nyincali (nyincali) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for your business.
This review should be given to a product but not to us.
May I ask to remove it?
Regards,

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Thank you for your business.
This review should be given to a product but not to us.
May I ask you to remove it?
Regards,

元の翻訳
中国企業として、Tencentはアジアにおける絵文字ステッカーの人気に十分に気づくことになるだろう。しかし、このリリースはセルフィー分野における競争に参入することも意味する。Tencentは「セルフィーを追い込め」と声明しているといえる。



「WeChatで、弊社は、人々をつなぐよう努め、伝統的なコミュニケーション形式を次のレベルに導くよう改革します」とTencentのInternatioal Business GroupのVice PresidentであるPoshu Yeung氏はe27に語った。

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中国企業として、Tencentはアジアにおける絵文字ステッカーの人気に十分に気づくことになるだろう。しかし、このリリースはセルフィー分野における競争に参入することも意味する。Tencentは「セルフィーを追い込め」と声明しているといえる。



「WeChatで、弊社は、人々をつなぐよう努め、伝統的なコミュニケーション形式を次のレベルに導くよう改革します」とTencentのInternatioal Business Groupの副社長であるPoshu Yeung氏はe27に語った。

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
We called PAYPAL before.
We paid $213.42 to ＊＊ address.
Since the payment was surely completed, please confirm the following number.
＊＊＊
Also, on the product's page, it's not available to pay by PAYPAL, is it?
We have confirmed with PAYPAL that the payment to ＊＊ address has been completed definitely.
Could you confirm it again please?
Thank you very much indeed.

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Thank you for contacting us.
We just called PAYPAL.
We paid $213.42 to ＊＊'s address.
Since the payment has surely been completed, please check it with the following number.
＊＊＊
Also, on the product's page, it's not available to pay by PAYPAL, is it?
We have checked with PAYPAL, and they told us that the payment to ＊＊'s address has been completed.
Could you confirm it again please?
Thank you very much indeed.

元の翻訳
特徴：
―安全、すり減ることがないDuro-Linkアンカー
―しっかり固定されたロープ
―人間科学的に滑らないよう構造されたハンドル
―安全で調節可能なインラインバックル
―工場では作られていないストラップ
―耐久性のある二つのイージー。イン・フット Cradeles

利点：
―すばやく幅を変えられるようにデザインされた分割アンカー
―V字型で、太く曲げられる掛け具によって、ストラップを簡単に調節できる
―Duro-Linkアンカーによって木の足や棒にストラップをつけることができる
―検査を重ねた耐久性のある構造
ーいつでもどこでも全身トレーニングができるように持ち運び可能
―重さを感じられないくらいの軽量

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特徴：
―安全で、すり減ることがないDuro-Linkアンカー
―しっかり固定されたロープ
―人間科学的に滑らないよう構造されたハンドル
―安全で調節可能なインラインバックル
―工業用つり下げストラップ
―耐久性のある二つのイージー　イン・フット Cradeles

利点：
―すばやく幅を変えられるようにデザインされた分割アンカー
―V字型で、太く曲げられる掛け具によって、ストラップを簡単に調節できる
―Duro-Linkアンカーによって木の足や棒にストラップをつけることができる
―検査を重ねた耐久性のある構造
ーいつでもどこでも全身トレーニングができるように持ち運び可能
―重さを感じられないくらいの軽量

元の翻訳
注文商品の発送から最低でも7日ほど、あなたの口座を信用するためにください。もしこの期間中にあなたの口座に変化が無ければ、今回のお会計に関して返金がなされると考えてよいかと思いますので、確認のために私どもへお知らせください。

会計の返金を得るために返金ボタンを使う際は、返金を利用できる売り場で商品を選ぶ必要があります。

また、eBayのEbates.comでお買い物を終了したあと、一度ウィンドウを閉じてから再度新しいウィンドウで新たな買い物を始められる事をお勧めします。

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注文商品の発送から最低でも7日ほど、あなたの口座へ入金がなされるまでお待ち下さい。もしこの期間中にあなたの口座が更新がされなく、あなたの購入したものがキャシュバック対象品であると思う場合は、確認のために私どもへお知らせください。

会計の返金を得るために返金ボタンを使う際は、返金を利用できる売り場で商品を選ぶ必要があります。

また、eBayのEbates.comでお買い物を終了したあと、一度ウィンドウを閉じてから再度新しいウィンドウで新たな買い物を始められる事をお勧めします。

元の翻訳
This account is indipendent. I opened this account for starting my business.
I cannot understand why it has been stopped.

As you require the passport, I applyed already and waiting it to be issued.
If it is doubtful, please wait for my updates.

I comply the term and conditions of Amazon, and I have a strong confidence on my indipendence of the account.
thank you for your attention.

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This account is indipendent. I opened this account for starting my business.
I cannot understand why it has been stopped.

As you required the passport, I have applyed and am waiting for it to be issued.
If it is doubtful, please check the photocopy of my passport I will send.

I comply with the term and conditions of Amazon, and I have a strong confidence on my indipendence of the account.
thank you for your attention.

元の翻訳
When ** was dealing with you, we sometimes used Paypal for payment. Could you accept Paypal payment? We want to use it because it's fast. Can we only use EFT?
How about a warranty of battery?
The company told me that the person in charge was changed.
Could you work with us again?

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When ** was dealing with you, we sometimes used Paypal for payment. Could you accept Paypal payment? We want to use it because it's fast. Can we only use EFT?
How about a warranty of battery?
The company told me that the person in charge had been changed.
Can't you work with us again?

元の翻訳
A few days ago, we sent the item that you ordered. However, the item came back to us because the perfume is one of the controlled commodities for the international mail. We would like to refund the total amount of the purchase price.
We are very sorry that we could not deliver the item you ordered.
We appreciate your understanding.

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A few days ago, we sent the item that you ordered. However, the item came back to us because the perfume is one of the restricted items for the international mail. We would like to refund the total amount of the purchase price.
We are very sorry that we could not deliver the item you ordered.
We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your message.
Your ordered item is being restored by now.
Please contact the post office for receiving the item.
We will also talk over about it.

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Thanks for your message.
Currently, your ordered item has been stored.
Please contact the post office to receive the item.
We will also contact them.

元の翻訳
どのような緊急時に、彼が必要とするアリババは、その最初の場所で拡大しなければならないのか?↵
なぜそれは中国の中に丁度留まることができないのか？
MG:アリババは中国の中で成長することができる為に多くの年と同様にますます多くの人々が中流階級に入る。それは世界規模の野心を持っていた。グーグルとフェイスブックそして南東アジアでとても一般的だ。

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そもそもどの位すぐにアリババは、拡大する必要があるだろうか？なぜ中国に留まっていることができないのか？
MG:より多くの人々が中流階級の仲間入りをしているのだから、アリババ長年に渡り中国で成長出来るはずである。↵
アリババは世界的になる野心を持っている。それはグーグルやフェイスブックと何ら変わりなく、そしてそれは南東アジアでとても人気がある。

元の翻訳
Hello
Thank you for you enquiry.
The period of validity of this product is roughly 3 years.
I will send the gift as your request delivery method.
Currently the product is very popular in Japan so there may be some delay in the shipping. I am really sorry.
I will send the product when preparation are complete.
I am sorry but until shipping I will have to make you wait.
Thank you for using our shop.

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Hello
Thank you for you inquiry.
The period of validity of this product is roughly 3 years.
Regarding the method of delivery, I will ship this as a gift as your requested.
Currently the product is very popular in Japan, so there may be some delay in the shipping. I am really sorry.
I will send the product when preparation are complete.
I am sorry but until shipping I will have to make you wait.
Thank you for using our shop.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you very much for your inquiry.
The product expires in roughly 3 years.
We will send you the product as a gift as you requested.
I would like to apologize in advance; since it is very popular in Japan, it may take some time before we will be able to send it out.
We will send it as soon as we are ready.
Thank you very much for your patience and please wait for a while until we ship the product.
Thank you very much again for choosing our shop.

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Hello.
Thank you very much for your inquiry.
The term of validity for this product is about 3 years.
We will ship you the product as a gift as you requested.
However, I would like to apologize in advance that since this product is very popular in Japan right now, shipment may be delayed.
We will ship it as soon as we get it ready.
Thank you very much for your patience and please wait for a while until we ship the product.
Thank you very much again for choosing our shop.

元の翻訳
I have not received the invoice for Order0923, yet.
Could you send it to me within today?

I have checked that No. 1165 and 1188 have been shipped.
However, I don't see that Order No. 1195 seems to be not being shipped yet.
Why hasn't it been shipped yet?
If it is on hold because of a part of the inventory is out of stock, then could you send the ones which are ready to be shipped?

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I have not received the invoice for Order0923 yet.
Could you send it to me by the end of the day?

I have checked that No. 1165 and 1188 have been shipped.
However, it doesn't seems that Order No. 1195, which I ordered on Sep. 19, has not been shipped yet.
Why hasn't it been shipped yet?
If it is on hold because of a part of the inventory is out of stock, then could you ship the items in stock?

元の翻訳
As I received the item I won in the bid the other day, I have tested its operation.
I found out one problem.
The "TREBLE" at the right channel is not working.
I though it might be caused by the loose wiper contact and rotated the volume back and forth many time, but it did not help anything.
I am very disappointed as I submitted the successful bit because I heard it was tested and its operation was confirmed.
The item cannot be used without repair.
Could you issue a partial refund as the repair expenses?
I look forward to hearing from you.

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As I received the item I won in the bid the other day, I have tested its operation.
I found out one problem.
The "TREBLE" at the right channel is not working.
I though it might be caused by the loose wiper contact and rotated the volume back and forth many times, but it did not help anything.
I am very disappointed as I submitted the successful bit because I heard it was tested and its operation was confirmed.
The item cannot be used without repair.
Could you issue a partial refund as the repair expenses?
I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
As you say, your order seems to be suspended.
Since this order will be shipped by Amazon, so I need to confirm to Amazon about the detail.
I’ll arrange that Amazon will make a contact to you, so please wait a moment.
If you don’t get a contact from Amazon, please toss an inquiry to them.

I have received the following message from my customer.
Please make a contact to the customer regarding to the status of payment and shipment.
Please contact me too if anything.

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As you say, your order seems to be suspended.
Since this order will be shipped by Amazon, I need to confirm to Amazon about the detail.
I’ll arrange that Amazon will make a contact to you, so please wait a moment.
If you don’t get a contact from Amazon, please inquire at them.

I have received the following message from my customer.
Please contact the customer regarding the status of payment and shipment.
Please contact me too if anything.

元の翻訳
Be appointed as the opening theme song of the TV anime "Total Eclipse".
Moreover, on 7th November, held the Premium live named "Koda Kumi Premium Night～Love & Songs～" starting at Osaka Hall to Tokyo, Nagoya, Fukushima.
On December 2012, released "恋しくて"- the best love ballad song which to be continued of the song "愛のうた" which released in 2007.
On Ferbuary 2013, released the second cover album "Color The Cover"

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Be appointed as the opening theme song of the TV anime "Total Eclipse".
Moreover, on November 7th, held the Premium live named "Koda Kumi Premium Night～Love & Songs～" starting at Osaka Hall to Tokyo, Nagoya, Fukushima.
In December 2012, released "恋しくて"- the best love ballad song which to be continued of the song "愛のうた" which released in 2007.
On Ferbuary 2013, released the second cover album "Color The Cover"

元の翻訳
In June continuously the same year of 2008 , KUMI KODA have achieved the collaboration
and the talk show with foreign big-shot artist,Lady Gaga ,which is hosted by the representative　magazine,"ViVi" of Japan.
In October of 2008, the first time KUMI KODA did a live performance without any supporting acts in
Taiwan as the first overseas music event.
KUMI KODA won the Best Jeanist award for 4 consecutive years from 2006 to 2009.↵
and won an award at Nail Queen in "Artist section" for 3 consecutive years from 2006 to 2008,
which was elected the Music Hall of Fame and Museum.

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In July continuously the same year of 2008 , KUMI KODA have achieved the collaboration
and the talk show with foreign big-shot artist,Lady Gaga ,which is hosted by the representative　magazine,"ViVi" of Japan.
In October of 2008, the first time KUMI KODA did a live performance without any supporting acts in
Taiwan as the first overseas music event.
KUMI KODA won the Best Jeanist award for 4 consecutive years from 2006 to 2009, and won an award at Nail Queen in "Artist section" for 3 consecutive years from 2006 to 2008,
which was elected the Music Hall of Fame and Museum.

元の翻訳
Thank you for having sent me an account form.

Now I am filling it but there have been some questions which I don't know how to answer.

"Accts. Payable Name"
Is it necessary to fill up? What exactly should I write in here?

"Freight Forwarder"
Do I have to fill up this as well?
I have a business partner in Florida which sends our products to Japan, perhaps could it be the name of the company?

"INTERNATIONALE ACCOUNT FORM"
To which address should I sent it after I finish all works?

Thank you.

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Thank you for sending me an account form.

Now I am filling it out, but I have some questions about it.

"Accts. Payable Name"
Is it necessary to fill out? What should I write in here?

"Freight Forwarder"
Do I have to fill out this as well?
I have a business partner in Florida who sends our products to Japan, perhaps could it be the name of the company?

"INTERNATIONALE ACCOUNT FORM"
To which address should I sent it after I finish all works?

Thank you.