Kevin (intswson0124) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
We apologized about the guitar was out of stock.
We are writing this to tell about we've got the same guitar.
It is really good condition also there is no problem with sounds.
There is some scratch near by the strap pin.
This guitar is made between 2012 to 2013.
On the eBay it sells with $A, because we apologize for inconvenience, when we direct transaction than we will provide the guitar with same price as before include shipping.
We kindly ask for your consideration.

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We apologized [tense confusion] that the guitar was out of stock.
We are writing to tell you that we have the same guitar.
It is in really good condition, and also there is no problem with sounds.
There is some scratch near the strap pin.
This guitar is made between 2012 to 2013.
On eBay it sells for $A, because we apologize for the inconvenience, when we direct transaction than [unclear] we will provide the guitar for the same price as before including shipping.
We kindly ask for your consideration.

元の翻訳
I would like to buy (37 Pieces) by 37 species, each one I have chosen from among the key ring that you exhibit it.

Will you be able be sent by USPS PRIORITY Mail summarizes the seven?

Shipping it will be US $ 263.45 at the time of check out in your settings, ↵
But if you can and then refund the difference amount after checkout.

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I would like to buy (37 Pieces) one each of 37 types of key rings among those you have listed.

Will you be able be sent all of them by USPS PRIORITY Mail in one package?

As I will be required to pay US $ 263.45 as the shipping charge at the time of checkout with your setting. I will purchase them if you would refund me the difference in the shipping charges after I checkout.

元の翻訳
If you can tell me the product name, whether there is a stock, Maker or the, I will contact to supplier.

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If you tell me the product name, I will contact the maker or supplier to ask if it is in stock or not.

元の翻訳
'Send Anywhere'は このアプリが使われている”月列のアクティブデバイス”が200,000を超えた、　　そのうち カン氏は 65％が月例アクティブユーザーベースを構成するであると見積もっている。チームは今年末までに月列アクティブユーザーベンチマークが百万人を超すのを願っている。

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'Send Anywhere'のアプリを使用している”月間アクティブ実機数”が200,000を超えた、カン氏はそのうち65％が月間アクティブ利用者層であると見積もっている。チームは今年末までに月間アクティブユーザー百万人のベンチマークを超えることを願っている。

元の翻訳
The setting of our system includes a mistake, a product of the indication exhibited it by mistake.
Currently, the system is improved.

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There were some setting errors with our system, thus we ended up listing the item that you have mentioned by mistake.
Currently, the system is improved.

元の翻訳
The setting of our system includes a mistake, a product of the indication exhibited it by mistake.
Currently, the system is improved.

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The setting of our system includes a mistake, a product pointed out was exhibited by mistake.
Currently, the system is improved.

元の翻訳
The setting of our system includes a mistake, a product of the indication exhibited it by mistake.
Currently, the system is improved.

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The setting of our system includes a mistake, a product of the indication exhibited it by mistake.
Currently, the system is improved.↵
↵
[There was an error in the setting of our system and the indicated(or mentioned) product was listed by mistake.]

元の翻訳
By football in the world peace

Send from Japan to the world

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Peace to the world through football

Bring from Japan to the world

元の翻訳
Thank you for a reply

Please let me ask an additional question.
An alert displayed when I do not check all items when I register,Could you tell me which file you control it with.
If I click thumbnail in the case of an animation, I thought that you should be able to display POP in improving like Lightbox, but, orrespondence except YouTube seems to be difficult.

I am satisfied as an impression very much, that I set it in various ways. A function is abundant and, the indication speed of the page is particularly good to be fast. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

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Thank you for your reply

Please let me ask an additional question.
An alert is displayed when I do not enter all items when I register, could you tell me which file controls that?
I thought it would be better for videos that if you display a pop up like Lightbox, when I click on a thumbnail, but this may be difficult to implement except for YouTube.

I am very satisfied after trying various settings. There are many functions and the fast page display speed is particularly good. Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Would you largely make it inexpensive, if I purchase several?

Is there have any Japanese company making a deal elsewhere?

I want to purchase with a low price of Japan.


In the one that import it from the United States and sell,↵
The sales price of the low is 13,000 yen in Japan (approximately $ 125).

We can not win at price competition by the price that you showed us.

I am terribly sorry only for this demand,
We will purchase it in large quantities.(Or we will purchase other model) that being the case,
can I have your consideration?

↵
It continues regularly and will purchase it in future.

We ask for your consideration on this matter.↵

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Would you give me a big discount for purchasing several items?

Is there any Japanese company making a deal elsewhere?

I would like to purchase it with the lowest price in Japan.


The one person importing the product from the United States sells it with the lowest price of 13,000 yen ((approximately $125) in Japan.

We can not win the price competition by the price that you showed us.

I am sorry for this demand,
But we are planning to purchase it in large quantities (or we may purchase other model as well).
Would you please reestimate the price?

I will keep placing an order.

Thank you for your consideration on this matter.

元の翻訳
Would you largely make it inexpensive, if I purchase several?

Is there have any Japanese company making a deal elsewhere?

I want to purchase with a low price of Japan.


In the one that import it from the United States and sell,
The sales price of the low is 13,000 yen in Japan (approximately $ 125).

We can not win at price competition by the price that you showed us.

I am terribly sorry only for this demand,
We will purchase it in large quantities.(Or we will purchase other model) that being the case,
can I have your consideration?


It continues regularly and will purchase it in future.

We ask for your consideration on this matter.

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Would you largely make it inexpensive, if I purchase several?
[How many do I have to buy to receive a larger discount?]↵

Is there have any Japanese company making a deal elsewhere?
[Do you do business with any other companies in Japan?]↵

I want to purchase with a low price of Japan.
[We are hoping to buy at the lowest price in Japan.]

In the one that import it from the United States and sell,
The sales price of the low is 13,000 yen in Japan (approximately $ 125).
[Out of those that import from the U.S. and sell in Japan, the lowest retail price is...]
↵
We can not win at price competition by the price that you showed us.
[We cannot compete with the price you gave us.]↵

I am terribly sorry only for this demand,
We will purchase it in large quantities.(Or we will purchase other model) that being the case,
can I have your consideration?
[I am sorry for making a lot of requests but I plan to buy in large quantities (or will also buy other models), so could you please take it into consideration?]

It continues regularly and will purchase it in future.↵
[I will continue to buy from you regularly in the future]

We ask for your consideration on this matter.

元の翻訳
こんにちは、これは、あなたに我々の順序部が24時間以内にこの命令を処理しているということを知しています。

８．私のハンモック姿勢は天気によって抵抗しますか？

Vivereによって提供されるすべての金属ハンモック姿勢は、鉄骨をさびることから保護するためにおおわれている粉です。
しかし、姿勢が年々外にしておかれるならば、それはさびの合図を示し始めてるかもしれません。
あなたのハンモックがこの場合、軽く、さびた地域を紙やすりで磨いて、あっているスプレー・ペンキでもう一度カバーしてください。

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こんにちは。これは、あなたに弊社の発注部が24時間以内にこの注文を処理しているということをご連絡しています。

８．私のハンモックスタンドは天候に耐えられます（耐候性です）か？

Vivereによって提供されるすべての金属ハンモックスタンドは、鉄骨をさびることから保護するためにおおわれている粉です。
しかし、スタンドが年々外に出しておかれるならば、それはさびの合図を示し始めるかもしれません。
その場合、あなたのハンモックを、軽く、さびた部分を紙やすりで磨いて、あっているスプレー・ペンキでもう一度カバーしてください。