翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2015/03/13 10:59:36

sujiko
sujiko 50 IT、金融などを中心として社内翻訳者を数年経験後、フリーランス翻訳者として...
日本語

ウェブサイトではジャケットの値段が1着85~90ドルと書かれていますが、大量購入が条件でしょうか?
残念ながら190ドルでは当方の採算が合いません。もう少し安くなりませんか?
添付ファイルのジャケット及びスーツは販売できますか?

英語

On the website, it says "the price of a jacket is 85 to 90 dollars".
Do we have to purchase it in large volume?
We regret to say, but we cannot make a profit by 190 dollars.
Could you make it a little lower?
Do you sell the jacket and the suit in the attached file?

レビュー ( 1 )

yxn667 52 Conyacでの翻訳経歴(2014年10月登録): Standard依頼...
yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/03/16 11:33:59

元の翻訳
On the website, it says "the price of a jacket is 85 to 90 dollars".
Do we have to purchase it in large volume?
We regret to say, but we cannot make a profit by 190 dollars.
Could you make it a little lower?
Do you sell the jacket and the suit in the attached file?

修正後
On the website, it says "the price of a jacket is 85 to 90 dollars".
Do we have to purchase it in a large volume?
We regret to say, but we cannot make a profit by 190 dollars.
Could you make it a little lower?
Do you sell the jacket and the suit in the attached file?

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