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Thank you for your e-mail.
Yes, thank you.
Please contact me once the C28 glass panel is delivered and received, as I would like to buy 2 units of it.
I am looking forward to hearing from you, thank you.

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Thank you for your e-mail.
Yes, please.
Please contact me once the C28 glass panels are arrived, as I would like to buy 2 units of it.
I await.

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GOOD ROCKS! March 18 released issue carries the interview!

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GOOD ROCKS! March 18 release issue carries the interview!

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FM OKINAWA "INFO MUSIC"

March 24（TUE）22:55 - 23:00
FM OKINAWA "INFO MUSIC"

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FM OKINAWA "INFO MUSIC"

March 24 (TUE) 22:55 - 23:00
FM OKINAWA "INFO MUSIC"

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FM FUKUOKA「Hyper Night Program GOW !!」

FM FUKUOKA「Hyper Night Program GOW !!」
March 19（Thursday）16:00 - 20:00

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FM FUKUOKA "Hyper Night Program GOW !!"

FM FUKUOKA "Hyper Night Program GOW !!"
March 19 (Thursday) 16:00 - 20:00

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"First-released Luxury Privilege Edition"
■ "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" compatible weapons download serial number
■ Kanonno Grass Valley mobile phone wallpaper standby flash and ringtone download serial number
■ Kanonno Grass Valley sticker enclosed

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"Luxury Limited Edition"
■ "TALES OF THE WORLD Radiant Mythology 3" compatible weapons download serial number
■ Kanonno Grass Valley mobile phone wallpaper standby flash and ringtone download serial number
■ Kanonno Grass Valley sticker enclosed

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HFM「MUSIC VOICE」

March 3（Tue）16:55 - 17:00
HFM「MUSIC VOICE」

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HFM「MUSIC VOICE」

March 3（Tue）16:55 - 17:00
HFM「MUSIC VOICE」

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Fm yokohama「tre-sen」

March 3（Tue）19:00 - 22:00
Fm yokohama「tre-sen」

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Fm yokohama「tre-sen」

March 3（Tue）19:00 - 22:00
Fm yokohama「tre-sen」

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Fm yokohama「E-ne! ～good for you～」


March 3（Tue）12:00 - 16:00
Fm yokohama「E-ne! ～good for you～」

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Fm yokohama「E-ne! ～good for you～」


March 3（Tue）12:00 - 16:00
Fm yokohama「E-ne! ～good for you～」

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(Recommended System Requirements)
Smart phone OS：iOS6 or later, Android2.2 or later
Computer OS：Windows Vista, Windows 7 and Macintosh OS10.4 or later
※ Please visit http://sp-m.mu-mo.net/pub/supportPhone/ for supported devices list.

(Download Method)
1. Access the download site by logging on to http://mu-ca.net/ (Alternatively, direct access from QR Code).
2. Please enter the product registration PIN code.

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(Recommended System Requirements)
Smart phone OS：iOS6 or later, Android2.2 or later
PC OS：Windows Vista, Windows 7 and Macintosh OS10.4 or later
※ Please visit http://sp-m.mu-mo.net/pub/supportPhone/ for the list of supported devices.

(Download Method)
1. Access the download site by entering the following address; http://mu-ca.net/ (Alternatively, direct access from QR Code).
2. Please enter the PIN code printed on the product.

元の翻訳
Please kindly issue the refund for the cancellation of order that made through Paypal on 6 of January, 2015.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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Please kindly refund for the cancellation of order that made through Paypal on 6 of January, 2015.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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请在每一间商店的指定地方，展示您的机票票根。

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请在各店指定的地方，出示乘车票的票根。