イザット (teditedu) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
We appreciate you sharing the information with us.
Mr. Tanaka might not be able to see your email right away, but I'll let you know.
We appreciate your patience as we may take some time to respond.

修正後
We appreciate you sharing the information with us.
Mr. Tanaka might not be able to see your email right away, but I will let you know when he does.
We appreciate your patience as we may take some time to respond.

元の翻訳
Replace the printer with a new one.
Change the ink to a product with low water content and less likely to leaking or oozing.
After printing, labels are not used for delivery until at least one hour has passed.
A three-person team checks the labels for quality issue.

1st person Visual check of printed labels
2nd person Visual check by label attaching staff
3rd person Visual check by the person in charge of placing the product in the delivery box

7. All the problems have been corrected for the deliveries made after today.

We apologize for the inconvenience caused by this issue.
We will be very careful not to cause this kind of situation in the future.

Excuse me.

修正後
Replace the printer with a new one.
Change the ink to a product with low water content less likely to leak or ooze out.
Labels are not used for delivery until at least one hour has passed since printing.
A three-person team checks the labels for quality.

1st person: Visual check of printed labels
2nd person: Visual check by label attaching staff
3rd person: Visual check by the person in charge of placing the product in the delivery box

7. All the problems have been corrected for the deliveries made after today.

We apologize for the inconvenience caused by this issue.
We will be very careful not to cause this kind of situation again.

Kind regards

元の翻訳
シリコンゴムは塩素で何かに使用することができるということですか?

修正後
そのシリコンゴムは塩素が入っているものに使用できるということですか?↵

元の翻訳
こんにちは、私はこのセットを持っていません。ロシアではこのサイトからの配送はありません。私はセットを検索することができます。それとも、あなたは私にそれを送ることができます。8月の注文の価格は1100ドルの費用がかかります。

修正後
こんにちは、私はこのセットを持っていません。ロシアではこのサイトからの配送はありません。私はセットを検索することができます。あるいは、あなたが私にそれを送ることができます。8月の注文の価格は1100ドルになります。↵
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疑問文では「それとも〜」となりますが、文中では「あるいは／もしくは」と訳すのが良いでしょう。

元の翻訳
I'm really sorry for many times.
What is the maximum storage period for CY?
Can I keep it longer eventhough after Freetime if I pay Storage & Demmurage?
This is only for confirmation if just in case.
We are really apologize for the difficulty.
Would you please include the REF# when sending Arrival Notices and emailing movements?
I will inform you when finish.

修正後
I apologize for reaching out to your multiple times.
What is the maximum storage period for CY?
Can you keep it longer even past the Freetime if I pay for the Storage & Demmurage fee ?
I wanted to verify this with you just in case.
We apologize if we are asking for too much.
Would you please include the REF# when you send the Arrival Notices and when you email the movement information?
I make a note of this after everything has been completed.