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So when would be possibly exceed the 400ppm of the yearly average density?

If the density increases at this time of rate,the exceeding of 400ppm of CO2's yearly average rate of this observatories will likely be on april next year(Strictly the confirmation of that must probably be on the coming fall half a year from now.April is as we say the coming out season of election's "candidate"). The density in hawaii is a little bit low so the fall on half a year and the 1 to 2 years delay of the density of southern hemisphere to northern hemisphere will take after so by the end of the year after next year, it will probably be 400ppm.

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So when would be possibly exceed the 400ppm of the yearly average density?

If the density increases at this time of rate, the exceeding of 400ppm of CO2's yearly average rate of this observatories will likely be on April next year(Strictly the confirmation of that must probably be on the coming fall half a year from now. April is as we say the coming out season of election's "candidate"). The density in Hawaii is a little bit low so the fall on half a year and the 1 to 2 years delay of the density of southern hemisphere to northern hemisphere will take after so by the end of the year after next year, it will probably be 400ppm.

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DAICHI MIURA will appear on [MTV VMAJ 2014]↵
as a Live Act

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DAICHI MIURA will appear on [MTV VMAJ 2014] as a Live Act

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DAICHI MIURA will appear on [MTV VMAJ 2014]↵
as a Live Act

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DAICHI MIURA will appear on [MTV VMAJ 2014] as a live act!

元の翻訳
Date: 06/14 2014 Saturday ※time of open and start will be announced later.
Place: Maihama Amphitheater (Maihama 2-50 Urayasu city,Chiba )
MC : Sayumi Michishige , T.M.Revolution , w-inds (※ABC order)
Live Act : Berryz kobo , E-girls , Kyari pamyu pamyu , Daichi Miura and others.(ABC order)
Official Site: VMAJ.JP(http://gyao.yahoo.co.jp/vmaj2014/)

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Date: 06/14 2014 Saturday ※door opening time and the performance time will be announced later.
Place: Maihama Amphitheater (2-50 Maihama Urayasu city,Chiba)
MC : Sayumi Michishige , T.M.Revolution , w-inds (※Alphabetical order)
Live Act : Berryz kobo , E-girls , Kyari pamyu pamyu , Daichi Miura and others.(※Alphabetical order)
Official Site: VMAJ.JP(http://gyao.yahoo.co.jp/vmaj2014/)

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By pressing the [vote] button,we accept votes not only in Japan but also in other countries.
And if you replay the nominated music video,it will also be counted as a vote.

<Voting Period>
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By pressing the [vote] button,we accept votes not only from Japan but also from other countries.
Moreover, replaying a nominated music video will also be counted as a vote.

<Voting Period>
from 3/28/2014 (Friday) afternoon to 5/8/2015 Wednesday at 11:59 pm (Japan time)

元の翻訳
Date: 06/14 2014 Saturday ※time of open and start will be announced later.
Place: Maihama Amphitheater (Maihama 2-50 Urayasu city,Chiba )
MC : Sayumi Michishige , T.M.Revolution , w-inds (※ABC order)
Live Act : Berryz kobo , E-girls , Kyari pamyu pamyu , Daichi Miura and others.(ABC order)
Official Site: VMAJ.JP(http://gyao.yahoo.co.jp/vmaj2014/)

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Date: 06/14 2014 Saturday ※opening place and time will be announced later.
Place: Maihama Amphitheater (Maihama 2-50 Urayasu city,Chiba )
MC : Sayumi Michishige , T.M.Revolution , w-inds (※ABC order)
Live Act : Berryz kobo , E-girls , Kyari pamyu pamyu , Daichi Miura and others.(ABC order)
Official Site: VMAJ.JP(http://gyao.yahoo.co.jp/vmaj2014/)

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By pressing the [vote] button,we accept votes not only in Japan but also in other countries.
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By pressing the [vote] button,we accept votes not only in Japan but also in other countries.
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The last december's [DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2013- Door to the unknown-] has always been ending up so the 2014's tour has already settled.

[DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2014 -The Entertainer]
Performance Schedule

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It has not been long since the "DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2013- Door to the unknown-" ended last December, and now he has already decided to do another live tour in 2014.

[DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2014 -The Entertainer]
Tour Schedule

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By bringing the masterpiece album of [The Entertainer],the opening of DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2014 [The Entertainer] is settled!!

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By bringing the masterpiece album of [The Entertainer], the opening of DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2014 [The Entertainer] is settled!!

元の翻訳
★Card Case
Cover Color: Silver /Gold
¥1,500 each
Business Card size card holder compatible for 30 pieces.



["Daichi Bag"goods]



★Bag Charm
¥1,000 each
Has each venues Limited edition colors.(Limited sale)



★i-Phone5/5S Dress Sticker Case
¥2,500





★i-Phone5/5S Dress Sticker Case




★ShuShu (Daichi Bag)
¥1,200

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★Card Case
Cover Color: Silver /Gold
¥1,500 each
Card holder compatible for 30 pieces for the average business card size.



["Daichi Bag"goods]



★Bag Charm
¥1,000 each
Has each venues Limited edition colors.(Limited sale)



★i-Phone5/5S Dress Sticker Case
¥2,500





★i-Phone5/5S Dress Sticker Case




★ShuShu (Daichi Bag)
¥1,200

元の翻訳
三浦大和の『Covers EP』
2014年3月14日より配信リリース

1.イット・ウィル・レイン（ブルーノマーズ）
2.ヒューマン・ネイチャー
（マイケル・ジャックソン）↵
3.キャント・ヘルプ・フォーリン・イン・ラブ
（エルビス・プレスリー）↵
4.ウェン・シー・ラブ・ミー↵
（サラー・マックラチラン）

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三浦大和の『Covers EP』
2014年3月14日より配信リリース

1. イット・ウィル・レイン（ブルーノ・マーズ）
2. ヒューマン・ネイチャー（マイケル・ジャクソン）
3. キャント・ヘルプ・フォーリング・イン・ラブ（エルヴィス・プレスリー）
4. ウェン・シー・ラブド・ミー（サラ・マクラクラン）

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The oil leakage of this car has been detected.
We will put the car on maintenance check so we won't be able to sell it.
We apologize for the inconvenience and we ask for your understanding.
As soon as we get the same kind of car,we will inform you right away.

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An oil leak from this car was detected.
We will take the car out for repairs so we won't be able to sell it.
We apologize for the inconvenience and we ask for your understanding.
As soon as we get the same kind of car, we will inform you right away.

元の翻訳
A barely
just before a risky situation
to some extent to be able to taste the thrill
for the sake of their own selfishness,they sacrifice others.


It is a game that the red person should protect someone barely as much as possible. we want some thrill on it so please have it barely as possible.
we don't like it harmful.
the black sphere's speed will be determined by the power guage.
Let's say it will stop by pressing the brake.
But the black sphere won't stop suddenly.So you should please find a right timing somewhere there

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A barely
just before a risky situation
to some extent to be able to taste the thrill
for the sake of their own selfishness, they sacrifice others.


It is a game that the red person should protect someone barely as much as possible. We want some thrill on it so please have it barely as possible.
We don't like it harmful.
The black sphere's speed will be determined by the power guage.
Let's say it will stop by pressing the brake.
But the black sphere won't stop suddenly. So you should please find a right timing somewhere there