スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

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バーチャルマシンクラウド---ウィンドウズまたはリナックスのバーチャルマシンを対象としたサービスとしてのインフラ(laaS)を提供するサービス。本サービスは、VMテンプレートギャラリー、スケーリングオプション及びバーチャアルのネットワーク機能を擁します。

サービスバスクラウド---配信済みのアプリケーション間における信頼性の高いメッセージサービスを提供するサービス。本サービスは、行列及びトピック単位の公開及び購読機能を擁する。

SQL及びMySQL---データベースの事例を提供するサービス。本データベースは、ウェブサイトサービスとの共同により使用される。

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バーチャルマシンクラウド---ウィンドウズまたはリナックスのバーチャルマシンを対象としたインフラストラクチャー・アズ・ア・サービス(laaS)を提供するサービス。本サービスは、VMテンプレートギャラリー、スケーリングオプション及びバーチャアルのネットワーク機能を擁します。

サービスバスクラウド---配信済みのアプリケーション間における信頼性の高いメッセージサービスを提供するサービス。本サービスは、行列及びトピック単位の公開及び購読機能を含む。

SQL及びMySQL---データベースの事例を提供するサービス。本データベースは、ウェブサイトサービスとの共同により使用される。

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データベースサーバー

マイクロソフトSQLサーバー2005スタンダードまたはエンタープライズ版サービスパック３(x86またはx64)
または
マイクロソフトSQLサーバー2008スタンダードまたはエンタープライズ(x86またはx64)
または
マイクロソフトSQLサーバー2008R2スタンダードまたはエンタープライズ(x86またはx64)

ＳＱＬサーバー２００８のＲＴＭリリースを使用する場合、デフォルトが定義されていることをご確認ください。定義されていない場合、レポート及びアラートが機能しません。
その理由は、データがコンフィギュレーションマネージャーのサイトのサーバーまで流れないからです。

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データベースサーバー

Microsoft SQL Server 2005 Standard または Enterprise 版サービスパック 3 (x86 または x64)
または
Microsoft SQL Server 2008 Standard または Enterprise (x86 または x64)
または
Microsoft SQL Server 2008 R2 Standard または Enterprise (x86 または x64)

SQL Server 2008 の RTM リリースを使用する場合、デフォルトインスタンスが定義されていることをご確認ください。定義されていない場合、レポート及びアラートが機能しません。
その理由は、データがコンフィギュレーションマネージャーのサイトのサーバーまで流れないからです。

元の翻訳
I want to purchase this rug.
I am going to send it to address in Japan.
Can you send it to Japan?
Hou much is shipping charge?
How many days do we need to send it to Japan?

I also have my work place in Florida in USA.
Please tell me the shipping charge if it is sent to Florida.

How do I pay for shortage of the shipping charge?
If I can, I want to pay it via PayPal.

I saw a picture of the product, and I want to know length at the bottom.
I mean the length at the bottom, which is the length of MANGA.

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I want to purchase this rug.
I am going to send it to an address in Japan.
Can you ship it to Japan?
Hou much is the shipping charge?
How many days would it take to ship to Japan?

I also have my work place in Florida in USA.
Please tell me the shipping charge if it is sent to Florida.

How do I pay for shortage of the shipping charge?
If I can, I want to pay it via PayPal.

I saw a picture of the product, and I want to know length at the bottom.
I mean the length at the lower edge, which is the length of MANGA.

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Have you already sold SELMER that you listed before? I am seriously looking for SELMER, which is in good condition. If it has not been sold yet, could you sell it at 3,500 dollars?

If possible, I can pay via PayPal immediately. Thank you for your cooperation.

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Have you already sold SELMER that you listed before? I am seriously looking for SELMER, which is in good condition. If it has not been sold yet, could you sell it to me for 3,500 dollars?

If possible, I can pay via PayPal immediately. Thank you for your cooperation.

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Do you only need strap and ticket? How about towel?
Then you pay only for 1 ticket. You do not have to pay for 2 ticket for me.
I used the ticket I have, and I don't need a goods.

I am satisfied if I read it once. I am happy if I give it to you.
It is a pity. I wish price of paperbacks went lower.
I tendered a bid of clear file. I will send it with your birthday present this month.
Ok. I will add it to invoice. Thank you for the book. I am looking forward to it.

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Do you only need the strap and the ticket? How about the towel?
Then you pay only for 1 ticket. You do not have to pay for 2 ticket for me.
I used the ticket I have, and I don't need the goods.

I will be satisfied if I read it once, and am happy to give it to you.
It is a pity. I wish the price of paperbacks went lower.
I tendered a bid of clear file. I will send it with your birthday present this month.
Ok. I will add it to the invoice. Thank you for the book. I am looking forward for receiving it.

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I don't know when I can receive reply. It depends on person who lists it.

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I don't know when I can receive the reply. It depends on the seller.

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I am sure that cause of stopping sales is that ASIN:B004TRQP1 was sold at EEA.

As for this product, I have not known that there was this kind of agreement.
I will keep in mind that I do not violate intellectual property right when exhibiting a product.
In the event that it is possible to violate the intellectual property right, I will promptly delete it.

I deleted exhibition of ASIN:B0004TR1.
I will cooperate with you in complying with law.
Please let me know next measure for recovering the account.

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I am sure that the cause of stopping sales is that ASIN:B004TRQP1 was sold at EEA.

As for this product, I have not known that there was this kind of agreement.
I will keep in mind that I do not violate intellectual property rights when listing a product.
In the event that my listing may violate the intellectual property rights, I will promptly delete it.

I deleted the listing of ASIN:B0004TR1.
I will never stop cooperating with you in complying with laws.
Please let me know the next measure for recovering the account.

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It is almost March.

Please inform us if you know exact day of receiving a product.
In addition, we are also going to order 36 next time.
Could you secure the stock for us?

We will be waiting for your reply.

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It is almost March.

Please inform us if you know exact day of receiving the product.
In addition, we are also going to order 36 pcs. next time.
Could you secure the stock for us?

We will be waiting for your reply.

元の翻訳
Don't you feel painful? Feeling hard? I wanted to ask Takuma.
You who are with me

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Don't you feel painful? Feeling hard? It's you, Takuma, whom I wanted to ask.
With me, you are...

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I arranged refunding a few minutes ago.
Please check it.

We were very sorry for you this time.

If you don't mind, would you evaluate to delete assessment?
Thank you.

As for how to delete assessment, you can delete by the same order number.
You will find "assessment of exhibitor in respect with this order", and you can delete at (deletion) at rightmost.

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I proceeded with the refund a few minutes ago.
Could you confirm it?

We were very sorry for you this time.

If you don't mind, would you consider deleting the feedback?
Thank you.

As for how to delete feedback, you can delete by the same order number.
You will find "feedback of exhibitor in respect with this order", and you can delete at (deletion) at rightmost.

元の翻訳
こんにちわ。

貴方の間違った部屋番号へ送付された荷物を、数日前、受領しました。

この荷物は、貴方の口座に残されているかまたは貴国へ返送されたでしょう。

今後、正しい住所及び部屋番号をご記入ください。

４２９９号宛てにこちらへ配達される荷物は遅配され、住所の修正に５ドル請求されます。

詳細な情報または援助が必要な場合、遠慮なくご連絡ください。

エンジェル
個人のお客様担当者

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こんにちは。

当社は、お客様の貸し倉庫宛の住所が間違っている荷物を、最近受領しました。

この荷物は、お客様の倉庫に残されているか、または貴国へ送付されたものと思われます。

今後、正しい住所使っていることを確認すること、また、貸し倉庫番号を確実に記載するよう注意してください。

４２９９番倉庫宛てに配達される全ての荷物は、遅配され、住所の訂正に５ドルが化せられますされます。

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他に詳細な情報。または援助が必要な場合は、遠慮なくご連絡ください。

Angel
Personal Shopper Administrator(個人購入者担当)↵

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I am very sorry that we exhibited the product that violates intellectual property right.
I deleted all the products that were indicated immediately.

I will never exhibit them again.
As for our handling in the future, in checking if there is a product exhibited in relation to intellectual property right, will will handle very strictly by 2 filters by increasing 1.

I hope you understand it.
Can we go back to selling ?
Thank you for your coopertion.

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I am very sorry that we exhibited the product that violates intellectual property right.
I deleted all the products that were indicated immediately.

I will never exhibit them again.
As for our handling in the future, in checking if there is a product exhibited in relation to intellectual property right, will handle very strictly by 2 filters by increasing 1.

I hope you understand it.
Can we go back to selling?
Thank you for your cooperation.

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2. Seller who does not obtain income even if purchasing from Amazon. etc.

3. Seller who sells by contracting with providing company such as manufacturer, etc.

I assume that we should be the seller like 1.
The reason is that it is different from Amazon, and people purchase even if price is high often.

It is because

1. Effort by seller to increase satisfaction of customer
2. Exhibit popular product earlier than others
3. Exhibit relevant products as many as possible
4. Array key word to find not large number of products at ebay but to find our product

Besides 1, you can carry out 2 through 4.

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2. Seller who does not obtain income even if purchasing from Amazon. etc.

3. Seller who sells by contracting with providing company such as manufacturer, etc.

I assume that we should be the seller like 1.
The reason is that it is different from Amazon, and people purchase even if price is high often.

It is because

1. Effort by seller to increase satisfaction of customer
2. Exhibit popular product earlier than others
3. Exhibit relevant products as many as possible
4. Array key word to find not large number of products at eBay but to find our product

Except 1, you can carry out 2 through 4.

元の翻訳
ご注文ありがとうございました。黒色は、現在、２つしかありません。今月末には在庫数はふえるでしょう。この２つを送りましょうか、それとも、在庫が増えた後、一緒に送りましょうか。

米国以外のクレジットカードは取り扱っておりませんので、ペイパルでの支払いにおいて
再注文をお願いします。

今件に発生したご不便に陳謝します。

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ご注文ありがとうございます。黒色は、現在、２つしかありません。二月末には在庫数は増えるでしょう。この２つを今送りましょうか、それとも、在庫が増えた後、一緒に送りましょうか？

米国以外のクレジットカードは取り扱っておりませんので、ペイパルでの支払いにおいて
再注文をお願いします。

今件において発生したご不便を陳謝します。

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To person who is in charge

I asked you to send the products by dividing into 3 in last e-mail, but
you can them together as we usually do.
I am sorry to give you much work.
I am looking forward to purchasing next time and arrival of the products.

How many products should we purchase the same product that you can give us ○○ percent discount?
If possible, we will purchase it continuously.

We want to purchase it at low price.For this purpose, we will purchase by lump-sum.
Is it possible if we purchase this product from you at ○○dollars?

I am not good at English.
I hope that I can make my message across you where you do not misunderstand me.

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To whom it may concern

I asked you to send the products by dividing them into 3 in last e-mail, but
you put them together in one box as we usually do.
I am sorry to give you much work.
I am looking forward to purchasing next time and arrival of the products.

How many products should we purchase the same product that you can give us ○○ percent discount?
If possible, we will purchase it continuously.

We want to purchase it at low price.For this purpose, we will purchase by lump-sum.
Is it possible if we purchase this product from you at ○○dollars?

I am not good at English.
I hope that I can get my message across so that there won't be any miscommunication between us.

元の翻訳
贈り物は、日本で働いているガールフレンド宛てです。その住所へ、近々、私が転居するので、米国内の私の住所は有効です。この送り物を東京の住所へ送れるか否かをお知らせください。

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贈り物は、日本で働いているガールフレンド宛てです。その住所へ、近々、私が転居するので、米国内の私の住所では都合が悪いです。この送り物を東京の住所へ送れるか否かをお知らせください。

元の翻訳
贈り物は、日本で働いているガールフレンド宛てです。その住所へ、近々、私が転居するので、米国内の私の住所は有効です。この送り物を東京の住所へ送れるか否かをお知らせください。

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贈り物は、日本で働いているガールフレンド宛てです。その住所へ、近々、私がそちらへ転居するので、米国内の私の住所は使用できなくなります。この送り物を東京の住所へ送れるか否かをお知らせください。

元の翻訳
分かりました。高い方の値段をお支払いしますので、注文を進めてください。

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おっと合点承知の輔。それでは貴方の提示価格で注文いたします。

元の翻訳
分かりました。高い方の値段をお支払いしますので、注文を進めてください。

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分かりました。(変更された)高い方の値段でお支払いしますので、注文の処理を進めてください。

元の翻訳
配達についての問合せをいただいておりません。
当方の要請を真剣に対処してください。
お気軽に当方へ返金してください。

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配達についての問合せをいただいておりません。
当方の要請について、もっとまともに対応していただきたいと思います。
てっとり早く当方へ返金ということにしていただいてもかまいません。