翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: プレゼンテーションの発表文です。丁寧な表現がしたいです。よろしくお願いします。

日本語

す。非常口は合計8カ所です。

11/05のJL950便で利用される機材はボーイング767です。ビジネスクラス30席、エコ ノミークラス207席の計237席です。非常口は合計8カ所です。

大韓航空は1962年設立、就航都市は45カ国125都市、保有機材は149機です。
日本航空は1951年設立、就航都市は40カ国229空港、保有機材は214機です。

大韓航空は2012年の世界の革新的な航空会社ランキングで一番に選ばれています。仁川国際空港をアジアと北米を

英語

There are the total 8 emergency exits.

JL950 service will use the Boeing 767 plane on November 5. The plane has total 237 seast, including 30 business seats and 207 coach seats. There are the total 8 emergency exits.

Korean Air was founded in 1962, has provided their services in 125 cities or 45 countries, and has 149 planes.
Japan Airline was founded in 1951, has provided their services in 229 airports or 40 countries, and has 214 planes.

Korea Air has won the first position in the contest of inovative air companies in the world 2012.

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newbie_translatorはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/15 14:03:12

元の翻訳
There are the total 8 emergency exits.

JL950 service will use the Boeing 767 plane on November 5. The plane has total 237 seast, including 30 business seats and 207 coach seats. There are the total 8 emergency exits.

Korean Air was founded in 1962, has provided their services in 125 cities or 45 countries, and has 149 planes.
Japan Airline was founded in 1951, has provided their services in 229 airports or 40 countries, and has 214 planes.

Korea Air has won the first position in the contest of inovative air companies in the world 2012.

修正後
There are a total of 8 emergency exits.

JL950 service will use the Boeing 767 plane on November 5. The plane has total 237 seats, including 30 business seats and 207 coach seats. There are a total 8 emergency exits.

Korean Air was founded in 1962, has provided their services in 125 cities or 45 countries, and has 149 planes.
Japan Airline was founded in 1951, has provided their services in 229 airports or 40 countries, and has 214 planes.

Korea Air was selected with a ranking of first place for innovative air companies in the world of 2012.

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