Jun Kiriyama (kiriyama_jun) — Written Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 30 Jan 2014 at 18:31
original Haoshi Ditu（大雑把に訳すと「善行マップ」）は、ユーザが付近の屋台を見つける手助けをする。お店に関する簡単な情報も提供してくれる。お店のバックグラウンドに関する情報を記載していることもあれば、店員の出で立ちや笑顔に関するコメントだけを紹介していることもある。私がこのアプリを開くと、自宅のアパートから数ブロックのところでお粥を得る女性のことをもう特定していた。	corrected Haoshi Ditu（大雑把に訳すと「善行マップ」）は、ユーザが付近の屋台を見つける手助けをする。お店に関する簡単な情報も提供してくれる。お店のバックグラウンドに関する情報を記載していることもあれば、店員の出で立ちや笑顔に関するコメントだけを紹介していることもある。私がこのアプリを開くと、自宅のアパートから数ブロックのところで毎朝お粥を売っている女性のことをもう特定していた。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

30 Jan 2014 at 18:31

original
Haoshi Ditu（大雑把に訳すと「善行マップ」）は、ユーザが付近の屋台を見つける手助けをする。お店に関する簡単な情報も提供してくれる。お店のバックグラウンドに関する情報を記載していることもあれば、店員の出で立ちや笑顔に関するコメントだけを紹介していることもある。私がこのアプリを開くと、自宅のアパートから数ブロックのところでお粥を得る女性のことをもう特定していた。

corrected
Haoshi Ditu（大雑把に訳すと「善行マップ」）は、ユーザが付近の屋台を見つける手助けをする。お店に関する簡単な情報も提供してくれる。お店のバックグラウンドに関する情報を記載していることもあれば、店員の出で立ちや笑顔に関するコメントだけを紹介していることもある。私がこのアプリを開くと、自宅のアパートから数ブロックのところで毎朝お粥を売っている女性のことをもう特定していた。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 30 Jan 2014 at 10:36
original Did you read my text about EIN　yesterday? As you know, I get in bind because I cannot transfer the package. If you don't care, could you accept it as a returning good? Please tell me your address as soon as possible. We have had a deal for a year.↵ You are my business partner and I hope you would be it for years to come. I was surprised for this matter because it was tortally unexpected. I need your help. Thank you.	corrected Did you read my text about EIN　yesterday? As you know, I get in bind because I cannot transfer the package out of the US. Could you please accept it as a returning good for this time (and re-send)? Please tell me your address as soon as possible. We have been making deals for more than a year, and I consider you as my business↵ partner. I hope you would be it for years to come. I was surprised for this matter because it was tortally unexpected. I need your help. Thank you.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

30 Jan 2014 at 10:36

original
Did you read my text about EIN　yesterday?
As you know, I get in bind because I cannot transfer the package.
If you don't care, could you accept it as a returning good?
Please tell me your address as soon as possible.
We have had a deal for a year.↵
You are my business partner and I hope you would be it for years to come.
I was surprised for this matter because it was tortally unexpected.
I need your help.
Thank you.

corrected
Did you read my text about EIN　yesterday?
As you know, I get in bind because I cannot transfer the package out of the US.
Could you please accept it as a returning good for this time (and re-send)?
Please tell me your address as soon as possible.
We have been making deals for more than a year, and I consider you as my business↵
partner. I hope you would be it for years to come.
I was surprised for this matter because it was tortally unexpected.
I need your help.
Thank you.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 30 Jan 2014 at 10:54
original The publisher of the App has come up with an ingenious way to pass the due diligence processes, which lets the app display only the promotion-relate projects such as those used for the registration to the websites other than AppStore when applying for the process. Due to that reason, there is a possibility that the matters cannot be properly verified in the States. We recommend you to handle the verification processes in Japan instead. We request you to delete this App immediately, and suspend the developper's account. Best regards,	corrected The publisher of the App has come up with an ingenious way to pass the due diligence processes, which lets the app display only the promotion-relate projects such as those used for the registration to the websites other than AppStore when applying for the process. ↵ Also the app checks user's language setting and IP address, enabling it to display app-reward messages only to whom using Japanese App Store users.↵ ↵ Due to that reason, there is a possibility that the matters cannot be properly verified in the States. We recommend you to handle the verification processes in Japan instead. We request you to delete this App immediately, and suspend the developper's account. Best regards,

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

30 Jan 2014 at 10:54

original
The publisher of the App has come up with an ingenious way to pass the due diligence processes, which lets the app display only the promotion-relate projects such as those used for the registration to the websites other than AppStore when applying for the process.
Due to that reason, there is a possibility that the matters cannot be properly verified in the States. We recommend you to handle the verification processes in Japan instead.
We request you to delete this App immediately, and suspend the developper's account.

Best regards,

corrected
The publisher of the App has come up with an ingenious way to pass the due diligence processes, which lets the app display only the promotion-relate projects such as those used for the registration to the websites other than AppStore when applying for the process.
↵
Also the app checks user's language setting and IP address, enabling it to display app-reward messages only to whom using Japanese App Store users.↵
↵
Due to that reason, there is a possibility that the matters cannot be properly verified in the States. We recommend you to handle the verification processes in Japan instead.
We request you to delete this App immediately, and suspend the developper's account.

Best regards,

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 30 Jan 2014 at 10:42
original 1. This article is unsealed yet untouched. Because of its unsealed status, I label it as secondhand. It is rare to get a product that could be in a condition as good as new while being an old product. Now is the time! 2. We can't confirm if the camera works with film because we don't use film. 3. The lens got fogged up and its aperture blade won't open. That's why we include lens as freebie and thus we won't accept any claim in regards to the lens. Please understand before deciding to buy it. 4. It is certain that the shutter works while batteries are inserted.	corrected 1. This article is unsealed yet untouched. Because of its unsealed status, I label it as secondhand. It is rare to get a product that could be in a condition as good as new while being an old product. Now is the time! 2. We can't confirm if the camera works with film because we do not have a film which fits this camera. 3. The lens got fogged up and its aperture blade won't open. That's why we include lens as freebie and thus we won't accept any claim in regards to the lens. Please understand before deciding to buy it. 4. It is certain that the shutter works while batteries are inserted.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English

30 Jan 2014 at 10:42

original
1. This article is unsealed yet untouched. Because of its unsealed status, I label it as secondhand. It is rare to get a product that could be in a condition as good as new while being an old product. Now is the time!

2. We can't confirm if the camera works with film because we don't use film.

3. The lens got fogged up and its aperture blade won't open. That's why we include lens as freebie and thus we won't accept any claim in regards to the lens. Please understand before deciding to buy it.

4. It is certain that the shutter works while batteries are inserted.

corrected
1. This article is unsealed yet untouched. Because of its unsealed status, I label it as secondhand. It is rare to get a product that could be in a condition as good as new while being an old product. Now is the time!

2. We can't confirm if the camera works with film because we do not have a film which fits this camera.

3. The lens got fogged up and its aperture blade won't open. That's why we include lens as freebie and thus we won't accept any claim in regards to the lens. Please understand before deciding to buy it.

4. It is certain that the shutter works while batteries are inserted.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 30 Jan 2014 at 14:30
Comment 染色体のくだりは要するに「みんな男だから」ということでしょうが、いかにもNerdyな表現ですよね。

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 05 Dec 2013 at 13:24
Comment 原文が走り書きなので解釈がややこしいですが、下記のように2つの部分に分けるべきでしょう。「what model AAA's are those」「 just out of curiosity?」それぞれ「なんのモデルのAAA（バッテリ？）ですか？」「単なる好奇心...

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 16 Nov 2013 at 13:25
original 4. RoseOnly RoseOnlyは、レベルの高いオンラインフラワーストアである。この9月に最初のリアル店舗をオープンした。同社はTrends Groupより数百万元のシリーズA資金調達を受け、過去8ヶ月以内にTencentから数千万ドルのシリーズB資金調達を受けた。 5. Etaoshi Etaoshiはレストラン予約、注文、支払い、配達といったワンストップのケータリングサービスを提供するオンラインのフードオーダーおよびデリバリープラットフォームである。 EtaoshiはAlibabaのDianpingのようなサービスであるTaobao Diandianのパートナーである。同社は今年7月に6百万米ドルのシリーズA資金調達を確保している。中国語のレポートはこちらよりダウンロード。パートIIはこちらをご覧いただきたい。	corrected 4. RoseOnly RoseOnlyは、高級志向のオンラインフラワーストアである。この9月に最初の実店舗をオープンした。↵ 同社はTrends Groupより数百万元のシリーズA出資を受け、過去8ヶ月以内にTencentから数千万ドルのシリーズB出資を受けた。 5. Etaoshi Etaoshiはレストラン予約、注文、支払い、配達といったワンストップのケータリングサービスを提供するオンラインのフードオーダーおよびデリバリープラットフォームである。 EtaoshiはAlibabaにおけるDianping類似サービスであるTaobao Diandianのパートナーである。↵ 同社は今年7月に6百万米ドルのシリーズA融資を確保している。中国語のレポートはこちらよりダウンロード。パートIIはこちらをご覧いただきたい。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

16 Nov 2013 at 13:25

original
4. RoseOnly

RoseOnlyは、レベルの高いオンラインフラワーストアである。この9月に最初のリアル店舗をオープンした。同社はTrends Groupより数百万元のシリーズA資金調達を受け、過去8ヶ月以内にTencentから数千万ドルのシリーズB資金調達を受けた。

5. Etaoshi

Etaoshiはレストラン予約、注文、支払い、配達といったワンストップのケータリングサービスを提供するオンラインのフードオーダーおよびデリバリープラットフォームである。 EtaoshiはAlibabaのDianpingのようなサービスであるTaobao Diandianのパートナーである。同社は今年7月に6百万米ドルのシリーズA資金調達を確保している。

中国語のレポートはこちらよりダウンロード。パートIIはこちらをご覧いただきたい。

corrected
4. RoseOnly

RoseOnlyは、高級志向のオンラインフラワーストアである。この9月に最初の実店舗をオープンした。↵
同社はTrends Groupより数百万元のシリーズA出資を受け、過去8ヶ月以内にTencentから数千万ドルのシリーズB出資を受けた。

5. Etaoshi

Etaoshiはレストラン予約、注文、支払い、配達といったワンストップのケータリングサービスを提供するオンラインのフードオーダーおよびデリバリープラットフォームである。 EtaoshiはAlibabaにおけるDianping類似サービスであるTaobao Diandianのパートナーである。↵
同社は今年7月に6百万米ドルのシリーズA融資を確保している。

中国語のレポートはこちらよりダウンロード。パートIIはこちらをご覧いただきたい。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 16 Nov 2013 at 13:34
original 同様の調査はまた’アクチュアリー’や’UIデザイナー’、’情報科学者’のような言葉が、シンガポール人の親がほとんど理解できていないだろう職業リストのトップにあることを明らかにした。興味深いことに、これらの親は子供がどんな仕事をしているのか理解できていないだろう一方で、明らかに内心では最高に気づかっている。シンガポール人の両親の58％は、彼らの子供にとって職業選択の際に考慮すべき最も重要な要素として、仕事で得られる満足感をあげた。一方で、快適な生活を行うのに十分な給料こそが最も重要である、とした両親は全体の29%のみであった。	corrected また、同調査は’アクチュアリー’や’UIデザイナー’、’情報科学者’のような職業については、シンガポール人の親がほとんど理解をできていないことを明らかにした。興味深いことに、これらの親は子供がどんな仕事をしているのか理解できていないと思われる一方で、明らかに内心では非常な関心を持っている。シンガポール人の両親の58％は、彼らの子供にとって職業選択の際に考慮すべき最も重要な要素として、仕事で得られる満足感をあげた。一方で、快適な生活を行うのに十分な給料こそが最も重要である、とした両親は全体の29%のみであった。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

16 Nov 2013 at 13:34

original
同様の調査はまた’アクチュアリー’や’UIデザイナー’、’情報科学者’のような言葉が、シンガポール人の親がほとんど理解できていないだろう職業リストのトップにあることを明らかにした。

興味深いことに、これらの親は子供がどんな仕事をしているのか理解できていないだろう一方で、明らかに内心では最高に気づかっている。シンガポール人の両親の58％は、彼らの子供にとって職業選択の際に考慮すべき最も重要な要素として、仕事で得られる満足感をあげた。

一方で、快適な生活を行うのに十分な給料こそが最も重要である、とした両親は全体の29%のみであった。

corrected
また、同調査は’アクチュアリー’や’UIデザイナー’、’情報科学者’のような職業については、シンガポール人の親がほとんど理解をできていないことを明らかにした。

興味深いことに、これらの親は子供がどんな仕事をしているのか理解できていないと思われる一方で、明らかに内心では非常な関心を持っている。シンガポール人の両親の58％は、彼らの子供にとって職業選択の際に考慮すべき最も重要な要素として、仕事で得られる満足感をあげた。

一方で、快適な生活を行うのに十分な給料こそが最も重要である、とした両親は全体の29%のみであった。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 16 Nov 2013 at 00:30
original Dear sir/madam who loves Japan Latest poplar candies and snack, standard sweets that are know to and loved by every Japanese, and traditional sweets that are called "dagashi" will be assorted and delivered directly from Japan. Our Japanese staff carefully select chocolate, candies and snack that have been come out by delicate and bold product development capability, as well as standard sweets that have been loved since olden days and "dagashi" that are necessary to feel the authentic Japan.	corrected Dear sir/madam who loves Japan Latest popular candies and snacks, standard sweets that are known and loved by every Japanese, and traditional sweets that are called "dagashi" will be assorted and delivered directly from Japan. Our Japanese staff carefully select chocolate, candies and snacks that have been designed by Japanese sense of delicacy and bold product designing, as well as dagashi, "the" standard sweets that have been loved ever since old days and the key item to feel the authentic Japan.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

16 Nov 2013 at 00:30

original
Dear sir/madam who loves Japan

Latest poplar candies and snack, standard sweets that are know to and loved by every Japanese, and traditional sweets that are called "dagashi" will be assorted and delivered directly from Japan.

Our Japanese staff carefully select chocolate, candies and snack that have been come out by delicate and bold product development capability, as well as standard sweets that have been loved since olden days and "dagashi" that are necessary to feel the authentic Japan.

corrected
Dear sir/madam who loves Japan

Latest popular candies and snacks, standard sweets that are known and loved by every Japanese, and traditional sweets that are called "dagashi" will be assorted and delivered directly from Japan.

Our Japanese staff carefully select chocolate, candies and snacks that have been designed by Japanese sense of delicacy and bold product designing, as well as dagashi, "the" standard sweets that have been loved ever since old days and the key item to feel the authentic Japan.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 16 Nov 2013 at 13:48
original 同様に利用者はポイントを使用することで彼らの組み合わせについて写真を通じてより知ることができます。利用者がポイントを使用しないことを選択した場合、組み合わせ相手との取引において、利用者は自身が提供した写真と同数の写真しか見ることができません。 Baek談、”もし私が10枚、ある他の人が2枚のみしか写真を持っていないとしますと、彼女は私の写真8枚を見ることができません”	corrected また、ユーザーはポイントを利用することでマッチング相手の写真を見ることが出来ます。ポイントを利用しない場合、そのマッチング相手については自身が提供した写真と同じ数の写真しか見ることができません。 ”もし私が10枚、相手が2枚のみしか写真を持っていないとしますと、彼女は私の写真8枚を見ることができません”とBaek氏は言います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

16 Nov 2013 at 13:48

original
同様に利用者はポイントを使用することで彼らの組み合わせについて写真を通じてより知ることができます。利用者がポイントを使用しないことを選択した場合、組み合わせ相手との取引において、利用者は自身が提供した写真と同数の写真しか見ることができません。

Baek談、”もし私が10枚、ある他の人が2枚のみしか写真を持っていないとしますと、彼女は私の写真8枚を見ることができません”

corrected
また、ユーザーはポイントを利用することでマッチング相手の写真を見ることが出来ます。ポイントを利用しない場合、そのマッチング相手については自身が提供した写真と同じ数の写真しか見ることができません。

”もし私が10枚、相手が2枚のみしか写真を持っていないとしますと、彼女は私の写真8枚を見ることができません”とBaek氏は言います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 16 Nov 2013 at 13:42
original Heyがシンガポール、香港と台湾で利用できることは、ユーザーが他の国の人と会えるということなのか？Baekはユーザーのマッチングを選ぶことができないと明かしているが、システムは地理的位置によって、近くの人を観覧できる。何と言っても、ユーザーが遠い人とマッチングされても無駄であるからね。	corrected Heyがシンガポール、香港と台湾でサービスを展開しているということは、ユーザーが他の国の人と出会うチャンスがあるということなのか？↵ Baek氏はユーザーがマッチングを選ぶことはできないと明言しているが、システムはユーザーの地理的情報を参照して、近くに住む人同士をマッチングするようにしている。何と言っても、会うことも出来ないような人とマッチングされても意味が無いからだ。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

16 Nov 2013 at 13:42

original
Heyがシンガポール、香港と台湾で利用できることは、ユーザーが他の国の人と会えるということなのか？Baekはユーザーのマッチングを選ぶことができないと明かしているが、システムは地理的位置によって、近くの人を観覧できる。何と言っても、ユーザーが遠い人とマッチングされても無駄であるからね。

corrected
Heyがシンガポール、香港と台湾でサービスを展開しているということは、ユーザーが他の国の人と出会うチャンスがあるということなのか？↵
Baek氏はユーザーがマッチングを選ぶことはできないと明言しているが、システムはユーザーの地理的情報を参照して、近くに住む人同士をマッチングするようにしている。何と言っても、会うことも出来ないような人とマッチングされても意味が無いからだ。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 16 Nov 2013 at 00:35
original We are so sorry to have bothered you this time. I persuaded a friend of mine from canceling a bid on ebay. I would like to purchase your doll. I would really appreciate if you could send me an invoice. Thank you for cooperation in advance. Once I have received the invoice, I will pay. Could you send the doll to my postal address in Japan. I would appreciate for your correspondence from bottom of my heart. Thanks a million. I'm looking forward the invoice from you.	corrected We are so sorry to have bothered you this time. I persuaded a friend of mine from canceling a bid on ebay. I would like to purchase your doll. I would really appreciate if you could send me an invoice. Thank you for cooperation in advance. Once I have received the invoice, I will make a payment. Could you send the doll to my postal address in Japan. I would appreciate for your correspondence from bottom of my heart. Thanks a million. I'm looking forward the invoice from you.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English

16 Nov 2013 at 00:35

original
We are so sorry to have bothered you this time.
I persuaded a friend of mine from canceling a bid on ebay. I would like to purchase your doll. I would really appreciate if you could send me an invoice. Thank you for cooperation in advance. Once I have received the invoice, I will pay. Could you send the doll to my postal address in Japan.
I would appreciate for your correspondence from bottom of my heart. Thanks a million. I'm looking forward the invoice from you.

corrected
We are so sorry to have bothered you this time.
I persuaded a friend of mine from canceling a bid on ebay. I would like to purchase your doll. I would really appreciate if you could send me an invoice. Thank you for cooperation in advance. Once I have received the invoice, I will make a payment. Could you send the doll to my postal address in Japan.
I would appreciate for your correspondence from bottom of my heart. Thanks a million. I'm looking forward the invoice from you.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 16 Nov 2013 at 00:39
original "Konkan Wallet Style No. 28901452" is not in my hand. I have already returned the product. I even recieved an e-mail from your person. So please refund my money. I have recieved ”Odra Leather Wallet　Style No. 27281427” on safe. Don't you review the e-mails? I always send them with the previous conversation written on it. I am sick of explaining the same thing over and over.	corrected "Konkan Wallet Style No. 28901452" is not in my hands. I have already returned the product and your staff has confirmed its receipt. So please refund my money. I have recieved ”Odra Leather Wallet　Style No. 27281427” without any trouble. Don't you review the e-mails? I always send them with the previous conversation in a thread. I am sick of explaining the same thing over and over.

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16 Nov 2013 at 00:39

original
"Konkan Wallet Style No. 28901452" is not in my hand. I have already returned the product. I even recieved an e-mail from your person.
So please refund my money.
I have recieved ”Odra Leather Wallet　Style No. 27281427” on safe.
Don't you review the e-mails? I always send them with the previous conversation written on it. I am sick of explaining the same thing over and over.

corrected
"Konkan Wallet Style No. 28901452" is not in my hands. I have already returned the product and your staff has confirmed its receipt.
So please refund my money.
I have recieved ”Odra Leather Wallet　Style No. 27281427” without any trouble.
Don't you review the e-mails? I always send them with the previous conversation in a thread. I am sick of explaining the same thing over and over.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 16 Nov 2013 at 00:43
original I'm sorry to reply late. I was looking for a blue 68 but did not have a shirt and jacket. Is there a pants Black / Blue XL is (EU L), but there is no jacket. WHAT YOU DO? Can you read ■PDF for me? I want you to the product registration in the 〇〇 . Can you work with that tool? At the same, please send me excel in a sample of your research. I will read and judge it. I will pass the ID and password to you after that.	corrected I'm sorry to reply late. I was looking for a blue 68 but did not have a shirt and a jacket. For Black / Blue XL is (EU L), we have pants but but no jacket. What would you like? Have you looked into the PDF? I want you to do the product registration using 〇〇 . Can you work with that tool? And please send your sample reserch in Excel. I will see if you are fit to the job by reviewing it. Once you are quolified, I will pass the ID and password to you.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

16 Nov 2013 at 00:43

original

I'm sorry to reply late.

I was looking for a blue 68 but did not have a shirt and jacket.

Is there a pants Black / Blue XL is (EU L), but there is no jacket.
WHAT YOU DO?

Can you read ■PDF for me?
I want you to the product registration in the 〇〇 . Can you work with that tool?
At the same, please send me excel in a sample of your research.
I will read and judge it.

I will pass the ID and password to you after that.

corrected

I'm sorry to reply late.

I was looking for a blue 68 but did not have a shirt and a jacket.

For Black / Blue XL is (EU L), we have pants but but no jacket.
What would you like?

Have you looked into the PDF?
I want you to do the product registration using 〇〇 . Can you work with that tool?
And please send your sample reserch in Excel.
I will see if you are fit to the job by reviewing it.

Once you are quolified, I will pass the ID and password to you.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 16 Nov 2013 at 10:37
original This is logistics outsourcing of Espool. <a href="http://www.spool.co.jp/service/logistics.html" target="_blank"><strong> </strong></a>	corrected This is the <a href="http://www.spool.co.jp/service/logistics.html" target="_blank"><strong>logistics outsourcing</strong></a> service of Espool.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 16 Nov 2013 at 11:29
original <br></br>Parts like that are eventually, will be human's experiences greatest optimization	corrected <br></br>For those matters, after all, empirical know-hows works best for optimization.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 16 Nov 2013 at 10:41
original <br></br> I would like everyone to support us. I look forward to your acquaintance.	corrected <br></br> I would like everyone to support us. I look forward for your assistance.

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