cold7210 — Written Reviews

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I was expecting an invoice from PayPal, but I haven’t received it, so I sent a $100 deposit.

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I was expecting an invoice from PayPal, but I haven’t received it, so I remitted $100 as a deposit.

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It was very easy to install.
Unless I designated file name, I could not install it for no reason, but it works without problem.
It might be a problem of setting at server.

I measured by AAA, and I found that it works a little faster.
But I feel that it works much faster. I am satisfied with it very much.

1 question: Old cash file is deleted from server automatically, isn't it?

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It was very easy to install.
Unless I designated file name, I could not install it for some reason, but it works without problem.
It might be a problem of configuration of server.

I measured by AAA, and I found that it works a little faster.
But I feel that it has become much faster. I am satisfied with it very much.

1 question: Old cash file is deleted from server automatically, isn't it?

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こんにちは。お知り合いになれて光栄です。私はマカオで時計のお店をしているので、あなたの時計の卸価格を是非教えて頂きたいです。ご協力ありがとうございます。

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こんにちは。お知り合いになれて光栄です。私はマカオで時計のお店をしているので、あなたの時計の卸価格を是非教えて頂きたいです。ご協力お願いします。

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はい。
お客様のカードに845ドル請求いたしました(商品代　785ドルと送料60ドル)
過去の領収書も同封いたしました。

今回、なぜたくさんのClassic Oval ringsをご購入しようとお考えになったのですか？

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はい。
お客様のカードに845ドル請求いたしました(商品代　785ドルと送料60ドル)
過去の領収書も同封いたしました。

ところで今回、なぜたくさんのClassic Oval ringsをご購入しようとお考えになったのですか？

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If I send your burden on EMS today, you maybe get it on 12th .
On DHL, it will probably arrive earlier, but the burden may stop at custom.
Can I send on EMS?

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If I send the package through EMS today, you may receive it on 12th .
If using DHL, it will probably arrive earlier, but the item may stop at the custom house.
Can I make a shipment through EMS?

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I have contacted the maker, but I still have not received any answer.
As soon as I do get an answer, I will let you know, so could you wait a little longer?
I'm grateful for your patience.

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I have contacted the manufacturer, but I still have not received any answer.
As soon as I do get the answer, I will let you know, so could you wait a little longer?
I'm grateful for your patience.

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The application for certification of the 7th document is accepted and then I received the original text.
I will send to your office the original text with 1st to 5th which has already accepted.

I will send them with two emails as the volume of those files are big.

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The application for authentication of the 7th document is accepted and then I received the original text.
I will send to your office the original text with 1st to 5th which has already been authenticated.

I will send them with two emails as the volume of those files are big.

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Do you mean that there is a sales agent?
Who should we contact with to purchase Japanese beef?
In considering purchasing, please tell me a estimate and a way to purchase.

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Do you mean that there is a sales agent?
Who should we contact with to purchase Japanese beef?
In considering purchasing, please tell me an estimate and the way to purchase.

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Thank you for kindly response.
I will consider this order after seeing the size.

By the way, I would like to confirm whether each price on your store includes VAT or not.
If so, is it possible that I receive the pay back?

I am looking forward to seeing your replying.

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Thank you for your kind response.
I will consider this order after seeing the size.

By the way, I would like to confirm whether the price of each item that I have bought from your store includes VAT or not.
If so, is it possible that I receive the pay back?

I am looking forward to your reply.

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Thank you for your information about the parts’ price.
However, customers can buy genuine parts at $100 in Japan.
The prices of genuine parts have become considerably low because the manufacturer made the price revision.

If we purchase from your company, the price including the shipping charge becomes higher than those on the market.
Would you be able to offer me less than $90?
I am sorry for requesting you rather difficult matter.

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Thank you for your information about the parts’ price.
However, customers can buy genuine parts at $100 in Japan.
The prices of genuine parts have become considerably low because the manufacturer made the price revision.

If we purchase from your company, the price including the shipping charge becomes higher than those on the market.
Would you be able to offer us less than $90?
I am sorry for requesting you rather difficult matter.

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こんにちは。
到着日時を確認したいのですが。いつ受け取れますか。３月１０日に転居しますので。　　ドンイン

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こんにちは。
到着日時を確認したいのですが。いつ受け取れますか。３月１０日に東営市から転居しますので。　

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This is acknowledged!!

I want to concur to your wishes if possible.
Since I will be doing the modification work, please kindly understand that the arrival will be postponed to 2 or 3 days.

If the "shipping notification" is not done on the Amazon system, then this would be subjected to a penalty, so please set the shipping notification first.
Once the actual shipping has been completed, you will be informed through email.

I request for your support on this.

Thank you for your patronage.

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I understood!!

I will meet your demands as much as possible.
Since I will be working on the alteration procedure, please kindly understand that the arrival will be postponed to 2 or 3 days.

If the "shipping notification" is not done on the Amazon system, then this would be subjected to a penalty, so please set the shipping notification first.
Once the actual shipping has been completed, you will be informed through email.

I request for your support on this.

Thank you for your patronage.

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I'm glad you liked it.
I'm thinking of shipping by EMS.
It takes about 7 days.
Shipping charges depend on the weight of the goods.
If you'd like to have anything included together in the package please give me a request.
I'll let you know the total payment after I've shipped the goods.

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I'm glad you liked it.
I'm going to ship the package by EMS.
It takes about 7 days.
Shipping fee depends on the weight of the items.
If you'd like to have anything included together in the package please give me a request.
I'll let you know the total sum when I've shipped the items.

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I really want to return all 11 items.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to build a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I have to file a claim to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as of a seller.
Thank you.

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I want to return all 11 items after all.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to keep a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I have to file a claim to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as of a seller.
Thank you.

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For that reason, we don't want to bother you anymore and we'd like to cancel the 2 products that you inquired about and we will fully refund the money to you.
Please understand that we will refund by amazonUSA.
This time even though you like these products so much, we are terribly sorry that they can't be shipped due to the delivery problem.

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For that reason, we don't want to bother you anymore and we'd like to cancel the 2 products that you inquired about and we will fully refund the money to you.
Please be sure that we will refund by amazonUSA.
This time even though you like these products so much, we are terribly sorry that they can't be shipped due to the delivery problem.

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What I purchased is the new OOO.

I told them about it and offered them to resend the lacking items.

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What I purchased is the new OOO.

I told them about it and requested them to resend the lacking items.

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自己紹介させてください。Butler Watch Companyのオーナーの、Corey Butlerと申します。つい先日、貴方が弊社のPinterestページをフォローしてくださっているのを拝見しました。弊社の時計ブランドについてご意見をお聞かせ願えればと存じます。ダイアローグの開始をご希望ならば、ぜひご連絡ください。取引に関心をお持ちではないでしょうか。よろしくお願いします。Corey Butler

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自己紹介させてください。Butler Watch Companyのオーナーの、Corey Butlerと申します。つい先日、貴方が弊社のPinterestページをフォローしてくださっているのを拝見しました。弊社の時計ブランドについてご意見をお聞かせ願えればと存じます。お話していただいても宜しければ、ぜひご連絡ください。弊社との取引に関心をお持ちではないでしょうか。よろしくお願いします。Corey Butler

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ph70704

It's cute, so let's go!

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ph70704

She's cute, so that's OK!

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In recent years, you can not see real fmale ninjyas in Japan, they might hide themselves somewhere. When you come to Japan, it will be fun that you try to find them.

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In recent years, you can not see kunoichis in Japan, but they might lurk in the shadows. When you come to Japan, it will be fun that you try to find them.

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Dear Mr Lindsey.

Hello.

How is my package inside of the outbox going?
I will be in trouble if you don't ship it by the end of this week.

So tell me the situation of it please.

Thank you.

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Dear Mr Lindsey.

Hello.

How is my package inside of the outbox going?
I will be in trouble if you don't ship it by the end of this week.

So please let me know about the currrent situation.

Thank you.

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A staff of the consulate told that “consequently, it cannot be approved because it is refereeing to the consulate general which is different from the fact”.

I have obtained a document which was applied by another company for approval as an authorization letter from the consulate.
According them, if the content of document is like this (without statement confirmed by the consulate general), it is approved without any issue. Please make this as your reference.

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A staff of the consulate told that “consequently, it cannot be approved because it is referring to the consulate general which is different from the fact”.

I have obtained an attached file as a document which was applied by another company for approval as an authorization letter from the consulate.
According to them, if the content of document is like this (without statement confirmed by the consulate general), it is approved without any issue. Please make this as your reference.