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元の翻訳
この時計を検査して、別の時計を送っていただけませんか。
この時計を気に入っているのですが、毎日、１２時に止まります。
返金しか方法がないのであれば、そうしますが、
この時計にほれ込んでいます。

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この時計を検査するか、別の時計を送っていただけませんか。
この時計を気に入っているのですが、毎日、１２時に止まります。
返金しか方法がないのであれば、そうしますが、
この時計にほれ込んでいます。

元の翻訳
Dear A
From now, we will list that it is an item that was not sold and is ready for being disposed in English for the order from foreign countries. As you gave a useful advice to us, we will provide some kind of service if you have an opportunity to order to our store after the next time. We apologize for having made you uncomfortable this time. If you forgive us, could you consider reviewing our store again? We keep our fingers crossed that we can maintain a long relationship with you.

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Dear A
From now, we will list that it is an item that was not sold and is ready for being disposed in English for the order from foreign countries. As you gave a useful advice to us, we will provide some kinds of service if you have an opportunity to order to our store after the next time. We apologize for having made you uncomfortable this time. If you forgive us, could you consider reviewing our store again? We keep our fingers crossed that we can maintain a long relationship with you.

元の翻訳
貴方ができること

個人及び商用のプロジェクトに音を使用。
多数のプロジェクトに音を使用。
自己または顧客の代理として音を使用。
プロジェクトファイル及び他社がアクセスできるコードへ音をアップロード及び組み込む。
貴方のプロジェクトに適合するよう音を変調。。

貴方ができないこと

自分で音を転売、サブライセンス、再梱包及び配信。
周囲に人がいない場合、友人へ音を付与。
一跳びで高層建築物を飛び越える。

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貴方ができること

個人及び商用のプロジェクトに音を使用。
多数のプロジェクトに音を使用。
自己または顧客の代理として音を使用。
プロジェクトファイル及び他社がアクセスできるコードへ音をアップロード及び組み込む。
貴方のプロジェクトに適合するよう音を変調。

貴方ができないこと

自分で音を転売、サブライセンス、再梱包及び配信。
周囲に人がいない場合、友人へ音を付与。
一跳びで高層建築物を飛び越える。

元の翻訳
As we attach the document regarding the sales right that President Ota gave to us before, could you check it?
We are extremely damaged as the account was closed due to this problem.
We know that it takes time for the above opinion.
However, as we promise that we stop the sales for the items of Magic Eyes until the opinion of Amazon
is clarified, could you consider restoring the sales right?

We hope that it is solved as soon as possible.

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As we attach the document regarding the sales right that President Ota gave to us before, could you check it?
We are extremely damaged as the account was closed due to this problem.
We know that it takes time for the above opinion.
However, as we promise that we stop the sales for the items of Magic Eyes until the opinion of Amazon
is clarified, could you consider restoring the sales privilege?

We hope that it is solved as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
I would like to confirm the fact about the problem this time.
I have been warned that I have violated the intellectual property right several time.
They said that all that I violated were the brand M, which has been manufactured by T.
First of all, we would like you to understand that we are the seller who has obtained an official permission of sales from T.
Then I am going to express our opinions.
The first warning was as follows.
Regarding the above problem, we tell you that we have been selling by obtaining the official permission
of the sales from the president of T, and thereby we were given an opportunity to sell by you again.

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I would like to confirm the fact about the problem this time.
I have been warned that I have violated the intellectual property right several times.
They said that all that I violated were the brand M, which has been manufactured by T.
First of all, we would like you to understand that we are the seller who has obtained an official permission of sales from T.
Then I am going to express our opinions.
The first warning was as follows.
Regarding the above problem, we tell you that we have been selling by obtaining the official permission
of the sales from the president of T, and thereby we were given an opportunity to sell by you again.

元の翻訳
I would like you to ship this item as soon as possible.
The manufacturer said that if more than 100 pieces of the item are ordered,
they are going to discount them.
We order the item that we selected in the catalog.
A person in charge permitted to sell the extra large size by discounting.
As we would like to sell this item in spring and summer,
could you tell us when you can deliver it?
If we have not problem at the delivery period after checking the period,
we will order it officially.
As we are going to apply for postponing the period to use the warehouse,
may we know when we receive the item?

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I would like you to ship this item as soon as possible.
The manufacturer said that if more than 100 pieces of the item are ordered,
they are going to discount them.
We order the item that we selected in the catalog.
A person in charge permitted to sell the extra large size by discounting.
As we would like to sell this item in spring and summer,
could you tell us when you can deliver it?
If we have not problem at the delivery period after checking the period,
we will order it officially.
As we are going to apply for extending the period to use the warehouse,
may we know when we receive the item?

元の翻訳
残念なことをお伝えしなければなりません。しかし、出荷する前は、

詳細にチェックしたところ、スチッチに不具合があり、取り替えが必要です。

返金できます。
本件によりご不快を感じませんよう願っております。
正当な対応をしたいので、不具合が発生した製品は販売しません。

修正後
残念なことをお伝えしなければなりません。しかし、出荷する前に、

詳細にチェックしたところ、スチッチに不具合があり、取り替えが必要です。

返金させていただきます。
お詫び申し上げると同時に本件によりご不快を感じませんよう願っております。
不具合が発生した製品は販売するのではなく、正当な対応をさせていただきたく。

元の翻訳
On the website, it says "the price of a jacket is 85 to 90 dollars".
Do we have to purchase it in large volume?
We regret to say, but we cannot make a profit by 190 dollars.
Could you make it a little lower?
Do you sell the jacket and the suit in the attached file?

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On the website, it says "the price of a jacket is 85 to 90 dollars".
Do we have to purchase it in a large volume?
We regret to say, but we cannot make a profit by 190 dollars.
Could you make it a little lower?
Do you sell the jacket and the suit in the attached file?

元の翻訳
House Party： Request No. 5983-72
Gimme U： Request No. 5983-69
You can keep up with me： Request No. 5983-76
PIECE IN THE PUZZLE： Request No. 5983-73
Fake Tongue： Request No. 5983-74
Sometimes Dreams Come True： Request No. 5983-70
LIFE so GOOD!!： Request No. 5983-78

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House Party : Request No. 5983-72
Gimme U : Request No. 5983-69
You can keep up with me : Request No. 5983-76
PIECE IN THE PUZZLE : Request No. 5983-73
Fake Tongue : Request No. 5983-74
Sometimes Dreams Come True : Request No. 5983-70
LIFE so GOOD!! : Request No. 5983-78

元の翻訳
1. It is the first time that it took such a long time until you received the item. I apologize for having caused you an inconvenience. I appreciate that you reported the arrival of the item and attached the positive feedback.
I am looking forward to carrying out the business with you again.

2. I apologize for having caused you an inconvenience. As I refunded to you, could you check it? When you receive the item, would you please make a payment again?

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1. It is the first time that it took such a long time until you received the item. I apologize for having caused you an inconvenience. I appreciate that you reported the arrival of the item and left the positive feedback.
I am looking forward to carrying out the business with you again.

2. I apologize for having caused you an inconvenience. As I refunded to you, could you check it? When you receive the item, would you please make a payment again?

元の翻訳
コンテナへの発注後、署名のため、独占契約を送付します。本契約において、注文が合意され、コンテナ数が１年目は２台、２年目は３台である限り、毎年、貴社へ独占的な販売権が付与されます。

次の２ヶ月間独占権を有すると称するフレーズをレターヘッドへ記載したいですか。そうであれば、コンテナへの最初の発注後、無制限へ変更可能です。

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コンテナでの注文をいただいた後、ご署名いただく独占契約書をお送りできます。本契約では、合意したとおりに１年目はコンテナ２台分、２年目は３台分の注文がいただける限り、毎年、貴社へ独占販売権が付与されます。

ご希望であれば、貴社が今後２ヶ月間の独占販売権を有する旨を我が社のレターヘッド（住所・社名入り便せん）に記載しますが、いかがですか。その後、最初のコンテナでの注文をいただけたら、その文言を無制限へ通年・永久に変更可能です。

元の翻訳
返信の遅れにお詫び申し上げます。

ご存知かもしれませんが、米国西海岸の港湾において昨春より労働争議が発生しており、これにより大規模な在庫問題が発生しました。本争議は、最近、収束しましたが、未だ、他の多くの問題に取り組んでおります。十分な在庫の未確保に先立ち、港湾に係留する多数のコンテナを迅速に弊倉庫へ搬入しなければなりません。

貴社が注文した１００個の枕の市場開拓のため短期間の独占を提供できますが、本独占を数ヶ月以上を要請するのであれば、最初のコンテナへ注文の品を積み込むまで独占を発行できません。

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返信の遅れにお詫び申し上げます。

ご存知かもしれませんが、米国西海岸の港湾において昨春より労働争議が発生しており、これにより大規模な在庫問題が発生しました。本争議は、最近、収束しましたが、未だ、他の多くの問題に取り組んでおります。以前は十分な在庫を確保できませんでしたが、現在は港に多数のコンテナがあり、それを迅速に弊倉庫へ搬入しなければなりません。

注文された１００個の枕で貴社がさらに市場開拓されるのに、短期間の独占販売権を提供できますが、2、3ヶ月以上の独占販売権を要請されるのであれば、最初のコンテナ分の注文をいただかない限り、独占販売権は発行できません。

元の翻訳
Regarding the hood, I do not have it. In the page of the item, it lists "only the rear cap". I seem to have checked the "hood" in the column of the item that is enclosed together when creating the page of listing the items by mistake. I apologize to have caused you an inconvenience due to my mistake.
I would like to prepare and send it to you, but as it is a very old lens hood, I might not be able to find it. Would you wait for 1 week? If I cannot find it after searching for 1 week, I would like to refund you 20 dollars. What do you think about it? I am looking forward to your reply.

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Regarding the hood, I do not have it. On the item page, it says "only the rear cap". I seem to have checked the "hood" in the column of items to be enclosed together when creating the item page by mistake. I apologize for having caused you the inconvenience due to my mistake.
I would like to obtain it and send it to you, but as it is a very old lens hood, I might not be able to find it. Would you wait for 1 week? If I cannot find it after searching for 1 week, I would like to refund you 20 dollars. What do you think about it? I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Good day.
I received an e-mail from you, and checked the
status of the shipment.
I have to apologize to you.
I checked, and found that the item remains here.
I made a mistake that I have not done so far.
I have purchased several beats that are the same as the one
I gave to you this time since the end of last year, and I was confused.
I still have the item with me, and please do not worry.
I will send it to you this evening.

I will send you an e-mail again after sending it to you.
I apologize to you for having made a mistake
that I should not have done.
I apologize again.

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Good day.
I received an e-mail from you, and checked the
status of the shipment.
I have to apologize to you.
I checked it, and found out that the item remains here.
I made a mistake that I have not done so far.
I have purchased several beats that are the same as the one
I sold to you this time since the end of last year, and I was confused.
I still have the item with me, and please do not worry.
I will send it to you this evening immediately.

I will send you an e-mail again after sending it to you.
I apologize to you for having made an believable mistake
that I should not have done.
I apologize again.

元の翻訳
We inquire the post office, and they said that it took more than 1 month to check the item.
Could you select 1 among the following 3?

1. We send the item to your new address.
However, in UK, you might be asked by the post office to pay 20 percent
VAT when you receive it.

2.We send it to your current address by EMS again. (You will receive it
in 5 days.)
If you do not receive it until the day you move, we will refund you in full amount.

3. We issue a refund to you immediately.

I recommend 2.

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We inquired the post office, and they said that it took more than 1 month to check the item.
Could you select 1 among the following 3?

1. We send the item to your new address.
However, in UK, you might be asked by the post office to pay 20 percent
VAT when you receive it.

2.We send it to your current address by EMS again. (You will receive it
in 5 days.)
If you do not receive it until the day you move, we will refund you in full amount.

3. We issue a refund to you immediately.

I recommend 2.

元の翻訳
I cannot use Forex Robot, and am in the inconvenience.

Good day.
I am xx , and purchased the Forex Robot.
When I booted up MT 4 again, an error message of the picture I attached was showed and the chart was closed.
I set up the chart and EA again. Then the same error message was showed, and the chart was closed.
I appreciate your immediate support.

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I cannot use Forex Robot, and am in trouble.

Good day.
I am xx , and purchased the Forex Robot.
When I rebooted MT 4, an error message appeared as shown in the picture I attached and the chart was closed.
I set up the chart and EA again, but the same error message was shown, and the chart was closed.
I appreciate your immediate support.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
Regarding the item that you purchased this time, we sold the last inventory and we could not
obtain the inventory.
We inquired the manufacturer and found that it is going to be manufactured again in May next time.
We hate to say, but we will sell it after May next time.
So we would like to cancel this order. May we ask you agree to it?

We found a store where this item is sold.
URL
We apologize that we could not satisfy your request this time.

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Thank you for contacting us.
Regarding the item that you purchased this time, we sold the last inventory and we could not
obtain the inventory.
We inquired the manufacturer and found that it is going to be manufactured again in May next time.
We hate to say, but we will sell it after May next time.
So we would like to cancel this order. May we ask you to agree to it?

We found a store where this item is sold.
URL
We apologize that we could not satisfy your request this time.

元の翻訳
May 1st (Friday) Nihon Budokan Best Western Tokyo Nishi-Kassai/Best Western Yokohama

May 2nd (Saturday) Nihon Budokan Best Western Tokyo Nishi-Kassai/Best Western Yokohama

May 23rd (Saturday) Nihon Gaishi Hall Best Western Hotel Nagoya
May 24th (Sunday) Nihon Gaishi Hall Best Western Hotel Nagoya

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May 1st (Friday) Nippon Budokan Best Western Tokyo Nishikasai/Best Western Yokohama

May 2nd (Saturday) Nippon Budokan Best Western Tokyo Nishikasai/Best Western Yokohama

May 23rd (Saturday) Nippon Gaishi Hall Best Western Hotel Nagoya
May 24th (Sunday) Nippon Gaishi Hall Best Western Hotel Nagoya

元の翻訳
We decided to sell the 2nd style book "made in C" by AAA on April 17th (Friday).
We decided to sell the 2nd style book "made in C" by AAA on April 17th (Friday).

By following the style book "CHIAKI TYPE A to Z" by AAA that has been highly popular, we decided to release the 2nd "made in C".

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The 2nd style book "made in C" by AAA will be on sale on April 17th (Friday)!
The 2nd style book "made in C" by AAA will be on sale on April 17th (Friday)!

By following the style book "CHIAKI TYPE A to Z" by AAA that has been highly popular, we decided to release the 2nd "made in C".

元の翻訳
FM NORTH WAVE"GROOVIN' MODE"

16:00～18:55 on March 12th (Thursday)
KUMI KODA is going to be in FM NORTH WAVE "GROOVIN' MODE" by telephone.

:The details of the program is subject to change. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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FM NORTH WAVE"GROOVIN' MODE"

16:00～18:55 on March 12th (Thursday)
KUMI KODA is going to appear in FM NORTH WAVE "GROOVIN' MODE" by telephone.

:The details of the program is subject to change. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

元の翻訳
The post office in Japan checked the delivery status of the item.
It is being delivered without any problem.
We cannot track in some states in the States.
*The system is being improved.

The international mail is delayed due to the weather.
Usually it arrives in a month, but it is behind schedule for 2 to 3 weeks.

We hate to cause you an inconvenience, but may we ask you to
be patient for a little while as we have requested the post office in
the States to track it.

We apologize to have caused you an inconvenience as
you have not received the item for some reasons.
However, as we work on it until the last moment, please do not worry.

修正後
The post office in Japan checked the delivery status of the item.
It is being delivered without any problem.
We cannot track it in some states in the States.
*The system is being improved.

The international mail is delayed due to the weather.
Usually it arrives in a month, but it is behind schedule for 2 to 3 weeks.

We hate to cause you an inconvenience, but may we ask you to
be patient for a little while as we have requested the post office in
the States to track it.

We apologize to have caused you an inconvenience as
you have not received the item for some reasons.
However, as we work on it until the last moment, please do not worry.