翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: 医学論文の一部です。中ほどの・・・・は、（中略）です。

日本語

剖検例によると、脳・冠動脈に先行して大動脈の硬化性病変が進展するため、大動脈の動脈硬化度を反映するこの検査値は、脳・冠動脈の硬化性病変より早期に変化している可能性が考えられる。またdisease Aにおける原因が頭蓋内血管の動脈硬化性変化であるならば、すでに大血管の動脈硬化がある程度進んでいるはずである。・・・・・高齢になれば、高血圧、高脂血症の発症頻度も高くなり、それに伴ってこの検査値が高くなるが、それが直接本疾患の原因となっているかどうかについては慎重な議論を要する。

英語

From the autopsy cases, the arteriosclerotic lesion of main artery develops proceeding to the brain and the coronary artery so it is considered possible that the laboratory data reflecting the arteriosclerosis is altered earlier than the brain and the atherosclerotic coronary artery lesion.
In addition, if the cause of disease A is resulting from the arteriosclerotic lesion of intracranial vessel, the arteriosclerosis of major blood vessel should have already become advanced at certain degree.・・・・・The more advancing the ages, the higher hyperendemic of the hyperpiesia and the hyperlipidemia, In connection with this, the laboratory data shows the higher value, but it is required the deliberate discussion whether that is the direct root cause of this disease.

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tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/28 17:05:02

元の翻訳
From the autopsy cases, the arteriosclerotic lesion of main artery develops proceeding to the brain and the coronary artery so it is considered possible that the laboratory data reflecting the arteriosclerosis is altered earlier than the brain and the atherosclerotic coronary artery lesion.
In addition, if the cause of disease A is resulting from the arteriosclerotic lesion of intracranial vessel, the arteriosclerosis of major blood vessel should have already become advanced at certain degree.・・・・・The more advancing the ages, the higher hyperendemic of the hyperpiesia and the hyperlipidemia, In connection with this, the laboratory data shows the higher value, but it is required the deliberate discussion whether that is the direct root cause of this disease.

修正後
From the autopsy cases, the arteriosclerotic lesion of main artery develops proceeding to the brain and the coronary artery so it is considered possible that the laboratory data reflecting the arteriosclerosis is altered earlier than the brain and the atherosclerotic coronary artery lesion.
In addition, if the cause of disease A is resulting from the arteriosclerotic lesion of intracranial vessel, the arteriosclerosis of major blood vessel should have already become advanced at certain degree.・・・・・The older the people, the higher the frequency of hyperpiesia and hyperlipidemia. In connection with this, the laboratory data shows the higher value, but it requires a deliberate discussion whether that is the direct root cause of this disease.

少し修正しました。