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I'm sorry, but the URL I sent to you was incorrect. The correct one for he result of following your package is below:

I have asked Japan post office to research about it. It will be immidiately transferred to you if it will be sent back to Japan.
Do you mind closing the clame case?
I will do my best for you until the end.

Please be reminded that if the price written on the package is cheaper, that will be the amount which will be covered by the insurance.
I wrap items carefully, and it will be followed with the tracking number, so I have never lost any packages.

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I'm sorry but the URL I sent you was incorrect. The correct URL we got by tracking your package is as follows:

I have asked Japan post office to investigate it. They will ship it again to you if it is sent back to Japan.
Do you mind closing the clame case?
I will do my best for you until the end.

Please note that if we write the item with cheaper price than it actually is on invoice, only up to the price will be covered by insurance.
I wrap items carefully. Though I have never lost packages I sent as they had a tracking number, please again keep in mind things I mentioned above.

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◼︎Fuji TV "SMAP×SMAP"
- Date: May 26, 2014 Mon.
- Time: 22:001-22:54
- Website:
http://www.fujitv.co.jp/smapsmap/index.html
* Will be a guest for S-Live!

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◼︎Fuji TV "SMAP×SMAP"
- Date: May 26, 2014 Mon.
- Time: 22:00-22:54
- Website:
http://www.fujitv.co.jp/smapsmap/index.html
* Will be a guest for S-Live!

元の翻訳
"What kind of apps are popular people using?" ~featuring May J.~
http://woman.excite.co.jp/article/entertainment/rid_E1399545299100/

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"What kind of apps is that celebrity using?" ~featuring May J.~
http://woman.excite.co.jp/article/entertainment/rid_E1399545299100/

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60 minutes' Special Program on Music Videos
Broadcast: 6/6 Fri 22:00-23:00 first time
Rebroadcast: 6/12 Thu 25:00-, 6/22 Sun 23:30-
Http://www.spaceshowertvplus.com/program/special/1406tokyogirlsstyle.html

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60 minutes Special Program on Music Videos
Broadcast: Friday June 6th, 22:00-23:00 for the first run
Repeat runs: Thursday June 12th, 25:00-, and Sunday June 22nd, 23:30-
Http://www.spaceshowertvplus.com/program/special/1406tokyogirlsstyle.html

元の翻訳
◼︎How to join the handshake meeting
You will need a ticket for handshake meeting.
You can get the ticket by purchasing the CD, "Killing Me Softly", which will be released on June 4.
Those who have a ticket for handshaking meeting can join the meeting after the mini concert.

Purchase of the CD: 18:00- (planned)

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◼︎How to join the meet and greet event
You will need a "meet and greet ticket" for the event.
You can get the ticket by purchasing the CD, "Killing Me Softly", which will be released on June 4.
Those who have a ticket for the meet and greet event can join the event after the mini concert.

Time of CD sale: 18:00- (planned)

元の翻訳
Hello,

Did you receive the previous message I sent to you?

Are you planning to engage in Japanese market?

We are really impressed by your company and products.
We would love to see you in Japanese market.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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Hello,

Did you receive the previous message I sent to you?

Are you planning to engage in Japanese market?

We are really impressed by your company and products.
We would love to see you in Japanese market.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Uk


ご対応ありがとうございます。わたしにはよくわからないのですが、オランダ郵便局で何かしらの問題があったようです。現在は、配達できなかった荷物としてどこかの倉庫で保管されているはずですので、郵便局としては数日のうちに発見、配達できるということです。

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Uk


ご対応ありがとうございます。わたしにはよくわからないのですが、オランダ郵便局で何かしらの問題があったようです。現在は、配達できなかった荷物としてどこかの倉庫で保管されているはずですので、郵便局としては数日のうちに発見、配達できるということです。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

I told the Ministry of Economy, Trade and Industry that they conform to the ECE standard you answer, however, I was asked to file safety standard confirmation for each of the 20 helmets.

In this case, I cannot get your answer until I get a notice from the Ministry?

If I won't be able to get your answer even if I visit you, I will tell so to the Ministry.

Thank you for your assistance. Waiting for your reply.

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Thank you for your reply.

I told the Ministry of Economy, Trade and Industry that they conform to the ECE standard you answer [tense]; however, I was asked to file safety standard confirmation for each of the 20 helmets.

In this case, I cannot get [word choice] your answer until I get [word choice] a notice from the Ministry?

If I won't be able to get your answer even if I visit you, I will tell so to the Ministry.

Thank you for your assistance. Waiting for your reply.

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Thank you for trying your best.

Seems it is broken.

I will refund, is this alright?

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Thank you for giving it a try several times.

It seems defective.

I will issue a refund right away; is that fine with you?

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Kyoto Animation, producer of this anime, used to create many animation for girls peaceful everyday lives.

However, Free! has mostly men for its main character, so it has gathered a lot of attention since before it was televised.

Now it has been televised and they didn't let us down. It became an anime with a lot of fans in Japan too.

Please check it out freely if you haven't since the stories are not complicated nor sad!

You will want to watch the second, if you watch the first one!

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Kyoto Animation, the producer of this anime, used to create many animation that usually centers around the peaceful everyday lives of girls.

However, the main characters of Free! is mostly comprised of men, so it has gathered a lot of attention even before it was televised.

Our expectations were surely met when this anime started to broadcast. This anime has gathered a lot of fans in Japan as well.

The plot is not complicated nor is it sad, so for the people who haven't seen it yet, please check it out anytime.

You will want to watch the second episode, if you have watched the first one!

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The shipping address is the same to the transfer company in the US called MYUS even we purchase directly.
We sell them much expensive in Japan than the price in the US because of the shipping fee.
So there wouldn't be any discount from the price in the US.
We can sell them more if the purchasing price would decline.
An agent of ○○ in Japan has quit selling the items, but there is still demand for it.
We would like to sell more items of ○○ in Japan.
Thank you.

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The shipping address is the same as before even with the direct purchase. It is the forwarding company called MYUS localted in the US.
Our prices in Japan are significantly higher than the prices in the US because of the shipping fee.
So there wouldn't be any discount from the price in the US.
We should be able to sell them in larger quantity if the cost would be lower.
Whle the agent of ○○ in Japan has withdrawn from the market, there is still demand for it.
We would love to promote the merchandise by ○○ in Japan.
Thank you.

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I have a question.
Thank you in advance for your assistance.

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I have a question.
Thank you in advance for your assistance.

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I have purchased the script below.

Example.php and the admin page works well.

I want to apply Script to the login form of my PHP. What should I do?
Here is the code.


I'm sorry if I'm asking a stupid question, but I'm not familiar with PHP.

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Are you sure this is not a fake one?
If not, wewould like to purchase.

However we want some discount.
Could you ship it to Florida for $180 each?

If you say you can, we will purchase 20 of them.

And we are thinking of purchasing the items below as well.

Please sell them at wholesale price.

If we can get a good deal, we would increase our purchase.

Are you getting each item from maker or agent?

Then can you get other items from the same maker?

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Are you sure this is not a fake one?
If not, we would like to purchase.

However we want some discount.
Could you ship it to Florida for $180 each?

If you say you can, we will purchase 20 of them.

And we are thinking of purchasing the items below as well.

Please sell them at a wholesale price.

If we can get a good deal, we will increase our purchase.

Are you getting each item from the maker or an agent?

And can you get other items from the same maker?

元の翻訳
1.
あなたから購入したLuminoxに問題があります。動かなくなってしまいました。何故か秒針が止まってしまうようですが、確かではありません。バッテリーを変えてみたのですが、数時間でまた動かなくなりました。Chronoはきちんとうごいていますが、時計が動きません。ガラスをたたくと動き始めるときがありますが、また止まってしまいます。何か対策はありますか？

2.
ご返信ありがとうございます。あなたとしてはDL103よりDL103Rの方がずっと良いということですか？
DL103は送料込みでいくらまで下がりますか？

3.
サービス料についてですが、合併の必要の無い小包一つにつき10ドル、合併の必要のある複数小包には15ドルで考えていますが、いかがでしょう？

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1.
あなたから購入したLuminoxに問題があります。動かなくなってしまいました。何故か秒針が止まってしまうようですが、確かではありません。バッテリーを変えてみたのですが、数時間でまた動かなくなりました。Chronoはきちんとうごいていますが、時計が動きません。ガラスをたたくと動き始めるときがありますが、また止まってしまいます。何か対策はありますか？

2.
ご返信ありがとうございます。あなたとしてはDL103よりDL103Rの方がずっと良いということですか？
DL103は送料込みでいくらまで下がりますか？

3.
サービス料についてですが、一つの小包でいい場合には10ドル、複数の包みをまとめて発送する場合は15ドルで考えていますが、いかがでしょう？

元の翻訳
1.
あなたから購入したLuminoxに問題があります。動かなくなってしまいました。何故か秒針が止まってしまうようですが、確かではありません。バッテリーを変えてみたのですが、数時間でまた動かなくなりました。Chronoはきちんとうごいていますが、時計が動きません。ガラスをたたくと動き始めるときがありますが、また止まってしまいます。何か対策はありますか？

2.
ご返信ありがとうございます。あなたとしてはDL103よりDL103Rの方がずっと良いということですか？
DL103は送料込みでいくらまで下がりますか？

3.
サービス料についてですが、合併の必要の無い小包一つにつき10ドル、合併の必要のある複数小包には15ドルで考えていますが、いかがでしょう？

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1.
あなたから購入したLuminoxに問題があります。動かなくなってしまいました。何故か秒針が止まってしまうようですが、確かではありません。バッテリーを変えてみたのですが、数時間でまた動かなくなりました。クロノグラフはきちんとうごいていますが、時計が動きません。ガラスをたたくと動き始めるときがありますが、また止まってしまいます。何か対策はありますか？

2.
ご返信ありがとうございます。あなたとしてはDL103よりDL103Rの方がずっと良いということですか？
DL103は送料込みでいくらまで下がりますか？

3.
サービス料についてですが、合併の必要の無い小包一つにつき10ドル、合併の必要のある複数小包には15ドルで考えていますが、いかがでしょう？

元の翻訳
There is one that I cannot hear anything.
Another one doesn't react to any command.
There is even one whose tip is broken and doesn't work at all.

I think you should check every items before you ship.

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There is one from which I cannot hear anything.
Another one completely doesn't respond.
There is even one on which the tip is broken and it doesn't work at all.

You really should check all items before you ship them.

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How about for $170 considering this is used?

Please think about it.

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How about for $170 considering this is a used one?

Please think about it.