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Tencentー日本ゲーム開発のAimingとのパートナーシップ締結及び投資を発表

中国ソーシャルゲーム大手のTencentが日本のモバイルゲーム開発社Aimingへ近日投資をしたことがAimingのウェブサイトでプレスリリースが発表された。Tencentが投資した合計金額は明かされていないが、契約には協力パートナーシップの締結が明記され、Aimingのゲームを中国本土全体にTencentが広め、また単独ではないが、Aimingが国内でTencentのゲームを配布する内容が含まれている。

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Tencent－日本ゲーム開発のAimingとのパートナーシップ締結及び投資を発表

中国ソーシャルゲーム大手のTencentが日本のモバイルゲーム開発会社Aimingへ近日投資をしたことがAimingのウェブサイトでプレスリリースされた。Tencentの投資総額は明かされていないが、契約には協力パートナーシップの締結が明記され、Aimingのゲームを中国本土全体にTencentが広め、また独占ではないが、Aimingが日本国内でTencentのゲームを配布する内容が含まれている。

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私はフィリピン出身の者です。こちらの商品を購入する際、他にどのような配送法を提供していますか？個人的にEMSが好きではないので、EMS以外の方法を希望します。返信お待ちしています。ありがとうございます。

こちらのモデルのレギュラーとデラックスバージョンを同じ価格でのご提供をご提案いただき改めて感謝申し上げます。しかしかながら今回は別のところより購入する事にしました。メールへのご返信いただきありがとうございました。


前回のメールが届いているかわかりませんが、昨日返金に気づき、改めて正確な振込元よりお支払いを済ませました。商品がいつ発送になるか教えて下さい。ありがとうございます。

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私はフィリピン出身の者です。こちらの商品を購入する際、他にどのような配送法を提供していますか？個人的にEMSが好きではないので、EMS以外の方法を希望します。返信お待ちしています。ありがとうございます。

こちらのモデルのレギュラーとデラックスバージョンを同じ価格でのご提供をご提案いただき改めて感謝申し上げます。しかしかながら今回は別のところより購入する事にしました。メールへのご返信いただきありがとうございました。


前回のメールが届いているかわかりませんが、昨日返金に気づき、改めて振込元よりお支払いを済ませました。商品がいつ発送になるか教えて下さい。ありがとうございます。

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The products from my previous order arrived last Friday.
One of the A arrived broken due to transportation accident.
It seems as though the impact of the hit was really hard as part of A is deformed.
It cannot be sold in this state.

I have already reported this to FedEx the moment the product arrived.
I am sure that FedEx will be in contact with you soon as well.
I will let you know if any progress to this situation.

I would like you to send me the same product in exchange for the damaged one, the next time I make an order.


This order was not registered as 70% off discount due to system failure.
It had reflected the discount until the PayPal payment page,
but it was not reflected in the order completion page.

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The products from my previous order arrived last Friday.
One of A arrived broken due to transportation accident.
It seems as though the impact of the hit was really hard as part of A is deformed.
It cannot be sold in this state.

I have already reported this to FedEx the moment the product arrived.
I am sure that FedEx will be in contact with you soon as well.
I will let you know if any progress to this situation.

I would like you to send me the same product in exchange for the damaged one, the next time I make an order.


This order was not registered as 70% off discount due to system failure.
It had reflected the discount until the PayPal payment page,
but it was not reflected in the order completion page.

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Amazon saids the reasoning behind a full payment refund to the buyer is because there is no proof of delivery. I am currently demanding a certification of the delivery to USPS and the Japan Post. I should be able to send this over to you in a few days.
This certification will have the recipient's signature, so this would be solid evidence.

However I have contacted Amazon with the information above and they have told me something different again. They said that they made refunds because delay in delivery goes against their policies. But again, another department within Amazon had replied that this actually does NOT go against their policy. [Case 201941761]

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Amazon said the reasoning behind a full payment refund to the buyer is because there is no proof of delivery. I am currently demanding a certification of the delivery to USPS and the Japan Post. I should be able to send this over to you in a few days.
This certification will have the recipient's signature, so this would be a solid evidence.

However, I have contacted Amazon with the information above and they have told me something different again. They once said that they made a refund because the delay in delivery goes against their policies. But again, another department within Amazon had replied that this actually does NOT go against their policy. [Case 201941761]

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Amazon saids the reasoning behind a full payment refund to the buyer is because there is no proof of delivery. I am currently demanding a certification of the delivery to USPS and the Japan Post. I should be able to send this over to you in a few days.
This certification will have the recipient's signature, so this would be solid evidence.

However I have contacted Amazon with the information above and they have told me something different again. They said that they made refunds because delay in delivery goes against their policies. But again, another department within Amazon had replied that this actually does NOT go against their policy. [Case 201941761]

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Amazon said the reasoning behind a full payment refund to the buyer is because there is no proof of delivery. I am currently demanding a certification of the delivery to USPS and the Japan Post. I should be able to send this over to you in a few days.
This certification will have the recipient's signature, so this would be a solid evidence.

However I have contacted Amazon with the information above and they have told me something different again. They said that they made refunds because delay in delivery goes against their policies. But again, another department within Amazon had replied that this actually does NOT go against their policy. [Case 201941761]

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We are terribly sorry but we cannot give a discount to this poster because it is rare.
We can send you one that has been returned after being damaged during customs check, at the price of £♢. Please see how big the damage is from the attached photo. You can see how big the scratch is when seen up close, but from afar it is not so noticeable.

It is true that £♢ is too expensive for a cushion. We apologize we cannot be of much help.
If the item is resold we can probably purchase it for a cheap price so we will make sure to keep you updated.

Please check that we have refunded the delivery fee of £♢.
We have finished packing the item and it will be sent out tomorrow.

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We are terribly sorry but we cannot give a discount to this poster because it is rare.
We can send you one that has been returned after being damaged during customs check (inspection), at the price of £♢. Please see how big the damage is from the attached photo. You can see how big the scratch is when seen up close, but from afar it is not so noticeable.

It is true that £♢ is too expensive for a cushion. We apologize we cannot be of much help.
If the item is resold we can probably purchase it for a lower price so we will make sure to keep you updated.

Please check that we have refunded the delivery fee of £♢.
We have finished packing the item and it will be sent out tomorrow.

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Original Album To Be Released July 2nd!

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Original Album To Be Released on July 2nd!

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I am also very confused. Please allow me to question you one more time.
Why doesn't the page below show up in the XYZ tag page?
The XYZ tag is shown on the right side, but even by clicking this tag, the page does not show up.
Normally this should allow the page to show up - correct?
The problem does not occur when there are more than two tags, but when there is only one, it does not show up.
Is the version of the demo site old? Or is it simply because the post is old, and doesn't show up on the XYZ tag page?
Do you understand what I am saying?

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I am also very confused. Please allow me to ask you one more time.
Why doesn't the page below show up in the XYZ tag page?
The XYZ tag is shown on the right side, but even when you click this tag, the page does not show up, does it?
Normally this should allow the page to show up - correct?
The problem does not occur when there are more than two tags, but when there is only one, it does not show up.
Is the version of the demo site old? Or is it simply because the post is old, and doesn't show up on the XYZ tag page?
Do you understand what I am saying?