Daichi (o63odt) — 付けたレビュー

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Sorry to keep you waiting!
The Kinako puffs have arrived, so I have everything together now.

There's a good amount here. Will you be eating these all by yourself?

With the candy, there are many different types and also a lot that are no longer for sale. So next time, rather than going to the maker's website, they will be easier to find if you order them from online sellers.

So I went to the post office to check the postage cost, and it was $108.

I checked the contents of the macarons, and it looks like the chocolate flavor crumbled during transport.
Sorry about that. As soon as I receive the money I'll send it right away.

Please let me know if you need anything.

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Sorry to keep you waiting!
The Kinako puffs have arrived, so I have everything together now.

There's a good amount here. Will you be eating these all by yourself?

With the candy, there are many different types and also a lot that are no longer for sale. So in the future, rather than going to the maker's website, they will be easier to find if you order them from online sellers.

So I went to the post office to check the postage cost, and it was $108.

I checked the contents of the macarons, and it looks like the chocolate flavor crumbled during transport.
Sorry about that. As soon as I receive the money I'll send it right away.

Please let me know if you need anything.

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I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on official business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, you should be better order in this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?

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I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on a business trip.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the day of shipment will be delayed.
If the date of delivery is a priority, it would be better to order within this week.
If you have difficulty ordering this week because of the business trip, please let me know when will you be able to order.

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Thank you for your reply.
All the works of yours looks fantastic and most of them are the candidate.
Would it be possible to purchase it as digital data and print them out at our ends?
Hope to hear from you soon.

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Thank you for your reply.
All the works of yours looks fantastic and most of them are candidates.
Would it be possible to sell the data and so we can print them out at our end?
Hope to hear from you soon.

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I've found (商品名), (ブランド名) at your online shop last month.
It was listed as JPY 40,400 at that time, but it is JPY 50,000 today.
Could you tell me what's the reason for its price rise?
I feel really sad about it.
It also seems too expensive when I check duties or handling cost putting it in shopping-bag.
Is this rise happen only for (ブランド名)?
Or all the commercial goods that wil be shipped to Japan gained in price?
It would be very helpful to reply at your earliest convenience.

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I found (商品名), (ブランド名) at your online shop last month.
It was listed as JPY 40,400 at that time, but it is JPY 50,000 today.
Could you tell me what is the reason for its rise in price?
I was very disappointed.
Also, it seemed too expensive when I saw the check duties and handling cost after putting it in shopping-bag.
Did the rise in price happen only for (ブランド名)?
Or have all of the commercial goods that are shipped to Japan risen in price?
It would be very helpful if you would reply at your earliest convenience.

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Just a little while ago, I inquired to the post office.
As a result, the good sent is now in customs post near you in America.
We can not research any more, so I'm really sorry, but please inquire to customs post near you or USPS.

I'm really sorry to disturb you.

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Just a little while ago, I inquired to the post office.
As a result, the good sent is now in customs near you in America.
We can not research any more, so I'm really sorry, but please inquire to the customs near you or USPS.

I apologize for any inconveniences I may have caused.

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Thank you for dealing immediately.
I have not received the invoice yet.
I will pay the money on February 16th.

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Thank you for your immediate response.
I have not received the invoice yet.
I will pay the money on February 16th.

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Plaid and leopard designed punk style!
I like light sneaker type shoes, and once I find cute and thick-soled shoes, I cannot help but buy ones.

When you wear casually, you should choose thick-soled sneakers!
You can match prettily the unique color combination of unique shocking pink jumpsuit with yellow socks!

The existence of Kyary Pamyu Pamyu herself is the symbol of cuteness.

She is never lazy about fashion when she wears casually, which makes her represent the Japanese fashion icon.

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Plaid and leopard designed punk style!
I like light sneaker type shoes, and when I find cute and thick-soled shoes, I cannot help but buy ons.

For casual wear, you should choose thick-soled sneakers!
You can match the unique color combination of unique shocking pink jumpsuit with yellow socks and make it work!

The existence of Kyary Pamyu Pamyu herself is the symbol of cuteness.

She is never lazy about fashion when she wears casually, which makes her represent the Japanese fashion icon.

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Our company sells the officially licensed products of company A, however, the customer seems to believe the actual item is smaller than that of the product specification size. Perhaps this is because the doll's ears are longer when compared to the body.

As can be seen from customer reviews on the product page, some customers feel the product to be small. We have actually measured the product size and verified it is correct.

We have receieved a negative review even though there is no problem with the product. From this standpoint we would like to ask that the review be deleted.

Thank you for your assistance.

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Our company sells the officially licensed products of company A, however, the customer seems to believe the actual item is smaller than that of the product specification size. Perhaps this is because the doll's ears are longer when compared to the body.

As seen in the customer reviews on the product page, some customers feel the product to be small. We have actually measured the product size and verified that it is correct.

We have received negative reviews even though there is no problem with the product. From this standpoint we would like to ask that the review be deleted.

Thank you for your assistance.

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I understand the trouble I've caused you.

Because I have stock, I am able to immediately send you the product.

Please order once again from the product page.

If the delivery isn't accepted it will be returned to Japan, so please respond accordingly.

I await your order.

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I understand the trouble I've caused you.

Because I have some in stock, I am able to send you the product immediately.

Please order once again from the product page.

If the delivery isn't accepted it will be returned to Japan, so please respond accordingly.

I await your order.

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I have checked F's stock and have found some damaged cases.
I need you to send 5 cases for F including spares.

I have established a stock company at the end of the previous year.
The company's name is **.
There are no changes in the address and the phone number.
Also, the delivery address and its name are the same as before.
Please deliver in the same way as before.

I kindly request you to post our company's information on Dealer Network in this page as follows.
Thank you for your time and consideration.

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I have checked F's stock, and I have found some damaged cases.
I need you to send 5 cases for F including spares.

I have established a stock company at the end of the previous year.
The company's name is **.
There are no changes in the address, and the phone number.
Also, the delivery address, and its name, are the same as before.
Please deliver in the same manner as before.

I kindly request you to post our company's information on Dealer Network in this page as follows.
Thank you for your time and consideration.

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“Nourin”…, when imaging the content only from the title, is it the story to tell us the greatness and difficulty of agriculture, like “Gin no Saji (the Silver Spoon)”? I once have thought like that.
No, some parts are serious. Such parts suggest us the issues we must deal with sincerely like the future aspect of Japanese agriculture, which the author Mr. Shiro Shiratory found out though his steady gathering activities.
However, basically it is filled will parody; we can enjoy without thinking anything difficult.
That’s because the title itself has the atmosphere of a certain anime featuring a rock band club….

The story is set in Gifu Prefectural Tamo Agricultural High School.

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“Nourin”…, when imagining the content only from the title, similar to “Gin no Saji (the Silver Spoon), the story probably tell us the magnificence and difficulty of agriculture. At one point in time, I had thought like that.
Well , some parts are serious. There are parts that bring up issues that must dealt with seriously, like the future of Japanese agriculture, which the author Mr. Shiro Shiratory began seeing while steadily collecting resources.
However, it is basically filled with parodies, and it can even be enjoyed with a blank mind.
After all, the title itself gives off the vibe of a certain anime featuring a rock band club….

The story is set in Gifu Prefectural Tamo Agricultural High School.

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Hiyori Iki, the heroine, got in the habit of easily having out-of-body experiences after having a traffic accident when Yato was searching for a missing cat. For curing the habitude, she got involved with Yato, and thus began to get involved with various cases. The gods appearing in this story are all humanly and interesting.

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Hiyori Iki, the heroine, was left with a condition of easily having out-of-body experiences after having a traffic accident when Yato was searching for a missing cat. For curing the condition, she got involved with Yato, and thus began to get involved with various cases. The gods appearing in this story are like humans and interesting.

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I purchase 50 items of Nike GPS watches in black, 47 items in blue so please sell me at $85/items and free shipping cost.
Total amount of 97 items is $8245
If you accept this condition I will make a payment via Paypal immediately
I really want to have more transaction with you in the future.
I am looking for your reply
Thank you and best regards

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Since I will purchased 50 items of Nike GPS watches in black, 47 items in blue, I would like for you to please sell the product at $85 per item with free shipping.
The total is 97 items, and I will pay $8245.↵

If you accept this condition, I will make the payment via Paypal immediately.
I would like to continue to do business with you in the future.
I am awaiting your reply.
Thank you and best regards

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(2) The user shall recognize that the company does not have any obligation to store the uploaded information and should backup the information adequately.

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If you act against the Prohibited Acts, we may conduct unfavorable measures. You may be forced to withdraw from membership, become suspended from usage, all or part of the information uploaded may be deleted, and the areas of accessibility may be changed.

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(5) A posting is referred to an act what the user upload their images to this application.↵

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Article 2 definition.
In this user policy, the meanings of the terms used shall be prescribed respectively as in those items.
(1) This application refers to the smartphone app "A" (iOS/Android) which is provided by our company.
(2) This service refers to all services provided on this application.
(3) A user refers to registered member with intention to use this application.
(4) Information refers to images which can be posted by using this service.
(5) A posting refers to an act where the user upload their images to this application.

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You might need to ship the product from a post office by yourself. Please send it to me with my Japanese address that I have mentioned you on the last message directly. I think it would be the fastest way.

If you would like to ship it back to me through the Amazon, you can ask a return form from the purchase record. But if you would like to do this through the Amazon, it would take much more time since the product would be shipped to my American storage first from the Amazon, then it will be shipped my Japanese office. It also would cost extra $20 as a shipping fee if the product is something wrong.

Thank you for your consideration.

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You might need to ship the product from a post office by yourself. I think sending it to me directly to my Japanese address that I have mentioned you on the last message, will be the fastest way.

If you would like to ship it back to me through Amazon, you can ask for a return form from the purchase record. If you would like to do this through Amazon, it will take much more time. First from Amazon, the product would be shipped to my American storage, then shipped my office in Japan. If there is something wrong with the product after it arrives, I will also repay $20 for shipping.

Sorry to trouble you and thank you for your cooperation.

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Thank you for your polite reply.
At present, because of fund adjustment so I think I will place an order on 15th, It is Okay?
Here is my Paypal account.
gxlc.powder@gmail.com
On ebay, I can not put a gmail.
I will be happy if you could send me an email to this address from next time.
Thank you and best regards

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Thank you for your polite reply.
At present, because of fund adjustments, I am thinking of placing an order on 15th. It this all right?
Here is my Paypal account.
gxlc.powder@gmail.com
I could not put my gmail on ebay.
It would help me a lot if you could send me emails to this address from now on.
Thank you and best regards

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It is sad that the item was broken.

I inquired Japan Post and they said that EMS is covered by insurance.
Please contact the local delivery company at your end to file an insurance claim, as we are told that we are not eligible to do so from here in Japan.

I apologize for the inconvenience, and appreciate your help.

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I am very sorry that the item was broken.

I inquired Japan Post, and they said that EMS is covered by insurance.
Please contact the local delivery company at your end to file an insurance claim, as we are told that we are not eligible to do so from here in Japan.

I apologize for the inconvenience, but please make the application by yourself.

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Thank you for your understanding. I will let you know when the payment is made.

I would like↵
to applogize for inconvenience caused.

Best regards

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Thank you for understanding. I will let you know when the payment is made.

I would like to apologize for any inconvenience I have caused.

Best regards

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I apologize if others have already made the same question.
Can I see the demonstration of the management screen?
Is the translation available in all the languages such as Chinese and Japanese?

I cannot see the demonstration, so it is an error or something?

I'm looking forward to the update.

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I apologize if others have already made the same question.
May I see the demo of the management screen?
Do the translations cover all languages such as Chinese and Japanese?

I cannot see the demo. Is this an error or something?

I am looking forward to the update.

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Hello

The other day I purchased merchandise from you. I am Hasegawa.

I contacted you with a request.

I need the original invoice for that product. If I do not have this I will not be able to transport the goods into the country I need to go.

I am very troubled. Wouldn't you please respond to my request?

Please send the original copy to the address from the time of shipping. If you do not have the address, please send it to this place.

I am sorry for the urgent request, but this is an emergency. Thank you in advance.

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Hello

The other day I purchased merchandise from you. I am Hasegawa.

I contacted you with a request.

I need the original invoice for that product. If I do not have this I will not be able to send the goods into the country I am in.

I am very troubled. Wouldn't you please respond to my request?

Please send the original copy to the address from the time of shipping. If you do not have the address, please send it to this place.

I am sorry for the urgent request, but this is an emergency. Thank you in advance.

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I just received your package.
Unfortunately the bag of the beads was mostly broken and they are dropped all over in the box.
The photo of the box that you sent me was different from the one that I received.
I'm afraid that the box that arrived was supposed to be sent to other place and I might have received the wrong one.
All the beads are mixed up in the box and I'm sorry that I don't think I can make use of them.
I'm sending you the photo again later.
Meanwhile, I couldn't find black beads that I ordered.
I hope you will send next time. Thank you.

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I just received your package.
Unfortunately the bags of the beads were mostly broken and they had spilled all over inside the box.
The photo of the box that you sent me was different from the one that I received.
I am sending you a picture. Please verify if it is the package you sent.↵
Is it possible that the package may have switched somewhere?
All the beads are mixed up in the box and I cannot make use of them.
I'm sending you the photo again later.
Also, I could not find the black beads that you failed to send last time.
Please do not forget to send it next time. Thank you.

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I deeply apologize my mistakes. I found that you were not the person who made a successful bid on my last product.

Would you please take back your cancellation as I mistakenly cancelled your bid.

The total cost is $85 and let me send an invoice from Paypal about the rest $19.
I have sent you a wrong Paypal invoice.

The product is a razor cover that costs $5.
Please let me know if you would like to cancel your order.

Again I apologize causing you troubles.

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I deeply apologize for my mistakes. I found that you were not the person who made a successful bid on my last product.

Would you please take back your cancellation as I mistakenly cancelled your bid.

The total cost is $85 and I will send an invoice from Paypal regarding the remaining $19.
I have sent you the wrong Paypal invoice.

The product is a razor cover that costs $5.
Please let me know if you would like to cancel your order.

Again I apologize for causing you trouble.