Yuuki N. (yuukin) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
It's a pleasure to work with you.
We coped with the customer who you asked us about on Friday. Thank you.
We had received the part of the hammock chair that hadn't been in and you sent us.
However, the customer reported that two of that part hadn't been included, so we need one more. Could you please enclose it with the items we ordered today?

Thank you.

修正後
It's a pleasure to work with you.
We dealt with the customer who you contacted us about on Friday. Thank you.
The part that was missing from the hammock chair that you sent us before has arrived safely.
However, the customer reported that two of that part hadn't been included, so we need one more. Sorry to bother you again but could you please enclose it with the items we ordered today?

Thank you.

元の翻訳
I'm afraid to return the item to the seller as you had explained. Two years ago, I sent back an item to a seller because the customer support had adviced me like that. Then, I told you the tracking number as specified. After that, the item was delivered to the seller. However the seller didn't refund. I got an e-mail of apology, but that's it. To put it another way, I paid money to the seller and give them the item for free. I'm really worrying if the same thing will happen. Can I be refuned in advance?

修正後
I'm afraid to return the item to the seller as you explained. Two years ago, I sent back an item to a seller because customer support advised me to do so. I then told you the tracking number as specified. After that, the item was delivered to the seller, but the seller didn't repay the money. I got an e-mail of apology, but that's it. To put it another way, I paid money to the seller and gave them the item for free. I'm really worried the same thing might happen. Can I be refunded in advance?

元の翻訳
I'm worrying if it will break again. So I suggest buying a new one in US. If you do it, I will refund all of money you had paid me. Which do you prefer repair or refund?

修正後
I'm worrying if it will break again. So I suggest buying a new one in US. In that case, I will refund all of the money you paid me. Which do you prefer, repair or refund?

元の翻訳
I am sorry for delaying reply. I had contacted the customer center, but they haven't answered me because it's summer vacation in Japan now. So the customer center also have a vacation from Augst 10th to 18th. You have a warranty of this item, so it's possible to be fixed. I will pay the shipping fee from US to Japan. However, a pendulum metronome is vulnerable to shock, so it may break again during delivry to US even if it's fixed.

修正後
I am sorry for the delayed reply. I contacted the customer center, but they haven't answered me because this week is the Obon summer holidays in Japan; so the customer center is on vacation August 10-18. You have a warranty for this item, so it can be fixed. I will pay the shipping fee from the US to Japan, but pendulum metronomes are vulnerable to shock, so it may break again during delivery to the US even if it's fixed.

元の翻訳
Hello!↵
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I see, I'll arrange that we'll send the item to the address you had specified.↵
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Please wait for arrival for a while.

Thank you!

修正後
Hello. I see, I'll arrange that we send the item to the address you specified. Please wait for arrival for a while.

Thank you!