菱沼重義 (elephantrans) — 付けたレビュー

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Magic hour photography book
The precious magic hour after the sun goes down.
This is a precious photography book which gather the pictures of the most beautiful moment in the day from all over the world.
Please enjoy 54 pieces healing moment.
This is an universal application which is for both iPhone/iPad with fun.

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Magic hour photography book
The brief moment of precious magic hour after the sun goes down.
This is a precious photography book which gathers pictures of the most beautiful moment in the day from all over the world.
Please enjoy 54 pieces healing moment.
This is universal app which can be enjoyed by both iPhone/iPad.↵
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Though, as you said it must have been some miracle happened that nobody died at the earthquake. It was Monday that I found out about the earthquake. I hadn`t known such a big news though I always check the informations about New Zealand on the internet. I could have called her and listen to her voice to confirm if she`s alright, or if I had flown to New Zealand ealier... I`ve been spending time thinking of such things. If I weren`t this lazy I could have found out much earlier that you two were OK. Now I`m getting to understand the situation by gathering informations using the internet.

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Though, as you said it's a miracle that nobody died from the earthquake. It was Monday that I found out about the earthquake. I hadn't known such a big news for 2 days though I always check the information about New Zealand on the Internet. I could have called her and listen to her voice to confirm if she's alright, or if I had flown to New Zealand earlier... I've been spending time thinking of such things. If I weren't this lazy I could have found out much earlier that you two were OK. Now I'm getting to understand the situation by gathering information using the Internet.

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People often ask me, “What would you do if you speak English?” I think there are many people answer the question by saying, “I would like to go travelling abroad.” But in fact you do not need much English ability to do sightseeing abroad. I have made trips to many countries so far, and I had no trouble even when I went to Greece, where not only people did not understand my poor English but also I do not read Greek at all.
If I could speak English, I would love to hear what the people around the world are thinking about. There must be many people who have totally different ideas from the Japanese.

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People sometimes ask me, “What would you do if you could speak English?” I think there may be many people who answer this question by saying, “I would like to travel abroad.” But in fact you almost do not need English ability to do sightseeing abroad. I have made trips to many countries so far, and I had no trouble even when I went to Greece, where not only people did not understand English but also I could not read Greek at all.
If I could speak English, I would love to hear from people around the world what they are thinking about. There must be many people who have totally different ideas from Japanese people.

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一部で主張される、大多数の太平洋周辺地域は、海上で迷って漂流した後に、偶然に島に上陸したポリネシア人たちが殖民したという説とは逆に、この偉業は、植民地化を目的とした、食料や収穫を目的とした植物、さらに家畜などを十分に用意したポリネシア人の探検によって達成されたと考えることもできる。オセアニア地域に疑いなく存在するサツマイモ（これは新世界を起源とするとされるが）が、それぞれの主張を証明するためにたびたび持ち出される。しかし、サツマイモはアジアを起源として栽培された数多い植物のひとつである。パトリックが指摘するように、南アメリカから海を越えた人々によって持ち込まれたれたと考えるよりも、サツマイモは、帰途についたポリネシア人達と一緒に、偶然に南アメリカの西海岸に到着したということが推測できる。

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一部で主張される、大多数の太平洋周辺地域は、海上で迷って漂流した後に、偶然に島に上陸したポリネシア人たちが殖民したという説とは逆に、この偉業は、植民地化を目的とした、食料や収穫を目的とした植物、さらに家畜などを十分に用意したポリネシア人の探検によって達成されたと考えることが合理的なように見える。オセアニア地域に疑いなく存在するサツマイモ（これは新世界を起源とするとされるが）が、それぞれの主張を証明するためにたびたび持ち出される。しかし、サツマイモはアジアを起源として栽培された数多い植物のひとつである。パトリックが指摘するように、いかだに乗った南アメリカの人々によって持ち込まれたというよりも、サツマイモは、南アメリカの西海岸に到着することができたポリネシア人達によって容易に持ち帰られたのかも知れない。

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I am having a difficulty in finding a good property.

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I am having a difficulty in finding some good properties.

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I am not able to open the line sheet in attached to your mail. Can you please re-send? I also can introduce you our business partners whom we can propose your brand for exhibition held by company A. Could you kindly check your email during the event is held?

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I am not able to open the line sheet file attached to your e-mail. Can you please re-send it? I also can introduce you our business partners whom we can propose your brand for exhibition held by company A. Could you kindly check your email while the event is held?

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Check the followers : Click "Following" on the side bar ,right of time line, you can check the list of users who are following you.

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Check the followers : Click "Following" on the side bar ,right of time line, you can check the list of users you are following.

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時がたつにつれ、卸売価格が変更される可能性があります。　しかしながら、私たちは価格を値上げしないことを私はあなたにお約束致します。　もし何かあれば,　我々がアメリカで販売を始めたように、価格を下げる可能性があります。

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時がたつにつれ、卸売価格が変更される可能性があります。　しかしながら、私たちは価格を値上げしないことを私はあなたにお約束致します。　どちらかといえば,　我々がアメリカで販売を始める時に、価格を下げる可能性があります。

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時間がたつと卸売価格が変わる事があるかもしれませんが、私（ども）は価格を上げる事はしないと約束します。どちらかといえば、アメリカでのセールが始まっていますので、価格を下げる事が可能かもしれません。

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時間がたつと卸売価格が変わる事があるかもしれませんが、私（ども）は価格を上げる事はしないと約束します。どちらかといえば、アメリカでのセールが始まる時に、価格を下げる事が可能かもしれません。

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Special week-long release promotion
Save now! It costs you only J¥115 instead of its standard price of J¥350.

Knock off your enemies with blitz!
Clean up a swarm of bastards!

It’s easy to play.
Keep on touching to store power and release for firing.
You can change the direction of firing by touching or dragging when firing.
The more power you store, the longer you can fire. Keep it up!

It is compatible with OpenFeint.
Keep fighting and unlock achievements!

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Special week-long release promotion
Save now! It costs you only JPY115 instead of its standard price of JPY350.

Knock off your enemies with blitz!
Clean up a swarm of bastards!

It’s easy to play.
Keep on touching to store power and release for firing.
You can change the direction of firing by touching or dragging when firing.
The more power you store, the longer you can fire. Keep it up!

It is compatible with OpenFeint.
Keep fighting and unlock achievements!

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The item we've sent on May 25 has been returned to us, due to the expiration of the storage time.

Since we are not able to re-send the item, we will refund the money by paypal.

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The item we sent on May 25 has been returned to us, due to expiration of the storage time.

Since we are not able to re-send the item, we will refund the money by paypal.

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I am traveler from Japan. If I stay your motel chain, can I book the tomorrow's next destination in the cheeking counter? Then, can I apply the online booking discount price or is it just apply the computer which is in Japan? I will not bring any computer, then if I want to book the discount price, do I need to book all the schedules from Japan?

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I am a traveler from Japan. If I stay your motel chain, can I book the tomorrow's next destination in the checking counter? Then, can I apply the online booking discount price or is it just apply the computer which is in Japan? I will not bring any computer, then if I want to book the discount price, do I need to book all the schedules from Japan?

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I am a musical instrument craftsman who come from Japan.
I'm going to rent a car to travel around America for about two weeks staying in motels, looking for musical instrument stores to show my work.
This instrument that I brought together is a sample and not to sell, also I know that it is prohibited.
None of import restricted materials is used in this instrument.

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I am a musical instrument craftsman who comes from Japan.
I'm going to rent a car to travel around America for about two weeks staying in motels, looking for musical instrument stores to show my work.
This instrument that I brought is a sample and not for sell, also I know that it is prohibited.
None of import restricted materials is used in this instrument.

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* Cookies may save/use the history of sessions and input contents which sent/received between browsers and servers during the users' visits to websites. The advantage of using cookies is that it makes possible to show effective contents and advertisements that users are interested in. Users are able to reject receiving cookies; however, if they reject that, it is possible that some of the features that this website offers may not be available for those users. In the meantime, the users' personal information such as name, email address, phone number and address will not be included in the information stored in cookies.

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It was said that japanese consumers have the most strict demand in the world so if you win through japanese market then you can compete in the world market. However, the strict measure which reward for unreasonable demands depenging on the stuation ironically brought up lesser quality foreign parts / products to the major stage.

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It was said that Japanese consumers have the most strict demand in the world so if you win through Japanese market then you can compete in the world market. However, the strict measure which rewards for unreasonable demands depending on the stuation ironically brought up lesser quality foreign parts / products to the major stage.

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Okay, I will only believe what you say. You told me and promised me to deliver it to me. You said that you will deliver it to me, and contacted me saying that you will promise it, so please have it delivered to me no matter what. As I had been saying over and over, with regards to the process required for the customs clearing, I have already obtained a certificate through a drug and medication import certification procedure called "Yakkan Shoumei". All the procedures for custom clearing have already been complete, so there are not problems at all. I believe you do understand what you have done to me, correct? Do you understand what kind of raw deal you are performing? If you plan to breach the contract, then I would have to consider taking whatever action necessary. I demand you to have it delivered with all the responsibilities. To avoid misunderstanding, I would like to clarify myself that I am willing to have good business relationship you. Please send me the payment details. I appreciate your understanding.

* 間違っていたら申し訳ありませんが、どうやら「Yakkan Shoumei」は固有名詞になってるみたいですね。一応、「"Yakkan Shoumei"という薬品輸入証明手続きを通して、証明書を取得しております」と訳しておきました。

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Okay, I will only believe what you say. You told me and promised me to deliver it to me. You said that you will deliver it to me, and contacted me saying that you will promise it, so please have it delivered to me no matter what. As I was saying over and over, with regard to the process required for the customs clearing, I have already obtained a certificate through a drug and medication import certification procedure called "Yakkan Shoumei". All the procedures for customs clearing have already been complete, so there are not problems at all. I believe you do understand what you have done to me, correct? Do you understand what kind of raw deal you are performing? If you plan to breach the contract, then I would have to consider taking whatever action necessary. I demand you to have it delivered with all the responsibilities. To avoid misunderstanding, I would like to clarify myself that I am willing to have good business relationship with you. Please send me the payment details. I appreciate your understanding.

* 間違っていたら申し訳ありませんが、どうやら「Yakkan Shoumei」は固有名詞になってるみたいですね。一応、「"Yakkan Shoumei"という薬品輸入証明手続きを通して、証明書を取得しております」と訳しておきました。

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At any given moment nearly 2,000 thunderstorms are being produced, while 100 lightnings strike every second.

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At any given moment on earth nearly 2,000 thunderstorms are being produced, while 100 lightnings strike every second.

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In every moment, nearly 2000 thunder shower is occurring somewhere on the planet, and 100 of lightning stroke is hitting the ground every seconds.

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In every moment, nearly 2000 thunder showers are occurring somewhere on the planet, and 100 lightning strokes are hitting the ground every second.

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The moment a man appeared, everything freezed in the factory. He resembled just like the man who had disappeared several years ago.

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The moment a man appeared, everything freezed in the factory. He resembled just like the man who had disappeared several years before.

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The moment he appeared,it stopped breathing of the plant.
It was exactly like a man who disappeared from a few years ago.

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The moment he appeared,it stopped breathing of the plant.
It was exactly like the man who disappeared a few years before.

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The moment the man appeared, everything in the factory stopped moving for a moment. The man looked entirely like the one that had disappeared several years ago.

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The moment a man appeared, everything in the factory stopped moving for a moment. The man looked entirely like the one that had disappeared several years before.

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As the lumber was shrunk, this part turned white.
We can solve this problem the next time.

The price of this product is not decided yet, but how much do you think we can sell it in the US?

In addition, I would like to take some photos of you since I might put them on my homepages.

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As the lumber was shrunk, this part turned white.
I think we will have solved this problem next time.

The price of this product is not decided yet, but how much do you think we can sell it in the US?

In addition, I would like to take some photos of you since I might put them on my homepages.