eezebird (eezebird) — もらったレビュー

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Our mission is to break down language barriers and enable smooth, problem-free understanding through a crowdsourcing translation service, bringing the world closer and speeding up communications.

anydooR Inc. provides the crowdsourced human translation service Conyac. By building a global network of translators, Conyac makes what was previously thought unfeasible, matching people who want translations done with people who can get translations done cheaply and quickly, a reality.

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Thank you for contacting me, George.
There is an overflow of reimported G-Shocks in Japan and their prices have been going down.
I have 60 in my stock and they aren't selling well.
I can't sell them right now, but does it look like you'll have a hard time getting your hands on G-Shocks in the future?
If so, then you will probably want to keep a lot in your inventory.

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Thank you for contacting me, George.
There is an overflow of reimported G-Shocks in Japan and their prices have been going down.
I have 60 in stock and they aren't selling well.
I can't sell them right now, but does it look like you'll have a hard time getting your hands on G-Shocks in the future?
If so, then you will probably want to keep a lot of them in your inventory.

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Even just from your current inventory, please select and send the best condition ring with clearly marked engravings on the inside.

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From your current inventory, please select and send the best condition ring with clearly marked engravings inside.