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At the moment, we have received so many translation request for the item data, and our translation team works on it in the priority order.
Generally our translation period is set to be a month or so, however it may take longer depending on the case.

If you wish to purchase the item data first, please specify in the comment section requesting for the translated data.
We will email you at the time of translated data after replacement.
Also, we anounce our translation status in the newsletter, so take this opportunity to register for it.

We look forward to serving you again.

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We are currently receiving many translation requests for item data, and our translation team is working on it in order of demand.
Generally our translation period is set to be a month or so, however it may take longer depending on the case.

If you wish to purchase the item data first, please specify in the comment section ↵
for your request for the translated data.
We will email you once the translated data is replaced.
Also, we announce our translation status in the newsletter, so please register if you are interested.

We look forward to serving you again.

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We are sorry for delayed reply for your inquiry.

We have this item with the size range from 36(USA) to 42(US10).
If you wish to have bigger size than this range, please either print it in enlarged size, or print it in original size and cut out to spread pattern.

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We are sorry for the delayed reply to your inquiry.

We have this item ranging from sizes 36(USA) to 42(US10).
If you wish for a bigger size than this, please either print it enlarged, or print it in the original size and cut out to spread pattern.

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"TV Tokyo Music Festival (First time)"

TV Tokyo Group "TV Tokyo Music Festival (First time)"
- Date: Thursday 26 June 2014
-Time: 18:30 - 23:24

-HP: www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/ongakusai_2014/

Part I "Mokuhachi! Concert from Thursday 6:30 Tonight's Only"

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"TV Tokyo Music Festival (Start)"

TV Tokyo Group "TV Tokyo Music Festival (Start)"
- Date: June 26 2014 (Thurs.)
-Time: 18:30 - 23:24

-HP: www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/ongakusai_2014/

Part I "Mokuhachi! A Tonight Only Concert from Thursday 6:30"

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JOYSOUND Present campaign 2nd ongoing!

[SOLIDEMO×JOYSOUND Collaboration campaign 2nd] Ongoing !
Let's sing with the live movie, and get the SOLIDEMO LIVE TOUR 2014 -Tree- with autographs!
Please check detailed information on the campaign web site!

[Campaign web site URL]
http://joysound.com/st/toho2014/

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The 2nd JOYSOUND Present Campaign - Ongoing Now!

[TOHOSHINKI×JOYSOUND 2nd Collaboration Campagin] is ongoing now!
Sing with the live video, and win autographed merchandise from TOHOSHINKI LIVE TOUR 2014 ~TREE~ !
Check the campaign website for details!

[Campaign web site URL]
http://joysound.com/st/toho2014/

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There are several demands and questions I want to ask.

1. The mobile phone's menu can not close when it opened. Is this a specification?
2. Does this mobile phone holds the function for posting(Twitter.etc)?
3. When mobile access, would it switch automatically to the layout of the mobile version

1. I'd like to have this feature that if I use Admin can I choose to display the image, such as user-contributed image, whether to hold them.
2. I want to put the title of the article to the post, such as Twitter.
3. I want the ABC links can be old articles.I think it is not so good When I press the ABC links button the page doesn't change since we have a latest post.　

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There are several requests and questions I would like to ask.

1. The menu does not close when opened from a mobile device. Is this a specification?
2. Is there a function for posting from a mobile device?
3. When accessed by mobile device, would it switch automatically to the layout of the mobile version

1.Adminがユーザーが投稿した画像などを表示するか、保留にするかを選択できるような機能↵
2.Twitterなどの投稿に記事のタイトルをいれたい↵
3.ABCのリンクを古い記事にしてほしい↵
一番新しい投稿でABCのリンクを押してもページが変わらないのは良くないと思います↵
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1. I'd like to have this feature that if the Admin can choose to display or put on hold images, such as user-contributed images.
2. I want to put the title of the article to posts, such as Twitter.
3. I want the ABC links to be archived. I think it is not so good When I press the ABC links button and the page doesn't change on the latest post.　

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I have not received your reply to below inquiry.
I have received 3 spam mails since then. If necessary I will forward them.

Access from Vietnam to my website I run has been made again, I guess the person is trying to annoy me ( I see the trace of attempted log in). As I can see on the access log, the person seems to have checked not only one site but multiple sites. However there is no obvious evidence for this.

Anyways, please let me know if you are going to apply severe penalty, countermeasure in detail and whether you will process refund or not. I feel very uneasy.

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I have not received your reply to the below inquiry.
I have received 3 spam mails since then. If necessary I will forward them.

The website that I run has been accessed from Vietnam again, I guess the person is trying to annoy me ( I see the trace of attempted log in). As I can see on the access log, the person seems to have checked not only one site but multiple sites. However there is no obvious evidence for this.

Anyways, please let me know if you are going to apply severe penalty, countermeasure in detail and whether you will process refund or not. I feel very uneasy.

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三浦大和の『Covers EP』
2014年3月14日より配信リリース

1.イット・ウィル・レイン（ブルーノマーズ）
2.ヒューマン・ネイチャー
（マイケル・ジャックソン）↵
3.キャント・ヘルプ・フォーリン・イン・ラブ
（エルビス・プレスリー）↵
4.ウェン・シー・ラブ・ミー↵
（サラー・マックラチラン）

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三浦大和の『Covers EP』
2014年3月14日より配信リリース

1. イット・ウィル・レイン（ブルーノ・マーズ）
2. ヒューマン・ネイチャー（マイケル・ジャクソン）
3. キャント・ヘルプ・フォーリング・イン・ラブ（エルヴィス・プレスリー）
4. ウェン・シー・ラブド・ミー（サラ・マクラクラン）

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Thank you for rough explanation on the illustration.
I appreciate that you requested my most favorite picture of cloth.
I will send along with the rough profile when it is completed.
It will be nest week of a week after next, but I wonder if it is a problem for you.
Heisuke is my old friend and I hear about detail of Sara from Heisuke who speaks English fluently.
I saw the illustrations of the first series. ↵
I look forward to completion.
I will do my best.
Thanks in advance.

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Thank you for your explanation on the rough draft of the illustration.
I am very happy for your request of a illustration of my favorite fabric.
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Once the rough is finished, I will send it along with the profile.
Is it okay if I send it to you sometime next week or the week after? ↵

Heisuke is an old friend of mine and he told me details about Sara, since he speaks fluent English.
I was also shown the first series of the illustrations and I look forward to the finished pieces.
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I will do my best. ↵

Thanks in advance.