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rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 27 Mar 2015 at 12:31
original 6. With Thai language, when opening CSV files or creating data files, a lot of complicated work is needed. 7. The proficiency level of SS and I is low, so that it takes time for getting response or remedy for issues. 8. On the supplier site, it is possible to increase inventory, but not to decrease it, while the translated text implies the both are possible. 9. On the supplier site, there are columns which are not actually functioning (e.g. Limited quantity). 10. There are lots of suspicious operations or actions taken by the system. ↵ -When uploading a data file including lots of lines, the system gets white out.	corrected 6. Since it's Thai language, for opening CSV files or creating data files, works are a lot, and they are difficult. 7. The proficiency level of SS and I is low, so they are slow to response or fix the issues. 8. On the supplier site, it is possible to increase inventory, but not to decrease. (Its translation text looks like both are possible.) 9. On the supplier site, some of them are not working while there are columns. (e.g. Limited quantity etc.). 10. Due to the system there are lots of suspicious operations or actions. -When uploading a data file including lots of items, the screen gets whiteout.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

27 Mar 2015 at 12:31

original
6. With Thai language, when opening CSV files or creating data files, a lot of complicated work is needed.
7. The proficiency level of SS and I is low, so that it takes time for getting response or remedy for issues.
8. On the supplier site, it is possible to increase inventory, but not to decrease it, while the translated text implies the both are possible.
9. On the supplier site, there are columns which are not actually functioning (e.g. Limited quantity).
10. There are lots of suspicious operations or actions taken by the system.
↵
-When uploading a data file including lots of lines, the system gets white out.

corrected
6. Since it's Thai language, for opening CSV files or creating data files, works are a lot, and they are difficult.
7. The proficiency level of SS and I is low, so they are slow to response or fix the issues.
8. On the supplier site, it is possible to increase inventory, but not to decrease. (Its translation text looks like both are possible.)
9. On the supplier site, some of them are not working while there are columns. (e.g. Limited quantity etc.).
10. Due to the system there are lots of suspicious operations or actions.
-When uploading a data file including lots of items, the screen gets whiteout.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 26 Mar 2015 at 11:40
Comment Excellent!!

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 11 Mar 2015 at 12:29
original Hello World * The theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable. The second album "Hello World" will be released on Feb. 16th!! It is the long-waited second album by BACK-ON who powerfully continue to release their single "TELL ME" on Jan. 19th, and another single "with you feat.Me" on Feb. 9th.	corrected Hello World * The theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable. The second album "Hello World" will be released on Feb. 16th!! It is the long-awaited second album by BACK-ON who powerfully continue to release their single "TELL ME" on Jan. 19th, and another single "with you feat.Me" on Feb. 9th.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 11 Mar 2015 at 12:31
original with you feat.Me New single "with you feat.Me" will be released on Feb. 9th! And moreover, it will be used as the theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable! * The theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable.	corrected with you feat.Me New single "with you feat.Me" will be released on Feb. 9th! Moreover, it will be used as the theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable! * The theme song of "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" which is software designed exclusively for PSP(R) , PlayStation Portable.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 11 Mar 2015 at 12:37
Comment 良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 13 Mar 2015 at 13:21
original ご注文の品がお手元に届かず申し訳ございません。時々USPSが注文の品を紛失することがあります。そのご注文に対する代替品ですが、新たにご注文の分と同梱して発送させていただきます（追跡番号は一つです）。新たにご注文していただきますと、その注文に付随して追跡番号が表示されます。ご理解いただきありがとうございます。	corrected ご注文の品がお手元に届かず申し訳ございません。時々USPSが注文の品を紛失することがあります。そのご注文に対する代替品ですが、新たにご注文いただいたものを同梱して発送させていただきます（追跡番号は一つです）。新しい注文が処理されますと、その注文に付随して追跡番号が表示されます。ご理解いただきありがとうございます。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

13 Mar 2015 at 13:21

original
ご注文の品がお手元に届かず申し訳ございません。
時々USPSが注文の品を紛失することがあります。
そのご注文に対する代替品ですが、新たにご注文の分と同梱して発送させていただきます（追跡番号は一つです）。
新たにご注文していただきますと、その注文に付随して追跡番号が表示されます。
ご理解いただきありがとうございます。

corrected
ご注文の品がお手元に届かず申し訳ございません。
時々USPSが注文の品を紛失することがあります。
そのご注文に対する代替品ですが、新たにご注文いただいたものを同梱して発送させていただきます（追跡番号は一つです）。
新しい注文が処理されますと、その注文に付随して追跡番号が表示されます。
ご理解いただきありがとうございます。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 11 Mar 2015 at 13:19
original ご注文の品がお手元に届かず申し訳ございません。時々USPSが注文の品を紛失することがあります。そのご注文に対する代替品ですが、新たにご注文の分と同梱して発送させていただきます（追跡番号は一つです）。新たにご注文していただきますと、その注文に付随して追跡番号が表示されます。ご理解いただきありがとうございます。	corrected ご注文の品がお手元に届かず申し訳ございません。時々USPSが注文の品を紛失することがあります。そのご注文に対する代替品ですが、新たにご注文の分と同梱して発送させていただきます（追跡番号は一つです）。新らしい方のご注文が処理されますと、その注文に付随して追跡番号が表示されます。ご理解いただきありがとうございます。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

11 Mar 2015 at 13:19

corrected
ご注文の品がお手元に届かず申し訳ございません。
時々USPSが注文の品を紛失することがあります。
そのご注文に対する代替品ですが、新たにご注文の分と同梱して発送させていただきます（追跡番号は一つです）。
新らしい方のご注文が処理されますと、その注文に付随して追跡番号が表示されます。
ご理解いただきありがとうございます。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 08 Mar 2015 at 19:09
original Hello. Regarding items we have placed an order, we have ever ordered several times before. It was very regrettable that some items we received were distorted or covered with dust. Can you send us items in good condition as far as possible? Your products are good in shape and the price is reasonable, so that we would like to continue dealing with you in the future. Thank you for your consideration.	corrected Hello. Regarding items we have placed an order for, we have ever ordered several times before. It was very regrettable that some items we received were distorted or covered with dust. Can you send us items in as good condition as possible? Your products are good in shape and the price is reasonable, so that we would like to continue dealing with you also in the future. Thank you for your consideration.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

08 Mar 2015 at 19:09

original
Hello.
Regarding items we have placed an order, we have ever ordered several times before.
It was very regrettable that some items we received were distorted or covered with dust.
Can you send us items in good condition as far as possible?

Your products are good in shape and the price is reasonable, so that we would like to continue dealing with you in the future.
Thank you for your consideration.

corrected
Hello.
Regarding items we have placed an order for, we have ever ordered several times before.
It was very regrettable that some items we received were distorted or covered with dust.
Can you send us items in as good condition as possible?

Your products are good in shape and the price is reasonable, so that we would like to continue dealing with you also in the future.
Thank you for your consideration.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 19 Feb 2015 at 05:35
original I have chatted with Valencia on this order yesterday as follows. According to UPS, the two packages were lost. They directed us to let the sender to call UPS. Please kindly ask the vendor to call UPS. Just now, I have re-ordered the same rugs as in the Order# 60, as you always give us such direction. Please kindly explain this situation to the vendor and ask them to ensure the delivery will be done by Feb. 19th. Concerning the two rugs which did not arrive, we would like to cancel the order. Please kindly process those repayment.	corrected I have chatted with Valencia about this order yesterday as follows. According to UPS, the two packages were lost. They told us to let the sender to call UPS. Please kindly ask the vendor to call UPS. Just now, I have re-ordered the same rugs as in the Order# 60, as you always give us such a direction. Please kindly explain this situation to the vendor and ask them to ensure the delivery will be done by Feb. 19th. Concerning the two rugs which have not been arrived, we would like to cancel the order. Please kindly process the repayment.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

19 Feb 2015 at 05:35

original
I have chatted with Valencia on this order yesterday as follows.

According to UPS, the two packages were lost.
They directed us to let the sender to call UPS.
Please kindly ask the vendor to call UPS.

Just now, I have re-ordered the same rugs as in the Order# 60, as you always give us such direction.
Please kindly explain this situation to the vendor and ask them to ensure the delivery will be done by Feb. 19th.

Concerning the two rugs which did not arrive, we would like to cancel the order.
Please kindly process those repayment.

corrected
I have chatted with Valencia about this order yesterday as follows.

According to UPS, the two packages were lost.
They told us to let the sender to call UPS.
Please kindly ask the vendor to call UPS.

Just now, I have re-ordered the same rugs as in the Order# 60, as you always give us such a direction.
Please kindly explain this situation to the vendor and ask them to ensure the delivery will be done by Feb. 19th.

Concerning the two rugs which have not been arrived, we would like to cancel the order.
Please kindly process the repayment.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 16 Feb 2015 at 23:57
Comment 問題ないと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 17 Feb 2015 at 11:24
Comment 分かりやすい日本語で、専門用語などもきちんと書けていると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 08 Mar 2015 at 11:25
original しかし、主な市場を中国大陸とするQihoo 360と異なり、BabyBusは2011年からアプリを輸出している。多くの中国のデベロッパーが海外市場に焦点を移す原因について、他の多くの市場においてApple社のApp Storeのユーザーが、アプリにお金を払うことに慣れていたり余裕があるからだと考える一方で、BabyBus社は前述の無償モデルはどこででもでもうまくいくと考えている。しかしTang氏は、アプリを無償で提供するだけは不十分、ユーザーは他の無償アプリから乗り換えるためにわずかでもコストを負担しているのだから、必ず最高の品質でなければならない、と付け加えた。	corrected しかし、主な市場を中国大陸とするQihoo 360と異なり、BabyBusは2011年からアプリを輸出している。多くの中国のデベロッパーが海外市場に焦点を移す原因について、他の多くの市場においてApple社のApp Storeユーザーが、アプリにお金を払うことに慣れていたり余裕があるからだと考える一方で、BabyBus社は前述の無償モデルはどこででもでもうまくいくと考えている。しかしTang氏は、アプリを無償で提供するだけは不十分、ユーザーは少しのコストで簡単に他の無償アプリに乗り換えられるので、必ず最高の品質を提供しなくてはならない、と付け加えた。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

08 Mar 2015 at 11:25

original
しかし、主な市場を中国大陸とするQihoo 360と異なり、BabyBusは2011年からアプリを輸出している。多くの中国のデベロッパーが海外市場に焦点を移す原因について、他の多くの市場においてApple社のApp Storeのユーザーが、アプリにお金を払うことに慣れていたり余裕があるからだと考える一方で、BabyBus社は前述の無償モデルはどこででもでもうまくいくと考えている。しかしTang氏は、アプリを無償で提供するだけは不十分、ユーザーは他の無償アプリから乗り換えるためにわずかでもコストを負担しているのだから、必ず最高の品質でなければならない、と付け加えた。

corrected
しかし、主な市場を中国大陸とするQihoo 360と異なり、BabyBusは2011年からアプリを輸出している。多くの中国のデベロッパーが海外市場に焦点を移す原因について、他の多くの市場においてApple社のApp Storeユーザーが、アプリにお金を払うことに慣れていたり余裕があるからだと考える一方で、BabyBus社は前述の無償モデルはどこででもでもうまくいくと考えている。しかしTang氏は、アプリを無償で提供するだけは不十分、ユーザーは少しのコストで簡単に他の無償アプリに乗り換えられるので、必ず最高の品質を提供しなくてはならない、と付け加えた。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 28 Feb 2015 at 20:43
original 海外展開が日本や他のいくつかのアジアの国・地域から始まったのは、アジアの文化においてコンテンツが受けいれられやすいと考えられたからだ。BabyBusのアプリには二人組のパンダが必ず登場する。同社は、パンダは中国固有のものだが、アジアに限らず世界中の子供たちが好むだろうと考えている。BabyBusは様々な大陸から従業員を採用しており、確かな市場でリリースされたコンテンツが、その地に住む親子に確実に受け入れられるようにしている。	corrected 日本や他のいくつかのアジアの国・地域から海外展開が始まったのは、アジアの文化において彼らのコンテンツが受けいれられやすいと考えられたからだ。BabyBusのアプリには二人組のパンダが必ず登場する。同社は、パンダは中国固有のものだが、アジアに限らず世界中の子供たちが好むだろうと考えている。BabyBusは様々な大陸から従業員を採用しており、各市場でリリースされたコンテンツが、現地に住む親子に確実に受け入れられるようにしている。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

28 Feb 2015 at 20:43

original
海外展開が日本や他のいくつかのアジアの国・地域から始まったのは、アジアの文化においてコンテンツが受けいれられやすいと考えられたからだ。BabyBusのアプリには二人組のパンダが必ず登場する。同社は、パンダは中国固有のものだが、アジアに限らず世界中の子供たちが好むだろうと考えている。BabyBusは様々な大陸から従業員を採用しており、確かな市場でリリースされたコンテンツが、その地に住む親子に確実に受け入れられるようにしている。

corrected
日本や他のいくつかのアジアの国・地域から海外展開が始まったのは、アジアの文化において彼らのコンテンツが受けいれられやすいと考えられたからだ。BabyBusのアプリには二人組のパンダが必ず登場する。同社は、パンダは中国固有のものだが、アジアに限らず世界中の子供たちが好むだろうと考えている。BabyBusは様々な大陸から従業員を採用しており、各市場でリリースされたコンテンツが、現地に住む親子に確実に受け入れられるようにしている。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 14 Feb 2015 at 14:22
Comment 丁寧に訳されていると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 14 Feb 2015 at 12:06
Comment 良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 14 Feb 2015 at 16:23
Comment 正しく訳されていると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 14 Feb 2015 at 16:04
Comment 説明文の2行目が抜けているようです。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 14 Feb 2015 at 12:47
original If you have not accepted the order form A, which I sent to Rayan yesterday, we would like to cancel it. We have just sent the order form B which includes some of the items we had listed in the order form A. We understand the reasons of delay in items' shipment. However, we kindly ask you to arrange the shipment so that we will be able to receive the items in Japan, in the next week, at the latest. By the way, I appreciate that we will not have to bear the handling charge of 30 €. We would like to order an additional item and, up to this, hope you can kindly handle without the handling charge. We are now waiting for the arrival of the following items, so please kindly verify.	corrected If you have not accepted the order form A which I sent to Rayan yesterday, we would like to cancel it. We have just sent the order form B which includes some of the items we had listed in the order form A. We understand the reasons of delay in the items' shipment. However, we kindly ask you to arrange the shipment so that we will be able to receive the items in Japan at the latest by the next week. By the way, I appreciate that we will not have to bear the handling charge of 30 €. We would like to order an additional item and, up to this, hope you can kindly handle without the handling charge. We are now waiting for the arrival of the following items, so please kindly verify.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

14 Feb 2015 at 12:47

original
If you have not accepted the order form A, which I sent to Rayan yesterday, we would like to cancel it.
We have just sent the order form B which includes some of the items we had listed in the order form A.

We understand the reasons of delay in items' shipment.
However, we kindly ask you to arrange the shipment so that we will be able to receive the items in Japan, in the next week, at the latest.

By the way, I appreciate that we will not have to bear the handling charge of 30 €.
We would like to order an additional item and, up to this, hope you can kindly handle without the handling charge.

We are now waiting for the arrival of the following items, so please kindly verify.

corrected
If you have not accepted the order form A which I sent to Rayan yesterday, we would like to cancel it.
We have just sent the order form B which includes some of the items we had listed in the order form A.

We understand the reasons of delay in the items' shipment.
However, we kindly ask you to arrange the shipment so that we will be able to receive the items in Japan at the latest by the next week.

By the way, I appreciate that we will not have to bear the handling charge of 30 €.
We would like to order an additional item and, up to this, hope you can kindly handle without the handling charge.

We are now waiting for the arrival of the following items, so please kindly verify.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 13 Feb 2015 at 23:54
original こんにちは。私はこれを返送しようとしているのですが、こちらの郵便局からは私が口座を開かない限り代金引換発送することができません。私が送料を負担して発送できる唯一の方法は、エアメール（追跡番号無し）です。あなた様のほうでこの荷物を集荷する方法がなければ、ですが。あるいは私のUPS用の口座を使って、送料着払いにて発送することもできますが、この方法だと高くなります。ご確認よろしくお願いします。	corrected こんにちは。私はこれを返送しようとしているのですが、こちらの郵便局からは私がアカウントを開かない限り代金引換発送することができません。私が送料を負担して発送できる唯一の方法は、エアメール便（追跡番号無し）です。あなた様のほうでこの荷物を集荷する方法がなければ、ですが。あるいは私のUPS用のアカウントを使って、送料着払いにて発送することもできますが、この方法だと高くなります。ご確認よろしくお願いします。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese

13 Feb 2015 at 23:54

original
こんにちは。
私はこれを返送しようとしているのですが、こちらの郵便局からは私が口座を開かない限り代金引換発送することができません。
私が送料を負担して発送できる唯一の方法は、エアメール（追跡番号無し）です。
あなた様のほうでこの荷物を集荷する方法がなければ、ですが。あるいは私のUPS用の口座を使って、送料着払いにて発送することもできますが、この方法だと高くなります。
ご確認よろしくお願いします。

corrected
こんにちは。
私はこれを返送しようとしているのですが、こちらの郵便局からは私がアカウントを開かない限り代金引換発送することができません。
私が送料を負担して発送できる唯一の方法は、エアメール便（追跡番号無し）です。
あなた様のほうでこの荷物を集荷する方法がなければ、ですが。あるいは私のUPS用のアカウントを使って、送料着払いにて発送することもできますが、この方法だと高くなります。
ご確認よろしくお願いします。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 13 Feb 2015 at 21:33
Comment 問題ないと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 13 Feb 2015 at 19:49
original こんにちは商品の代金は2015年2月13日に支払います。現在PayPalの口座に決済資金が入るのを待っているところです。	corrected こんにちは商品の代金は2015年2月13日金曜日に支払います。現在PayPalの口座に決済資金が入るのを待っているところです。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 15 Feb 2015 at 00:47
original Hi, I am sorry for make you bothered. It was a national holiday in Japan, so the bank was closed yesterday. The transfer should be reflected after tomorrow, so please check accordingly.	corrected Hi, I am sorry to bother you. It was a national holiday in Japan, so the bank was closed yesterday. The transfer should be reflected tomorrow or the next day, so please check it accordingly.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 13 Feb 2015 at 13:20
Comment きれいに全部訳出できています。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 13 Feb 2015 at 13:25
Comment 施工関係などの分野でしょうか?丁寧に訳されていると思います。

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