noa (noak) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
レンズにほこりがついていますか？
袋がついていれば良かったんですが。
買おうかと思うんですが、少し値段が安ければと思います。
値下げできますか？
よろしくお願いします。

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レンズに少しほこりがついていますか？
袋がついていれば良かったんですが。
買おうかと思うんですが、少し値段が安ければと思います。
値下げできますか？
よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳

And ... let's drink!

Minoh beer

Minoh has a local beer. In fact, this minoh beer has received a prestigious award not only in Japan but also in the United States and the United Kingdom.
The label (monkey) of the beer at the right end is very nice because it shows its local taste.

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And ... let's drink!

Minoh beer

Minoh has local beers. In fact, this Minoh beer has received prestigious awards not only in Japan but also in the United States and the United Kingdom.
The label (monkey) of the beer at the right end is very nice because it shows its local taste.

元の翻訳
I didn't know exactly how to purchase so I purchased on ebay as usual.
Please send the product carefully to Japan so that it won't get damaged.
I am looking forward to the arrival.

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I didn't know exactly how to purchase so I purchased on ebay as usual.
Please send the product carefully to Japan so that it won't get damaged.
I am looking forward to its arrival.

元の翻訳
The reason why this PC software cannot recognize can be the problem of product key.
In that case, we are going to issue the new one after we check your key.

Please do not hesitate to make an inquiry to our store.

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The reason why this PC software cannot recognize [?] can be the problem of product key [?].
In that case, we are going to issue the new one after we check your key.

Please do not hesitate to make an inquiry to our store.

元の翻訳
"Audio, Home Theater Exhibition 2013" will be held for 3 days from October 18 to 20 at Time 24 in Odaiba, Tokyo. The host is Japan Audio Society.

In addition to the exhibition of audio instrument and many seminars and trial listening, there is going to be various events such as experiencing the famous high resolution sound source, the demonstration of super high vision image(8k) by NHK, the show of new releases by CASIOPEA 3rd, the string quartet by women, workshop, trial listening for the combined component stereo, public recording of music bird etc.

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"Audio, Home Theater Exhibition 2013" will be held for 3 days from October 18th to 20th at Time 24 Building in Odaiba, Tokyo. It will be sponsored by Japan Audio Society.

In addition to the exhibition of audio components and many seminars and auditions, various events will also be held such as a free audition of the famous high-resolution sound source, the demonstration of super high vision image(8k) by NHK, the show of new releases by CASIOPEA 3rd, a female string quartet, music studios, an audition of combination component stereo, a public recording of music bird etc.

元の翻訳
実は弊社のサイトから注文できるフレームはそれぞれのメーカーの流通センターから直接注文しています。
そうすることにより、未使用の新しい商品を受け取ることが保障されるのです。弊社ではお客様がフレームを試着することはありません。そうすることによって、100%本物で、新しく、製造元から直接眼鏡を受け取ることができるので、お客様にも朗報かと思います。もし大きな注文があれば在庫切れになることもありますが、だいたいの場合さまざまなメーカーの在庫を用意しております。

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実は弊社のサイトから注文できるフレームはそれぞれのメーカーの流通センターから直接注文しています。
そうすることにより、未使用の新しい商品が手に入ることを保障できるのです。弊社ではお客様がフレームを試着することはありません。そうすることによって、100%本物で、新しく、製造元からできたての眼鏡を受け取ることができる（←手に入る）ので、お客様にも朗報かと思います。もし大きな注文があれば在庫切れになることもありますが、だいたいの場合さまざまなメーカーの在庫を用意しております。

元の翻訳
Bonjour,
Je puex envoyer le colis au Hawaii.
La charge d'expédition est ¥1,200(€9-10).
(avec assurance et il prend 3 jours)
Pouvez vous m'envoyer ¥1200?
(Parce qu'il y a une charge pour changer l'Euro au Yen au Japon)
Donnez-moi l'adresse du Hawaii
Merci beaucoup.

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Bonjour,
Je peux envoyer le colis à Hawaii.
Les frais d'expédition sont de ¥1,200(€9-10).
(avec assurance et le délai est de 3 jours)
Pouvez-vous m'envoyer ¥1200?
(Parce qu'il y a une commission pour changer des euros aux yens )
Donnez-moi votre adresse.
Merci beaucoup.

元の翻訳
"Ochudo" is a trail lapping around the middle of Mt. Fuji.
Mt. Fuji that you can look up from there and the view around Lake Kawaguchi below your eyes are spectacular sights.
However, long time ago, this trail was for the people who could not aim to go to the top.
While you walk along the forest limit, you can also see the plants living in Mt. Fuji.

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"Ochudo" is a trail lapping around the middle of Mt. Fuji.
From there you will see spectacular sights. You can look up to Mt. Fuji and down below to the view around Lake Kawaguchi.
However, a long time ago, this trail was for the people who could not aim to go to the top.
While you walk along the forest boundaries you can also see the plants living on Mt. Fuji.

元の翻訳
中国は、主に有機食品や高品質の商品を取り扱うネット上の食料品店のネットワークの成長を経験してきた。Benlaiは健康食品の販売を促進するeコマースのホームページで、eコマース大手のTaobaoもまた安全な有機食品を提供する市場を持っている。にもかかわらずXiachufangの1000万人もの常連ユーザはYoudiantianが最先端にいるとしている。コンテンツとコマースの区別を曖昧にすることに関しては、YoudiantianはProvisionに類似しているようだ。ProvisionはNew York Timesの元料理担当編集長が創設者の一人である52foodという料理のコミュニティに従属するネット上の食料品店である。

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中国は、主に有機食品や高品質の商品を取り扱うネット上の食料品店のネットワークの成長を経験してきた。Benlaiは健康食品の販売を促進するeコマースのホームページで、eコマース大手のTaobaoもまた安全な有機食品を提供する市場を持っている。にもかかわらずXiachufangの1000万人もの常連ユーザはYoudiantianが最先端にいるとしている。コンテンツとコマースの区別を曖昧にすることに関しては、YoudiantianはProvisionに類似しているようだ。ProvisionはNew York Timesの元料理担当編集長が創設者の一人である52foodという料理のコミュニティに属するネット上の食料品子会社である。

元の翻訳
At the night of 2nd, the teacher is going to tell me what Ranny discussed about.
Please wait for me to send you a message on 3rd.

I told the teachers that Ranny wants to invite them to Philippines.
They were very happy to hear that and would like to be there.

If they could, it is going to be for about a week from November 4th.
Do you think you can help them then?
If you will invite the teachers, they are going to arrange their schedule.

The teacher said you and your brother is going to be an important person for development in the future.
They are looking forward to see you next time.

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On the night of the 2nd, the teacher is going to tell me what Ranny discussed about.
Please wait for me to send you a message on the 3rd.

I told the teachers that Ranny wants to invite them to the Philippines.
They were very happy to hear that and would like to be there.

If they can, it is going to be for about a week from November 4th.
Do you think you can help them then?
If you will invite the teachers, they are going to arrange their schedule.

The teacher said you and your brother are going to be important people for development in the future.
They are looking forward to seeing you next time.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your feedback.
I feel so sorry because it was a negative feedback.
It was our fault not to notice that it didn't mention it was a do-it-yourself kid on the product information page.
We sincerely apologize.
However, I would like you to know that it was not me who created the webpage for the products.

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Thank you for your feedback.
It is unfortunate that the feedback was negative.
We were at fault for not realizing that the product information page did not mention that the product was a do-it-yourself kit.
We sincerely apologize.
However, I would like you to know that I was not the one who created the webpage for the products.