eezebird (eezebird) — 付けたレビュー

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Thank you for purchasing an item from us this time.
We had it dispatched by express on August 10.
Unfortunately, however, it took more time to proceed at the Japanese customs office, and it departed from↵
the International Airport today.
We assume that it will arrive at your address around August 17, provided it goes through the American customs office without any trouble.
We apologize for the inconvenience that keeps you waiting and we humbly request you be waiting a little longer before you receive the item.
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Thank you for purchasing an item from us this time.
We had it dispatched by express on August 10.
Unfortunately, however, it took more time to proceed at the Japanese customs office, and it departed from the International Airport today.
The estimated arrival date at your address is around August 17, provided it goes through the American customs office without any trouble.
We sincerely apologize for keeping you waiting, but we humbly request your patience a little while longer until the item arrives.
Tracking Number:
Traceable URL:

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It's a cute doll. I have some questions about it due to be said that was pre-owned. When was it made? Does it have the certificate? What size is it? Does it have any signs of mold or damages from pest? Does it have discolored by the sun? I'd like to know its condition. You can tell me anything defects of it frankly. I hope this is not bothersome for you. Thank you and Best regards,

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It's a cute doll. I have some questions about it since it says it is pre-owned. When was it made? Does it come with a certificate? How big is it (in inches)? Does it have any signs of mold or damage from insects or pests? Does it show any discoloration from the sun or scuffs and scratches? I'd like to know what kind of condition it's in. I'm fine with you honestly letting me know of any defects. I hope this is not bothersome for you. Thank you and Best regards,

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We are allowed to buy from you several times.
This time also I would like to buy ◯ now exhibiting.
Could you sell for me at USD 750.00 in postage to Japan?
We have been the also allowed to buy at this price last time.
Also how many stocks left are there?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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I have purchased from you many times before.
I would like to buy the ◯ that is on display again this time.
Can you sell it to me for USD $750.00, including postage, to Japan?
It was purchased at this price last time as well.
Also, how many are left in stock?
I look forward to hearing from you.

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I am sorry for disturbing you in your busy schedule. I would like to add a couple of things for my custom order. I would like you to make a big pupil and less white in the eye. Also, place the center of the pupil a little closer to the nose to make it slightly crossed eyes. I think that gives it more childish look on its face. It would look odd if you make pupils too close. I leave the division to you how close they should get. I hope it to give an expression of cute and heart-warming. ↵

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Sorry to disturb you during your busy schedule. I would like to add a couple of things to my custom order. I would like you to make the black pupils bigger and lessen the whites in the eyes. Also, place the center of the pupil a little closer towards the nose to make them slightly cross-eyed. I think that gives it a more childish look. However, It would look odd if you made the pupils too close, so I will leave the decision up to you on how close they should be. Please give it the cutest, most heart-warming expression.

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The product listed in the Amazon page and the product I sent are supposed to be the same.
Is this a lie? Kindly check it well again.

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The product listed on the Amazon's product page and the product I sent are supposed to be the same.
Are you saying this is a lie? Please take another look at it.

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My favorite relative is my uncle on my mother's side. My uncle lost his father to an atomic bomb when he was little, and is a wise man who had to live with his mother and siblings. After graduating from junior college, while working as a company employee, he took and passed the exam to become a certified public accountant. What I like about my uncle is that he is gentle and kind to others. One thing he said remains in my mind even now: "There are hardships in life, but if, at the end, you can say that it was a good life, that is all you need." I would like to live my life so that I can think it was good at the end, despite the tough times.

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My favorite relative is my uncle on my mother's side. My uncle lost his father to the atomic bomb when he was little, and is a wise man who had to live with his mother and siblings. After graduating from junior college, while working as a company employee, he took and passed the exam to become a certified public accountant. What I like about my uncle is that he is gentle and kind to others. One thing he said remains in my mind even now: "There are hardships in life, but if, at the end, you can say that it was a good life, that is all you need." I would like to live my life so that I can think it was good at the end, despite the tough times.

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I report on the progress of your request for an item search.

After our correrspondence, I asked several shops that deal in the item to confirm whether they have it in stock. But, all of the shops that replied that they had it in stock are shops from which you cannot likely buy a legitimate article.

The auction price is currently $1024USD without a tag.

I will search for the same item within your budget, but please let me know if you have any more items you would like to me to find, as I will look for them at the same time.

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I am reporting on the progress of your item search request.

After our correspondence, I tried contacting several shops that deal in the item to confirm their stock. However, all of the shops that replied that they had stock are shops from which you likely cannot buy a legitimate article.

The auction price is currently $1024USD without a product tag.

I will keep searching for the same item within your budget, but please let me know if you have any more items you would like to me to find, as I will look for them at the same time.

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Due to the shipping schedule, we will not be able to make the August 12th shipment, as payment was due today. The next available spot on the schedule in August 29th. We hope that this is suitable.

It is still possible for us to sell you the car. However, as it will not be possible to pay for it in installments, please pay for it in full via bank transfer when you are able to do so. We must also mention that there is the risk that we might sell out of the car if it takes too long for us to receive payment. We appreciate your understanding with this matter.

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Due to the shipping schedule, we will not be able to make the August 12th shipment, as payment was done today. The next available spot on the schedule in August 29th. We hope that this is suitable.

It is still possible for us to sell you the car. However, as it will not be possible to pay for it in installments, please pay for it in full when you are able to do so. We must also mention that there is the risk that we might sell out of the car if it takes too long for us to receive payment. We appreciate your understanding with this matter.

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Although he is a genuis programmer, he cannot make great jobs in the first half part of the story because there is no electronic device in the school.

But please keep watching untill the final episodedo since he appears more frequently as the story moves on.

In another story in a coterie magazine, he stays with Owada Mondo who is a caring person and Makoto, and also with other charactors appearing in 2.

Because he is very lovely like a small animal, he gets in trouble like being teased or being made cry in the cartoon, but this makes you feel more like he is sweet.

Ah! I cannot wait to watch Chihiro in a cartoon film!

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Although he is a programming genius, he cannot really play an active role in the first half of the story because there are no electronic devices in the school.

But please keep watching until the final episode because he appears more frequently as the story progresses.

In the fanzine, he stays with the caring Owada Mondo and Makoto, and is also depicted together with other characters that appear in 2.

Because he has a lovable personality similar to a small animal, he is often teased or made to cry in the comic, but that is what makes him cute!

Ah! I cannot wait to watch Chihiro in a cartoon film!