honeylemon (honeylemon003) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
There is improved version of the golf club which is the cover of the toe side of the sole part was screwed on, since after the incident of when a golfer, Charles Howell III used the early model of the golf club at the tournament, he was disqualified for rule violation as he was using a golf club with missing parts.

I think it is a early model of the golf club as a plate is mounted.
I assume the improved version has a head with a plate which mounted tight with special glue for preventing it from coming off.
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I am sorry for the hassle, but the customer's demand is so much different between one with the screws and without.

Can I purchase your items on ebay?

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There is improved version of the golf club which is the cover of the toe side of the sole part was screwed on, since after the incident of when a golfer, Charles Howell III used the early model of the golf club at the tournament, he was disqualified for rule violation as he was using a golf club with missing parts.
(There is an improved version of the head of which toe side’s cover was fixed by screw in response to the disqualification incident of a golfer Charles Howell III from a tournament due to drop off of a part(s) while using its early model.)↵

I think it is a early model of the golf club as a plate is mounted.
I assume the improved version has a head with a plate which mounted tight with special glue for preventing it from coming off.
I am sorry for the hassle, but the customer's demand is so much different between one with the screws and without.
(Since you told me that it has a plate attached, shall I understand it as the early version model?↵
There seems that there is a latest model of which plate is firmly affixed to the head using a special adhesive solvent to prevent it from dropping off.
I am sorry for this minute thing, but I would like to confirm it because with screw or not will greatly affect the demand.)↵
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Can I purchase your items on ebay?↵
(Could you sell me the item you have been currently listing on eBay?)↵

元の翻訳
Each 3 cards have few little scratches.
Also one of them has a around 0.5 mm of breaking trace on the corner of the card,
There is no major breaking traces nor stains.
I think they are in average second-hand conditions.
2 of the cards are north America edition, and another one is EU edition.

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Each of the 3 cards have a few little scratches.
Also one of them has around a 0.5 mm trace of a tear on the corner of the card,
There is no major traces of tears nor stains.
I think they are in average second-hand conditions.
2 of the cards are the North America editions, and the other one is the EU edition.

元の翻訳
UK

I received your complaints, but I received a cancelling request after we dispatched the item.
I can not give you a refund at this moment as the item has not come back to us.
I will give you the refund following the B policy. Thank you for your understanding.
Do you have any questions or problems?

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UK

I received your complaints, but I received a cancelling request after we sent the item.
I cannot give you a refund at this moment as the item has not come back to us.
I will give you the refund following the B policy. Thank you for your understanding.
Is there any problems?

元の翻訳
Unfortunately, the Item has been lost with the matter of the post office.
I have posted the item on 3rd September by air from Japan post.
It normally takes about 2 weeks for the item to get to Canada.
But I will take a responsibility as a seller.
I can not resend the item as they are all sold out.
So please accept refund as an apology.

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Unfortunately, the Item has been lost with the matter of the post office.
I posted the item on 3rd September by air from Japan post.
It normally takes about 2 weeks for the item to get to Canada.
But I will take responsibility as a seller.
I can not resend the item as they are all sold out.
So please accept a refund as an apology.

元の翻訳
I will make the payment by tomorrow.
Could you please make the invoice with a little lower price than the actual price and attach to the email?

Do you think you still have more items in stock?
I would like to order the following items.

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I will make the payment by tomorrow.
Could you please make the price a little bit lower than the tagged price and attach it to the invoice?

Do you still have more items in stock?
I would like to order the following items.

元の翻訳
I would like to cancel this order.

I am sorry about this, it because one of the reason is that I can not pay by paypal.

I am afraid but could you please send me the information about how to cancel the item as a seller?

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I would like to cancel this order.

I am sorry about this, one of the reasons is that I can not pay by paypal.

I am really sorry to bother but could you please request the cancellation from the sellers side?

元の翻訳
Japan Tourism Association will hold a renewal travel amusement park 'Travel Fair Japan 2013' in Sunshine city cultural exhibition hall for 3 days from 8th to 10th November. Last year, they had exhibitors from 130 areas, companies and groups and delivered 270 exhibition stands, and had 93,099 visitors.

It will be 18th this time, we will have 7 different areas for each themes, and we expect more inland tourists to visit than ever. Not only 'seeing' and 'knowing', we offer the experiment of enjoyment of travelling with 'Amusement park of travel' and make an appeal tourism resources of each areas.

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Japan Tourism Association will hold a renewal travel amusement park 'Travel Fair Japan 2013' in Sunshine city cultural exhibition hall for 3 days from 8th to 10th of November. Last year, we had exhibitors from 130 areas, companies and groups and exhibited 270 stands, and had 93,099 visitors.

It will be the 18th this time, we will have 7 different areas for each themes, and expect to attract more domestic tourists. Not only 'seeing' and 'knowing', we offer the experience of enjoyment of travelling with 'Amusement park of travel' and appeal more tourists with regional tourism resources.

元の翻訳
これらのアイテムを私どものウェブサイトから排除したのは、権利保持者から、彼らの権利の侵害だと通知があったからです。更に詳しい情報は、直接、権利保持者へご連絡ください。

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権利保持者とのこの問題が解決しましたら、権利保持者が私どものアドレス notice@amazon.com へ彼らの意見を取り消す知らせを送ることも考えられます。この権利保持者が製造している商品の投稿を、問題が解決するまで控えるようお願い申し上げます。

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これらのアイテムを私どものウェブサイトから排除したのは、権利所有者から、彼らの権利の侵害だと通知があったからです。更に詳しい情報は、直接、権利所有者へご連絡ください。

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権利所有者とのこの問題が解決しましたら、権利所有者が私どものアドレス notice@amazon.com へ彼らの訴えを取り下げる知らせを送ることも考えられます。この権利所有者が製造している商品の掲載を、問題が解決するまで控えるようお願い申し上げます。

元の翻訳
まさしく黒と白です・・ツアーIDバンドの新品2個です。
限定版の9番についてもお知らせください。・・・もう廃版になりました。・・・請求書を新しくしています。
良い一日をお送りください　:)


申し訳ございません。今回はT3 ウッドの在庫がありません。しかし、1週間ほどで更にツアー版の商品を入荷する予定です。R1シャロウフェイスのドライバーヘッドなどです・・・
すぐに、ウッド4個の請求書（納品書）を送ります。


テイラーメイドのツアー版のドライバーヘッドにつきまして、卸値で販売できることにりましたので、ご興味があるかと思い、ご連絡しています。
レア物のシャロウフェイスR1ドライバーの右利き用と左利き用があります。プライオリティ発送の送料を含んだ値段は以下になります。

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まさしく黒と白です・・ツアーIDバンド付きの新品2個です。
限定品の9番についてもお知らせください。・・・もう製造中止になりました。・・・請求書を新しくしています。
良い一日をお送りください　:)


申し訳ございません。今回はT3 ウッドの在庫がありません。しかし、1週間ほどで更にツアー支給品を入荷する予定です。R1シャロウフェイスのドライバーヘッドなどです・・・
すぐに、ウッド4個の請求書（納品書）を送ります。


テイラーメイドのツアー支給品のドライバーヘッドにつきまして、卸値で販売できることになりましたので、ご興味があるかと思い、ご連絡しています。
レア物のシャロウフェイスR1ドライバーの右利き用と左利き用があります。プライオリティ発送の送料込みの値段は以下になります。

元の翻訳
There is a hole in around the right bottom of the item.
If i knew that there was a hole in the item, I wouldn't have bought it.

The hole affect the value of the item a lot, and it is a serious defection.

On the description, it says it has one defect, but I think you could explain more specific
of you could take a photo focused on the defect part.

You knew about the defect and wrote about it in obscurity on purpose didn't you?
If so, it is fraud.

I was thinking about to write about it on your feedback.

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There is a hole in around the right bottom of the item.
If i knew that there was a hole in the item, I wouldn't have bought it.

The hole affects the value of the item a lot, and it is a serious defection.

On the description, it says it has one defect, but I think you could explain more specifically
of you could take a photo focused on the defect part.

You knew about the defect and wrote about it in obscurity on purpose didn't you?
If so, it is fraud.

I was thinking about to write about it on your feedback.

元の翻訳
Herodesの支配下にあるギリシャの都市は、全てのユダヤの国々とともに自由を取り戻させるよう要請するためにCaesarに大使を送った。そして、戦で戦死し、 Caesarもしくは弟に主導権を持たせるよりも良いと考えられたArchelausforに3千の男たちの死の責任を負わせた。これらすべての要求がなされた時、 NicolausがArchelausの擁護として立ち上がった。彼は、Archelausの親戚との論争において、初めは優勢をとっていた。そして、ユダヤについての論争となった。しかし、Nicolausはギリシャの都市と口論することを正しいとは思わなかった。そして、Nicolausは Archelausに彼らの自由に対しての票に敵対するなと、しかし彼の残りの王国で満足するように助言した。

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これまでHerodesの支配下にあったギリシャの都市は、自由を取り戻すことを求めてCaesarに使者を送った。ユダヤの国全土において、3千人の男たちが戦死したことでArchelausを非難し、 Caesarまたはは彼の弟による統治を望んだ。これらすべての要求がなされた時、 NicolausがArchelausを擁護して立ち上がった。彼は、まずArchelausの親戚、その後ユダヤの民を説き伏せた。しかし、Nicolausはギリシャの都市に反論することを得策だとは思わなかった。そして、Nicolausは Archelausに彼らの自由を手に入れようとする努力を妨げず、残りの自分の王国で満足するように助言した。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your continued business.

I am sorry it is over the Amazon's policy of 2.5% for the canceling rate.

I would like to inform you an remediation plan.

It is also currently in progress, we have enhanced since last month, September, we would like to launch promotion of utilization for FBA, which is a selling service for the customers.
Hope using FBA makes improvement of customer service and it links to the a sense of safety, and also we would like to make a great business relationship with your company Amazon.

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Thank you for your continued business.

I am sorry but it is over the Amazon's policy of 2.5% for the canceling rate.

I would like to inform you an remediation plan.

It is also currently in progress, we have enhanced since last month, September, we would like to launch promotion of utilization for FBA, which is a selling service for the customers.
Hope using FBA makes improvement of customer service and it links to the a sense of safety, and also we would like to make a great business relationship with your company Amazon.

元の翻訳
I would like to improve our business to satisfy customers with understanding of your company policy.


Kind regards.

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I would like to improve our business to satisfy customers with further understanding of your company policy.


Kind regards.

元の翻訳
Hello, sorry for my late reply.
There was an error of letters on last email I sent you, so I am re-writing the email.
Just in case the error might occur again, I will attach our company URL too.

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Hello, sorry for my late reply.
There was an error of letters in the previous email I sent you, so I am re-writing the email.
Just in case the error might occur again, I will attach our company URL too.

元の翻訳
fr

注文した荷物が、現在どこにあるかご連絡をいただきたいと思います。↵
お荷物追跡ページに行くと、2013/09/30　16:16.　が最後にアップデートされた日付で、↵
荷物はまだアムステルダムにあると記載されています。

なぜまだ荷物が届かないのか知りたいのです。

よろしくお願いします。

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fr

注文した荷物が、現在どこにあるかご連絡をいただきたいと思います。お荷物追跡ページに行くと、最後に更新されたのは2013/09/30 16:16.で、荷物はまだアムステルダムにあると記載されています。

なぜまだ荷物が届かないのか知りたいのです。

よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending the product the other day.

I just have a question,
Can you get a trophy of Yu-Gi-Oh's Asian Games?

There is somebody who wants to get it in Japan.

If it is possible to get the item, please take a moment to send me an image of the trophy.
Also, please advise me the price of it.

Kind regards.

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Thank you for sending the product the other day.

I just have a question.
Can you get a trophy of Yu-Gi-Oh's Asian Games?

There is somebody who wants to get it in Japan.

If it is possible to get the item, please take a moment to send me an image of the trophy.
Also, please advise me the price of it.

Kind regards,

元の翻訳
Hello,
Thank you for continuous service.

I have just ordered 2 items,
I prefer not to send them together with the order,
because if you send them together, it quite often become delay.

Is it possible to ask you to send them separately?

Hoping to hear from you soon.

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Hello,
Thank you for continuous service.

I have just ordered 2 items,
I prefer not to send them together with the order,
because if you send them together, it quite often becomes delay.

Is it possible to ask you to send them separately?

Hoping to hear from you soon.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.

Unfortunately, the item you have chosen has been sold.

If you are interested in other items, please feel free to contact me by Email, ↵
the Email address is below.

Even we don't have what you want in stock, we will try to get it as soon as possible.

And we will offer a good price as much as we can.

The payment has to be done via paypal.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

Unfortunately, the item you have chosen has been sold.

If you are interested in other items, please feel free to contact me by Email; the Email address is below.

Even though we don't have what you want in stock, we will try to get it as soon as possible.

And we will offer as good a price possible.

The payment has to be done via paypal.

元の翻訳
Please try not to press home button while fixing the bug of OS, and tapping the memo icon and the actual application appears on the screen.
I am sorry for the inconvenience.
When it became this kind of situation, you won't be able to use sleep button to turn the device off.↵
When it's occur, please make a long press sleep button and home button at the same time, and re-start the device.

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Until the OS bug is fixed, please try to the best of your abilities to avoid pressing the home button between tapping the memo’s icon and the memo actually being displayed on the screen.
We apologise for the inconvenience.
In these cases, you won't be able to use sleep button to turn the device off, so please make a long press of the sleep button and home button at the same time, and re-start the device.

元の翻訳
We have received a report from some of the users, that the home button stopped working when they were editing memo. After investigation, we have found that if you press home button straight after opening the memo, it occurs with the certain timing of opening the memo.
We have created a code for testing, and we validate it specifically, there were no problem with the application, we made it clear that it was a problem of OS. So, we send a bug report to Apple on 18th March.

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We have received a report from some of the users, that the home button stopped working when they were editing a memo. After investigation, we have found that if you press the home button straight after opening the memo, that timing can lead to this rare occurrence.
We have created code for testing, and inspected it in detail, the result being that there was no problem with the application, and the problem was clearly in the OS. So, we sent a bug report to Apple on 18th March.

元の翻訳
The problem which the icon is swapped with the one which already on the screen, when you add memo to the home display by using iOS 7, was reported.

The result of an investigation, we have found that with iOS 7, this will occur if you add more than 4 Web clip icons to the home display. When it happens, please re-start the device. You don't need to delete the icons that caused the problem. When you re-start the device, the icon will be placed in a proper place.

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The problem was reported regarding the iOS7: Existing icons were rearranged when memo was added into the home screen.

As the result of the investigation, we discovered that this problem occurs when more than 4 Web clip icons were added to the home screen in iOS7. ↵
If you encounter this problem, please re-start the device. You don't need to delete the icons that caused the problem. When you re-start the device, the icon will be placed in a proper place.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the specific explanation of the condition.

The item will probably return back to Japan in 1-2 weeks..

As soon as I received the item, I will resend it to Germany.

I will cover the shipping of $17 for re-sending, so please don't worry about it.

Also, the payment of paypal has been stopped, so please release it if you can.

I am sorry that you can't get the item sooner enough, I would like to give you
a big discount next time you order any items from us.

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Thank you for the specific explanation of the condition.

Your item will probably return back to Japan in 1-2 weeks..

As soon as I received the item, I will resend it to Germany.

I will cover the charge of $17 for re-sending, so please don't worry about it.

In addition, the payment of paypal is temporarily suspended, so please release it if you can.

I am sorry that you can't get the item sooner enough, I would like to give you
a big discount next time you order any items from us.