な対応」となり、良く使われる表現です。↵
"my"を使うか"the"を使うかはオプショナルで、相手がどのブッキングの事を言っているのかすぐに分かる状況なら"the"の方がニュアンス的には的確かもしれませんが、どちらも使えます。↵
「アレンジ」は省いてしまっても構いません。

corrected
Thank you for addressing my booking (arrangement) request.
I look forward to staying at your place.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 24 Oct 2014 at 17:10
Comment よくかけていると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 29 Oct 2014 at 22:16
original 化学において、多くの重要な化合物は既に存在する分子の中の、一つの化学基を他の化学基に置き換えることによって作られた。	corrected 化学において、多くの重要な化合物は既に存在する分子の中の、ある化学基を他の化学基に置き換えることによって作られた。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 24 Oct 2014 at 02:00
Comment 詳しく説明がされていて丁寧だと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 19 Oct 2014 at 23:03
Comment How still it is here Stinging into the stones, The locust's trill ドナルド・キーン Ah, tranquility! Penetrating the very rock, a cicada's voi...

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 18 Oct 2014 at 21:18
original 人は死に、国は興り滅びるかもしれないが、思想は生き続ける。 ↵ hito (man) ha sini (die), ↵ kuni (nation) ha okori (rise) horobiru (fall) kamosirenai (may) ga (but),↵ sisou (idea) ha iki (lives) on (tsudukeru).	corrected 人は死に、国は興亡するかもしれないが、思想は生き続ける。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 18 Oct 2014 at 21:12
original 人生は大写すれば悲劇だが、遠写すれば喜劇だ。チャーリー・チャップリン ↵ jinsei (life) ha taisha (close-up) sureba higeki (tragedy) daga,↵ ensha (long-shot) sureba kigeki (comedy) da.↵ Charlie Chaplin	corrected 人生は大写すれば悲劇だが、遠写すれば喜劇だ。チャーリー・チャップリン

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 17 Oct 2014 at 15:35
original たまごを割らなきゃ、オムレツは作れない。 ↵ tamago (egg) wo waranakya (if you don't break a), omuretsu (omelet) ha tukurenai (can't make).	corrected たまごを割らなきゃ、オムレツは作れない。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 17 Oct 2014 at 01:32
original As long as the sun shines, hope shines. ↵ これはそのまま直訳できると思います。	corrected As long as the sun shines, so does the hope.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 22 Oct 2014 at 13:21
original Roomba (ルーンバ[1]) は iRobot (社[2]) のロボット型掃除機です。 Roombaは2002年に発表され、それ以後何度かの改良[3]やモデルチェンジ[4]を経てきました。 2008年１月の時点では、250万台以上が売れています。 [1] "ルーンバ" is a Japanese Katakana form of the product name. You may use this, or you can simply stick with the English name.↵ [2] "社" simply means "company". Although it is not necessary, It is more formal in Japanese writing to put this character after the company name.↵ [3] "改良" simply means "improvement". If you wanna stick with the original English sentence and use "update" instead, you can replace this word with "アップデート". Although, "アップデート" may only be common over people who works in IT or Engineering fields.↵ [4] Rather than saying "new model", Japanese people oftern use "モデルチェンジ(model change)". It does not sound that good in English but it is a common 'Japanese English'.	corrected Roomba (ルンバ) は iRobotのロボット型掃除機です。 Roombaは2002年に発表され、それ以後何度か改良やモデルチェンジを経てきました。 2008年１月の時点で、250万台以上販売されています。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

22 Oct 2014 at 13:21

original
Roomba (ルーンバ[1]) は iRobot (社[2]) のロボット型掃除機です。
Roombaは2002年に発表され、それ以後何度かの改良[3]やモデルチェンジ[4]を経てきました。
2008年１月の時点では、250万台以上が売れています。

[1] "ルーンバ" is a Japanese Katakana form of the product name. You may use this, or you can simply stick with the English name.↵
[2] "社" simply means "company". Although it is not necessary, It is more formal in Japanese writing to put this character after the company name.↵
[3] "改良" simply means "improvement". If you wanna stick with the original English sentence and use "update" instead, you can replace this word with "アップデート". Although, "アップデート" may only be common over people who works in IT or Engineering fields.↵
[4] Rather than saying "new model", Japanese people oftern use "モデルチェンジ(model change)". It does not sound that good in English but it is a common 'Japanese English'.

corrected
Roomba (ルンバ) は iRobotのロボット型掃除機です。
Roombaは2002年に発表され、それ以後何度か改良やモデルチェンジを経てきました。
2008年１月の時点で、250万台以上販売されています。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 27 Oct 2014 at 11:35
original [You/He/She] hit me twice! I hadn't even been hit by my father [before/in my life]!↵ ↵ 「I hadn't even been hit by my father」だけで「親父にもぶたれたことないのに」になりますが、↵ 「before」をつけると「今の今までは～」という強調がつくのでニュアンス的には近いかもしれません。↵ 「in my life」をつけると「人生で～」というニュアンスがつくので、かなり大げさな雰囲気が出ます。	corrected You hit me twice! Not even my father has done that to me ever!

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

27 Oct 2014 at 11:35

original
[You/He/She] hit me twice! I hadn't even been hit by my father [before/in my life]!↵
↵
「I hadn't even been hit by my father」だけで「親父にもぶたれたことないのに」になりますが、↵
「before」をつけると「今の今までは～」という強調がつくのでニュアンス的には近いかもしれません。↵
「in my life」をつけると「人生で～」というニュアンスがつくので、かなり大げさな雰囲気が出ます。

corrected
You hit me twice! Not even my father has done that to me ever!

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