Nick Hallsworth (nick_hallsworth) — 付けたレビュー

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We are sorry for waiting you so long.

We are planning to ship your item tomorrow.

We are apologize again for waiting you, but the item will soon to be delivered after shipping.

Please be patient for a while.

Thank you and regards.

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We are sorry for making you wait so long.

We are planning to ship your item the day after tomorrow.

We are apologize again for keeping you waiting, but the item will be delivered soon after shipping.

Please be patient for a while.

Thank you and regards.

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I am very sorry to have kept you waiting.

The product would be delivered day after tomorrow.

I am very sorry to keep you waiting, and it would not take too long to arrive. Thank you for your understanding.

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I am very sorry to have kept you waiting.

The product will be dispatched the day after tomorrow.

I am very sorry to keep you waiting, and it will not take too long to arrive. Thank you for your understanding.

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I finally leave this country today. It was about 10 days business trip and from next month, I will have the business trip like this every month so it was a good experience.

In Cambodia, Singapore and Japan, I want to try new things with strong will.

I am really unskilled but I will do my best.

I am really excited when I think like what kind of dream I can make them reality? or what does my future like? through my business.

Until the dreams come true, please be with me and see the process together.

I love you. Thank you.

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I finally leave this country today. The business trip lasted for about 10 days, and from next month, I will make a business trip like this every month, so it was a good experience.

In Cambodia, Singapore and Japan, I want to try new things with strong will.

I am really unskilled but I will do my best.

I am really excited when I think like what kind of dream I can make them reality? or what does my future like? through my business.

Until the dreams come true, please be with me and see the process together.

I love you. Thank you.

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I am nixon300itogo who recently purchased ＜商品名＞ from you on eBay.
First, please allow me to thank you for the prompt and polite response!
I am selling the product currently as one of the authorized agent in Japan.
As such, I am considering to purchase on a regular basis from you in the future.

As transactions on eBay incur a transaction fee, would it be possible for me to purchase directly from you?
I can provide payment through Paypal.

I would really like to work together with you!

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I am nixon300itogo who recently purchased ＜商品名＞ from you on eBay.
First, please allow me to thank you for the prompt and polite response!
I am selling the product currently as one of the authorized agents in Japan.
As such, I am considering purchasing from you on a regular basis in the future.

As transactions on eBay incur a transaction fee, would it be possible for me to purchase directly from you?
I can provide payment through Paypal.

I would really like to work together with you!

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We're planning a compilation album that features tracks by Japanese male artists based on the following concept. The target demographic is females in their 20's to early 30's. We're going to select the tracks that can cheer the women who are up to their ears in work but keep working positively. In addition, we are going to limit the tracks to those by male artists only. For the jacket design, we are going to employ a renowned photographer who appeals to women.

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We're planning a compilation album that features tracks by Japanese male artists based on the following concept. The target demographic is females in their 20's to early 30's. We're going to select tracks that will encourage women who are up to their ears in work but keep working positively. In addition, we are going to limit the tracks to those by male artists only. For the jacket design, we are going to employ a renowned photographer who appeals to women.