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元の翻訳
記載されている内容と商品が異なりますので販売者に連絡致しました。
販売者によると商品購入者が返品する場合、購入価格と輸送価格の返金は保障されています。返品する場合には自己負担で発送していただきますが、返金を受け取りましたら、2014年1月2日までの発送して下さい。
　
返金について
販売者が商品を受け取りましたら、＄１１９．９６．全額返金を受け取れます。返金額には商品購入価格と発送料金が含まれています。

The Resolution Centerにて今回の件に関する具体的な内容や商品発送に関する情報が得られます。

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記載されている内容と商品が異なることを販売者に連絡致しました。
販売者によると商品購入者が返品する場合、購入価格と発送費の返金は全額保障されています。返金を受ける場合、販売者に返品してください。発送費は負担していただきます。2014年1月2日までに発送して下さい。
　
返金について
販売者が商品を受け取りましたら、１１９．９６ドルの全額返金を受け取れます。返金額には商品購入価格と発送料金が含まれています。

The Resolution Centerにて今回の件に関する具体的な内容や商品発送に関する情報が得られます。

元の翻訳
あなたはAと英国に問題があることを知らせることができますか？私はあなたからのメールを受け取っていないと、あなたは私たちの製品を販売するために持っているものの問題を知らないからです。

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あなたはAと英国に問題があることを知らせることができますか？私はあなたからのメールを受け取っておらず、私たちの製品を販売するためにどんな問題があるのか知らないからです。

元の翻訳
AとUKの問題を教えていただけますでしょうか？私たちはあなたからのメールを受け取っていなくて、私たちの製品を販売するために持っている問題が知らないからです。

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AとUKの問題を教えていただけますでしょうか？なぜなら私たちはあなたからのメールを受け取っておらず、私たちの製品を販売する上でそちらが抱えている問題を知らないからです。

元の翻訳
お支払いいただいてすぐに商品を発送しています。追跡番号でお客様のフルネームとお支払日、配達先住所をご確認ください。

お支払完了後7日以内に配達するように心がけておりますが、お届けに時間がかかる場合もございます。したがいまして、オークションサイトの留意事項には、お支払完了から20営業日以内の配送と記載しています。ご迷惑をおかけして申し訳ございませんが、通関と航空便で以前より時間がかかっているようです。発送済の商品はすべて記録しておりますので、配達時にご不在の際は不在通知があるか、再配達されるはずです。
お支払完了後15日以上経過している場合はお知らせください。追跡番号を探します。

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お支払いいただいてすぐに商品を発送しています。追跡番号のお客様のフルネームとお支払日、配達先住所をご確認ください。

お支払完了後7日以内に配達するように心がけておりますが、お届けに時間がかかる場合もございます。したがいまして、オークションサイトの留意事項には、お支払完了から20営業日以内の配送と記載しています。ご迷惑をおかけして申し訳ございませんが、通関と航空便で以前より時間がかかっているようです。商品はすべて配達記録が残る方法で送りますので、配達時にご不在の際は不在通知があるか、再配達されるはずです。
お支払完了後15日以上経過している場合はお知らせください。追跡番号を探します。

元の翻訳
商品はお支払い後すぐに発送しております。トラッキングナンバーに必要なフルネーム、お支払日、配送先ご住所をご確認ください。

お支払手続き完了後７日以内の発送を心がけておりますが、商品によっては少しお時間をいただく場合もあります。オークションに記載している出荷までの日数は、そのためお支払手続き後20営業日以内となっております。ご不便をおかけしていたら申し訳ありませんが、通関手続きや航空便は最近時間がかかるようです。商品はすべて配達証明を付けて発送しておりますので、ご不在の場合でも不在通知が入るか再配達されるはずです。

もしお支払後15営業日を過ぎている場合は、ご連絡ください。あなたのトラッキングナンバーを確認いたします。

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商品はお支払い後すぐに発送しております。トラッキングナンバーに必要なフルネーム、お支払日、配送先ご住所をご確認ください。

お支払手続き完了後７日以内にお届けするよう心がけておりますが、商品によっては少しお時間をいただく場合もあります。そのため、オークションに記載している配達日数はお支払手続き完了後20営業日以内となっております。ご不便をおかけしていたら申し訳ありませんが、通関手続きや航空便は最近時間がかかるようです。商品はすべて配達証明を付けて発送しておりますので、ご不在の場合でも不在通知が入るか再配達されるはずです。

もしお支払後15営業日を過ぎている場合は、ご連絡ください。あなたのトラッキングナンバーを確認いたします。

元の翻訳
The rings arrived yesterday. They are of very good workmanship.
As expected, it is exactly what I requested from you.

Starting after New Year, the sales site will be in construction, I think the sales should start in March.

According to my experience, it will take a bit of time until we can start selling.
It depends on the merchandise, but in general it should take some 3 months.

For that reason, I think reordering will take some time.
I am repeating myself, but please do not destroy the mould.

If in 1 year the sales should not show results, I will contact you regarding the disposal of the moulds.

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The rings arrived yesterday. They are of very good workmanship.
As expected, it is exactly what I requested from you. Thank you very much.

Starting after New Year, the sales site will be in construction, so I think the sales should start in March.

According to my experience, it will take a bit of time until the products start selling.
It depends on the merchandise, but in general it should take some 3 months.

For that reason, I think reordering will take some time.
I am repeating myself, but please do not destroy the mould.

If in 1 year the sales should not show results, I will contact you regarding the disposal of the moulds.

元の翻訳
From the autopsy cases, the arteriosclerotic lesion of main artery develops proceeding to the brain and the coronary artery so it is considered possible that the laboratory data reflecting the arteriosclerosis is altered earlier than the brain and the atherosclerotic coronary artery lesion.
In addition, if the cause of disease A is resulting from the arteriosclerotic lesion of intracranial vessel, the arteriosclerosis of major blood vessel should have already become advanced at certain degree.・・・・・The more advancing the ages, the higher hyperendemic of the hyperpiesia and the hyperlipidemia, In connection with this, the laboratory data shows the higher value, but it is required the deliberate discussion whether that is the direct root cause of this disease.

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From the autopsy cases, the arteriosclerotic lesion of main artery develops proceeding to the brain and the coronary artery so it is considered possible that the laboratory data reflecting the arteriosclerosis is altered earlier than the brain and the atherosclerotic coronary artery lesion.
In addition, if the cause of disease A is resulting from the arteriosclerotic lesion of intracranial vessel, the arteriosclerosis of major blood vessel should have already become advanced at certain degree.・・・・・The older the people, the higher the frequency of hyperpiesia and hyperlipidemia. In connection with this, the laboratory data shows the higher value, but it requires a deliberate discussion whether that is the direct root cause of this disease.

元の翻訳
フランス

こんにちは、

我々は、出荷時期が長すぎるため、この注文をキャンセルしたい。
私たちはあなたのお店が日本に基づいていなかったので気づいていなかった。

それは可能ですか？

よろしく

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フランス

こんにちは、

我々は、配達日数が長すぎるため、この注文をキャンセルしたいのです。
私たちはあなたのお店が日本に拠点を置いていることに気づいていませんでした。

キャンセルは可能ですか？

よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
こんにちは
今注文をキャンセルします。理由は、発送に時間がかかりすぎるからです。また、貴店の本店が日本にある旨も存じませんでした。

キャンセルは、可能でしょうか。

敬具

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こんにちは
この注文をキャンセルしたいのです。理由は、配送に時間がかかりすぎるからです。また、貴店が日本に拠点を置いている旨も存じませんでした。

キャンセルは、可能でしょうか。

敬具

元の翻訳
We are contacting you this time as you were referred by oo-san.

The contract on the delivery service of the maker has ended and we could not proceed with receiving the products.

I hope that we can have △△ help us by all means and pickup the products.

And we would like the product to be shipped via MyUs in Florida or directly to Japan after the pickup.

We would like to know the estimated amount for this.

We want to forever continue to patronize you and not just for the product this time.

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We are contacting you this time as you were referred by oo-san.

The contract on the delivery service of the maker has ended and we cannot proceed with receiving the products.

I hope that we can have △△ help us by all means and pick up the products.

And we would like the product to be shipped via MyUs in Florida or directly to Japan after the pickup.

We would like to know the estimated amount for this.

We want to forever continue to patronize you and not just for the product this time.

元の翻訳
ドーナッツに砂糖をまぶす工程を君が見ることのできるような機械を彼らが持っているのですか。

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ドーナッツに砂糖をまぶす工程を見る時、機械は見られるようになっていますか？

元の翻訳
The product seems to be delivered at around your vicinity.

Please return the product unopened within three days if it has arrived.
(please choose registered mail delivery.)

I will refund the product and the postage after confirmation of the arrival.

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According to the delivery status, the product seems to be in your vicinity.

Please return the product unopened within three days if it has arrived.
(please choose registered mail delivery.)

I will refund the product and the postage after confirmation of the arrival.

元の翻訳
I have just checked the status, and found that it was delivered to a station near your address.

Once you receive it, do not open the package and please return it to me within three days.
(Please return it via registered mail.)

As soon as I receive it, I will refund you the price for the item as well as the shipping fee.

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I have just checked the status, and found that it was delivered to your nearest delivery office.

Once you receive it, do not open the package and please return it to me within three days.
(Please select registered mail to return it.)

As soon as I receive it, I will refund you the price for the item as well as the shipping fee.

元の翻訳
I have already given up and sold my inventory to Amazon and removed several items, and deleted all of the listings.
I no longer have any items that are violating the terms of service.
I will send you the URL for my fixed Amazon seller front.
Please take a look at it.
I have already contacted the Japanese staff at Payoneer.
I promise I will not violate the agreement a second time.
I ask for your kind approval of my request.

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I have already deleted all of the listings excluding some items fulfilled by Amazon.
I no longer have any items that are violating the terms of service.
I will send you the URL for my fixed Amazon seller front.
Please take a look at it.
I have already contacted the Japanese staff at Payoneer.
I promise I will never violate the agreement.
I ask for your kind approval of my request.

元の翻訳
Aside from Payoneer, I am proceeding with a new account at Union Bank in California.

So please suspend your payment until I get a new account at Union Bank or my account at Payoneer is restored.

I would like to ask for your advice. Currently, I cannot receive payment and am in trouble continuing business of sales.

I live in Japan and wonder if you know any other way to send me money.

Your help would be highly appreciated.

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Aside from Payoneer, I am proceeding with a new account at Union Bank in California.

So please suspend your payment until I get a new account at Union Bank or my account at Payoneer is restored.

I would like to ask for your advice. Currently, I cannot receive payment and am in trouble continuing business.

I live in Japan and wonder if you know any other way to send me money.

Your help would be highly appreciated.

元の翻訳
In addition, aside from Payoneer, I am working on arrangement of opening account of Union Bank
in California.

I open account of Union bank newly, but please hold money received before I can use Payoneer again.

I am asking to talk about with you.
Currently receiving money is stopped , and our sales activity is stopped where we are at a loss.

I live in Japan, but if you know other way to send money, please let me know.

I appreciate your cooperation.

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In addition, aside from Payoneer, I am proceeding with opening an account at Union Bank
in California.

I open an account at Union bank, but please hold payment until I can use Payoneer again.

I would like to ask you an advice.
Currently I cannot receive money, and I am at a loss as my store cannot continue business.

I live in Japan, but if you know other ways to send money, please let me know.

I appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Thank you for emailing me regarding my bank account.

Actually, my account at Payoneer has been suspended tentatively. It is because my posting of a toy gun on Amazon.com violated Payoneer's policy.

I have been discussing with Payoneer to solve this issue, hoping to have my account restored.

I will register the account to My Seller Account Information Page as soon as I can use it again.

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Thank you for emailing me regarding my bank account.

Actually, my account at Payoneer has been suspended tentatively. It is because my listing of a toy gun on Amazon.com violated Payoneer's policy.

I have been discussing with Payoneer to solve this issue, hoping to have my account restored.

I will sign in to my Seller Account Information page as soon as I can use it again.

元の翻訳
I really appreciate your patience.
And, if you cannot receive the item by Dec. 30, please let me know.
However, it is really strange that such a big package has been missing.
Because a Christmas is around the corner, the customer support of USPS may be very busy, but please try to inquire them details if you might have spare time.
I am sorry for taking up your time, but thank you for your cooperation.

I have received the information about the item of which order was canceled before shipping, but the refund for that order has not been made yet.
Before the report of shipping, do you debit the payment from the credit card?
Please let me know the details.

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I really appreciate your patience.
And, if you cannot receive the item by Dec. 30, please let me know.
However, it is really strange that such a big package has been missing.
Because a Christmas is around the corner, the customer support at USPS may be very busy, but please try to inquire them about the details if you have time.
I am sorry for taking up your time, but thank you for your cooperation.

I have received from a customer the information about the item of which order was canceled before shipping, but the refund for that order has not been made yet.
Can I understand that before the report of shipping, you don't charge the credit card?
Please let me know the details.

元の翻訳
I appreciate your patience.
Please let me know if the shipment is not delivered by 30th.
I find it puzzling as such a large parcel can be lost.
Given that it is right before Christmas that customer support for USPS must be busy, but if you have time, please contact with them for the details.
I hope you will accept my apologies for putting you through this.

We have been notified by our customer that the refund was never made for the order that was canceled before it was put to the shipment process. Could you confirm that my understanding that the credit card charges are not made until the shipment notice is notified?
Please give me the details.

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I appreciate your patience.
Please let me know if the shipment is not delivered by the 30th.
I find it puzzling that such a large parcel can be lost.
I assume that the customer support for USPS must be busy right before Christmas, but if you have time, please contact them for the details.
I hope you will accept my apologies for the trouble.

We have been notified by our customer that the refund was not made for the order that was canceled before shipment. Could you confirm that the credit card is not charged until the shipment notice is sent?
Please give me the details.

元の翻訳
#william
I appreciate your quick response.
I'd be glad if you can give me the tracking number after you send it.
I will introduce your products to my costumers.

#habit
The return goods have delivered to there on 18th.
Sorry to cause you trouble but please begin the process of refund when you get ready.
Thank you.

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#william
I appreciate your quick response.
I'd be glad if you could give me the tracking number after you send it.
I will introduce your products to my customers.

#habit
The return goods have been delivered to you on the 18th.
Sorry for causing you the trouble but please proceed with a refund when you get ready.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
# william
Thank you for your very quick response.
Please let me know the tracking number after shipping.
I will introduce your goods to customers in Japan.

# habit
The products which is returned arrived there on the 18th.
We apologize for the incovenience.
Thank you for your refund procedure as soon as preparations have been made.

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# william
Thank you for your very quick response.
Please let me know the tracking number after shipping.
I will introduce your goods to customers in Japan.

# habit
The return arrived at your place on the 18th.
We apologize for the incovenience.
Could you please proceed with a refund once it's ready?

元の翻訳
You said the item would become available in 2014, but do you know more detailed schedule? Please tell me when you can ship it.

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You said the item would be in stock in 2014, but do you know more detailed schedule? Please tell me around when you can ship it.